| "The Source Of All Things" Reviews/Comments [ 129 ] |
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2004 20:35 CDT
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EPPPPA!! And it was just getting good!!! Man now i'm antsy for the next chapter. keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2004 17:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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More insight into Heero, but still totally clueless of what he is. The little interlude while Svale flirted w/ Wufei & when Duo should up was certainly amusing. Now, I wonder how the battle will go. Please update soon!
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Title: The plot thickens...
Reviewed By: StarStruck [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2004 13:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dundunduuuuun. So the disgruntled dragon finally shows up...I love his sense of justice and his conversations with Jusan in his head. Especially the part about Wufei dragging Heero out of the circle and nursing him back to health himself in order to fight him. ^_- I also love your characterizations of EVERYONE. I'm in love with strong, yet clueless Heero, Duo kicks ass, Wufei makes me want to hug him, Zechs is growing on me, and Svale is one of my favorite non-GW characters. You rock. ^^ So Heero knows he has a certain mission...I wish I was clued into the secret. I guess I can wait in suspense if it means I have another chapter to look forward to. ^____^ When this story is complete I'm going to have conflicting emotions of happiness and sadness. ;_;
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Title: *___*
Reviewed By: LithiumStar On: May 06, 2004 12:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
::worships you:: This is one of my all-time favorite fanfics EVER. You write such creative stories, with plot lines that are nothing like any other story I have ever read. Where do you come up with this stuff?? ^_^ I can't wait to find out the secret behind Heero and his mission. Anxiously waiting for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: ep-chan On: May 04, 2004 15:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is sooo good!!! when will you be updating? Will heero and duo be getting together? Will that Ja-guy capture duo and make him his love slave? or better yet he can make him my love slave (drools). :D ... can't wait for next Chap!
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Title: melaniehibiki@yahoo.de
Reviewed By: melly^_^ On: April 27, 2004 10:11 CDT
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Man, I love this fic so much. Yay, more Duo next time! ^_^ As for your ff.net account being shut down - well, it's their loss, I've been reading all your fics on mediaminer all along anyways
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 03:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can't wait for next chapter!! That Svale! She's a very persistent and hilarious old coot!! Grr I getting so fustrated when Heero wouldn't allow Tro to help Duo, but even more upset that they won't get that darn zero-spell thingy out of Quat, its no good I tell ya! no good! I can't wait to see how they all fair against 13 JAnus?! And I noticed it says 2x5, but wuffie only did a little peeping on duo while he was bathing and Duo healed him after he fought heero?? UPdat SOOOOOON!!
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Reviewed By: Turtle_fire On: April 22, 2004 19:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I can't wait to see the five hot boys getting together. Did Duo buried some booty trap in Wufei's mind when he fixed him up in the earlier chapter? I love this GW It is so original and is a great joy to read. Please update soon. I am sorry those ffnet indecent jerks censor you, I have stopped visiting ffnet for a long time, their policy kills creativitiy.
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Reviewed By: Turtle_Fire On: March 29, 2004 00:52 CST
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Hurray!Yummy Zechs finally shows up! I love your description of him. ?x6 coming? It is scary to see the zero Quatre, I hope he'd go back to being a rabbit soon.
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Reviewed By: AikoNamika On: February 12, 2004 08:08 CST
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Mwahahaha...I like this! I adore the way you write the different characters - for example, Svale constantly referring to Duo as "Maxie". Other authors would often have her referring mentally to him as "Duo" when they were simply writing and not actually thinking, but you kept her in character the entire time. Good job! The part with Zero changing Quatre and trying to get Quatre to change is really cool - and you went into fantastic details about the chakra lines on Trowa's body, and the entire thing is just really cool.
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Reviewed By: Turtle_Fire On: January 29, 2004 02:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your Shi No Kami is just GREAT! I Love the organic "Deathscythe?" a lot! But now he is not with the gang, will he has less "face time"? I still hope for a 1x2 in the future, he deserves to have his wish granted for all the hard work he had been doing!
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: January 20, 2004 18:45 CST
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What?! We have to wait almost 10 days for the next update! This is, this is... INJUSTICE! LOL! I guess some of Wufei is rubbing off! Keep up the great job and update soon!
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2004 21:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Should have guessed it was Duo's fiddling that made Quatre so weird. But what is he thinking? Zechs definately makes an excellent phoenix. He keeps 'dying' than popping up again.
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Reviewed By: Turtle_Fire On: January 13, 2004 02:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Looks like to me Duo had used Quatre to get zero. Great move! I always understand the Duo in here is not 'evil' in a bad sense; he just runs, hides, and most importantly ,lies, to achieve the greater good. Maybe I should not had used the word 'evil'; it should be reserved to describe Maldoror exclusively.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: January 05, 2004 16:38 CST
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Great fic. I like it. I have a few questions: 1. Would you explain Dou's behaviour towards Quatre? Was he actually reading Quatre's mind? 2. Who or what is Duo? 3. Was Wufei the last guy who Duo was dancing with or someone who looks like him? Keep it up and update soon
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