| "The Source Of All Things" Reviews/Comments [ 129 ] |
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Title: Ch 36-37
Reviewed By: Ice-is Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 14:58 CST
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Gah... I can see why the planning would take a while. So many little threads to connect. I'm glad you invested the time into getting it right. :D Also... you've done a beautiful job with Quatre's PoV. I can only imagine how difficult it is to expunge emotional thought and keep Quatre focused... all while acknowledging that a part of Quatre is fighting the logic of Zero. Pretty, pretty, pretty. I'm so excited to read more!
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Title: Part two
Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 14:49 CST
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I was right, wasn't I? She is Trowa's former god-lover, hehehe, I'M A PSYCHIC!!!! Mmmuuhahahhahahahahahaa, erm, hehhehee this chapter was cool but I feel very sorry for Quatre. Not only because he is loosing his personality to Zero but because of the headaches it is giving him. And did they really expect the source to talk plain speak to them? Mythical beings never speak plainly. Lol, I hope S survives his night with the Anima-goddess. It is wonderful that you have solved the problems and that there will be more chapters soon. I LOVE THIS FIC!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 15:52 CST
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Tar and feathers? No, no, don't worry. It's more like chains and a whip to make you write faster, hehehhee. Hmm Trowa mentioned that he, in his youth, had sex with a god. It wasn't this god, was it?
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Reviewed By: priscel-- On: November 28, 2004 23:16 CST
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"Imp glowered at the Dragon from its new position, and then started making faces again,..." *snickers* the imp is very childish and reflects some of Duo's behavior. Man Salve (sp?) is a crazy ol'lady. Can't wait for uodate!
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Reviewed By: Baran On: November 21, 2004 05:03 CST
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It's great. I had a lot of fun reading it. wat ever you do PLEASE don't abandon it.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 14, 2004 22:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon! I can't get enough of this fic! Keep up the awesome job!
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Reviewed By: DirtyD On: November 13, 2004 21:29 CST
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Awwwe, isn't the love Wufei and Duo share so sweet? They sound like they are married already. Enough of that, boy this is slow in coming! How many chapters to the end this time? 70? That's my guess. Decent work as always, this is so enjoyable to read, I adore it.
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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 02:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, that was fantastic. I loved the part with Duo standing in front of Wufei, poking him with his finger and then going all: Wait a moment, what did that ugly brute say again? And then within second, bam, not breaking a sweat, winning the duel. Oh, I so do love Duo in this fic. And the parts when he and Wufei gang up together against Svale, I love it. I think, once he and Wufei will start being lovers, the sex is going to be very explosive, hehehe. Who will be on top and who will be bottom? I bet they will fight about that everytime, lol. If there is anything I can do to help your inspiration with this fic, let me know. I could offer you cookies... I make good cookies.. Really, very good cookies.
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 23:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So they win the fight and get the prize. And Wufei & Duo are slowly developing their "relationship" while Heero watches in confusion.
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Reviewed By: Yanagi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2004 19:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally got to the last posted chapter after two nights of reading. wow. I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm not much for threats of bodily harm. How bout bribes, do they work?
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Reviewed By: Bane's Desire On: October 28, 2004 15:25 CDT
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Excellent chapter and cliff hanger. Looking forward the to other half.
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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2004 15:05 CDT
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You know that I love this story, don't you? Wufei is thinking about someone else pain, Duo's, that is good. Makes him more human, erm, sorry, Wufei, hehehe. Hmm, so mecha-dragon is going to meet a mythical-dragon, hehe oh the irony of that.. hehelol. And there will be a big fight in the next chapter? Ha, who is going to fight against who? It is out of question that they will win, or is Svale going to steal the atrefact while Duo, Wufei and Heero keep the dragon busy?
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2004 13:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Happiness! A little bit of fairy tale to whack poor Wufei in the head (literally). So what exactly is the test? Why do they need two people?
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Reviewed By: D.R On: October 23, 2004 13:40 CDT
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if you ask me ,it's one of you best works. keep it up.
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Reviewed By: DirtyD Momma Cat On: October 22, 2004 18:36 CDT
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I loved 'The Arrangement' so much I went around and started reading your other stories. I'd seen this many times before but held reservations about the story summary. I'm glad I held out so long though. All those cliff hangers would have made me want to exact bodily harm to your person! Now that I've read this I'm pleased with what you did. Again you've made a long road to the path of romance but I like that immeansely. You just don't thrust them into a relationship and beyond OOC actions. This is a great fantasy AU with a fantastic plot. So engrossing, I had to read it all in three days! Love your writing, so unrushed and thought out. Tell me though, I had this idea that Heero was infact born from Centre as a weapon of defense against Juusan. Am I correct? Or even close? My favorite part is still the beginning. Where Trowa found Heero naked after climbing up a mountain even though the bridge was nearby. "Errr Heero don't go that way, the bridge is much easier."
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