| "The Source Of All Things" Reviews/Comments [ 129 ] |
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Reviewed By: DirtyD On: March 08, 2005 22:53 CST
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It has been a while. To tell you the truth I hardly even noticed, Freeport took up ALL of my attention. It's nice to get back to this though, I didn't even realize how much I miss Heero until today. Him and his need to analyze everything. Someone needs to give him a clue, throw him a bone. Something for his poor uncultivated mind. So delicious, your stories fill me up when few other things do. I'll be looking out for more.
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 17:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Heero's POV is logical thought process that is confused by those irritating carbon lifeforms is just so fun. I like how you worked in the Orb of Ophed further into the story.
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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 13:31 CST
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When Heero was hoping for some explosion to take the tension between Wufei and Duo away, I really was hoping that they were going to fuck each other like the horny little bunnies they are. But it looks as if I have to wait a while longer for that to happen. Though I have the feeling that Quatre noticed something has happened between them. Maybe he can use Zero to push them a little faster into the right direction, preferably a soft bed. And about that romantic aspect, I do have a problem seeing Heero or Wufei suddenly starting to recite poem about the beauty of love and Duo's eyes. Or waking him with flowers and breakfast in bed. Or singing under his window. And I don't have any further comment for the ending of this chapter. Duo banging his head on the table doesn't need to be commented. hehehhehe. By they way, what can I do to "help" you write faster? I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: asukakureru On: March 08, 2005 06:30 CST
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heaps of carbon! XD ohh, i just love the way heero thinks. he's so -- so -- eeeeeee. *cuddlesquish* "We'll slow him down dead." = RAWRRR. Wufei's so intense. so sexy. *loves on* The fight scene was good, as always (aren't you tired of writing great fight scenes? The tension/flirting/hating between Duo and Wufei = OMG SEXY. I love that sort of angry attraction. rawrrr. Howard and Svale crack me up. XD
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Reviewed By: Ryoko3600 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 22:19 CST
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Good Chapter!!
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Reviewed By: RandomChickie On: February 27, 2005 05:39 CST
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This is wonderfully well written! It's hard to find fics that actually use grammar and spell check nowadays. One question though: Is it the fact that Q's from a tribe that specializes in math and stragety that he can control Zero at all?
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Reviewed By: yuu_sprite On: January 24, 2005 20:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It had been a long time since I read a story with such intricacies in plot and story line let alone a fanfic. This is well thought out and it doesn't drag on like many stories with a lot of details. Oh... and when is Duo and Wufei going to shack up? =P P.S. I'm a bug Wufei fan
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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 05:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a great solution and Trowa managed to suprise Zero, hehhee, that was fun. Even though all that talk about chakras left me a bit puzzled. And I enjoyed that lime bit with Trowa and Quatre. But when is Duo going to have some fun???? Hopefully not until after they defeated Juusan and his ghosts go to rest.
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Reviewed By: Harmony Glory On: January 15, 2005 11:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a wonderful chapter, so full of detail and amazing writing. The complexity of it all blew me away, leaving me awed by the fact that it was written in a way that I could actually understand and follow. And yes, it does seem as if you hadn't written a lemon in while, so I was very grateful for this very naughty and unique lime. I'm so relieved that Quatre and Trowa remained together, that they shared one another in 'every' way possible. Thank you so much for the wonderful chapter, and for finally clearing things up between my fav couple. Good luck with the next chapter!
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Title: Source Ch. 39
Reviewed By: Kagero13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 11:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing. I just can't wrap my brain around the fact that the same author is is not only doing Freeport and The Source at the same time, but doing a damn fine job. Those fics are so completely different, and intricate, (and fantastic) how the hell do you do that? Never mind, just keep doing it please. And thank you very much for the lime this past chapter, your devoted hentai readers (me in particular) appreciate the lovin'.
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Title: ch 39
Reviewed By: Ice-is Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 03:39 CST
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Chakra!Sex. ^___^ Can't say I've ever seen that done before in a fic. I loved the writing and I loved that Quatre's humanity is as well-defined as his entanglement with Zero. Trowa's (re)actions seemed genuine and I liked that Quatre was -seeing- Trowa anew as he guided Trowa to see him. An intwinement of souls... so beautifu. And Zero is conducting calculations on 'Love'? That.... I think might be important? (or at the very least funny... what with some of Zero's other calculated percentages this chapter) I like that they didn't just smile at each other and then everything was miraculously okay. Hard truths had to be faced, and I think they were. (And now I must sleep, for I've been running on about 5 hours a night for the past week and now I'm dead.)
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 20:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can I just point out that Ch 39 has pushed your incorporation of Zero into Quatre to a brilliant new level. Do you intend to give Zero to Heero, once he's mature enough to handle it?
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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 12:04 CST
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whoever you are going to pair Duo with, I think he deserves a little more progress in that direction. His feelings of lonelyness are so sharp and hurting that is always makes me sad when he realises that he is alone. And I hope that the next chapter is about Quatre and Trowa and that they stay together. It would break Trowa's heart if Quatre would leave him. Hopefully Quatre get's rid of Zero at the end of this fic. Or maybe sooner.
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Title: Ch 38
Reviewed By: Ice-is Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 02:50 CST
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'Tis a lovely spot to stop. Lovely job of interweaving the 2+5. Loved this line: Wufei was a good tactician, a dedicated warrior, a fanatic for his revenge, but what he still liked to do best was hit somebody... And Captain Obvious would state that we're in store for some 3+4 when the story continues. Yay on all counts!
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 17:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Whoa! Reading about Quatre's thought-processes while on Zero is seriously trippy. I'm amazed at how well you're able to write something so confusing.
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