| "The Source Of All Things" Reviews/Comments [ 130 ] |
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 20, 2003 19:49 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Dou pleading? Oh this I got to read. Update soon and keep up the great job.
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Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: The Firefaery [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2003 19:22 EDT
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Woah...me confused...v.v Shinigami and Duo, Duo and Shinigami @_@ You *are* going to explain this, right?? Right!?? lol ^_~ The whole Heero bit is confusing me, too, but I guess that's to be expected when you're only on your second chapter, yeah? Hope to see more, soon ^The Firefaery^
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Reviewed By: The Firefaery [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2003 15:42 EDT
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Ohh...me likes. Very interesting so far. I'm just waiting for Duo and Wu Fei, now. I really enjoyed the first chapter, especially when Heero walked in on them. ^_^V lol fun stuff, right? ^The Firefaery^
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2003 15:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Well, this is certainly an interesting story, so far. I'm really liking Trowa's POV, his view of sex & Quatre is very fun.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 19, 2003 12:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh! Cool! I like this chapter. I can't wait to read more. I'm curious about who was the God that Trowa slept with in his youth? Will it be mentioned again in the series? If so which of the Gumdam characters was it? Ok maybe I'm reading way too much into this. But I guess you can tell that I'm looking forward to the next update. Keep up the good job.
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