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Reviewed By: yuikey On: November 28, 2003 21:09 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Graet fic.Please get the next chapter in soon!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Vegeta!!!
Reviewed By: Phaerie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2003 10:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fan fic is awsome!!! But please hurry and keep writing, I wanna see what happens with Vegeta and Goku!!! Keep up the good work, -Phaerie
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Title: *purrs*
Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2003 20:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was SWEET!!! Mmm, fic you can write some chick and my Chichi so fucking hot together I can't wait to see how well you do w/ Goku & Veg. Til the next chappie ^~
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Reviewed By: I LUUV Vege!!!!!! On: November 10, 2003 06:51 EST
Comment/Review:
WOOHOOO! Heheheee.. Nice! Wow.. Never imagined Goku to be the type to have just passion and lust fuelled sex!!! Hehe...!! I cant wait for Vege/Goku action!! yuri lemon?! I've never read one before.. Should I be scared? Good stuff!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Where's the porn?
Reviewed By: malae On: November 05, 2003 15:50 EST
Comment/Review:
If you're going to write bad fan fiction, at least include the Vegeta/Goku sex EARLIER!
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Reviewed By: wawashkesh On: November 04, 2003 10:56 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story! It's very enjoyable! Hope to read the other chapters soon.
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Reviewed By: I LUUV VEGE On: October 28, 2003 04:22 EST
Comment/Review:
WOOHOO! NICE!
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Reviewed By: saiyanprincess88 On: October 22, 2003 22:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im absolutly lovin it......c'mon please post the other 8 chapters....are goku and vegeta going to get together or what? please dont keep that from us much longer!!! i like lemonade!! just a little squeeze please? *puppy eyes* YOUR AMAZING!!! MUCH LOVE SAIYANPRINCESS88
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Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2003 12:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Your grammar and spelling are very good. But--what the hell is going on...? What saga does this take place in? Who is this new character and where did she come from? Not that I don't like yuri. I love yuri...but it's unexplained. Please explain this. Vegeta next chapter? Can't live without my Veegee!
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Reviewed By: I Luv Vege * I shoudl really log in one day* On: October 21, 2003 03:19 EDT
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Nice! The Chi-Chi yuri is a little disturbing (im not a chichi fan!!!) But its tolerable! I like how this has started... I would like to read more of this!! Nice start!
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