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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 11:57 EDT
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Brrr. Vegeta trying to dig whatever that thing was out. (it wasn't a homing device lol) Yor Freeza is deliciously evil. I almost wish that Vegeta could have killed him. Oh well something tells me that he'll get another chance. Even if its not the physical form. Now the question is what is it and how deep does it go. How hard would it be to remove?
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Title: I'm #69!!!
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 23:34 EDT
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hey, just read the last chapter again so I really can post a review and be lucky #69 ! It's interesting how Goku gets rougher and Vegeta gets softer as the two bond--you never see that in B/Vs. V would've ended up a screaming boss bitch? Nah! debbiechan (who still reads and writes BVs but is ever grateful to p-goddess for expanding her horizons!)
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 16:40 EDT
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awwww, sweet dynamic with Bulma there. I like it that V&B still have some caring there (nice contrast to the Krillen thing). Think its hilarious that B finds the idea of her ex and her best friend having sex titillating! Oh well, keep up the good work! I was hoping to be your #69 reviewer on mm.org but couldn't quite wait. #68 is lucky too, I hear, in some alternative universes....debbiechan
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Reviewed By: sm On: June 12, 2004 05:28 EDT
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Excellent story. Looking forward to next chapter. On a side note, I found this story posted on adultfanfiction.net as well but further along in chapters. Are you still updating on mediaminer?
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 00:46 EDT
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Oh my gods the ship does have something to do with the scar!!!!! I was just joking. Krillin is an ass. Thank You for not making Gohan one too. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. And Yes, Vegeta is actually a really great Dad. He's even a better dad than Goku, to tell you the truth. Goku was always throwing is kids in the face of danger and Vegeta was always the one trying to protect them.
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 11:29 EDT
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Another very good chapter. I love the toy Ozarou. I keep forgetting theat Vegeta was there for Chichi and the boys when Goku was dead. thanks for the reminder. The story was a great way to highlight that too. The ship has something to do with the scar doesn't it? Its a homing device in Vegeta's back. Nah. Forget I said that. Ok I'm getting goofy and I need to find work so I'm going now. -El-
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Title: chocolate addict
Reviewed By: Jewel On: June 08, 2004 23:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehe, yes i had been eating chocolate, and here you go! *hands u a box of hershey's chocolate bars* hehe, they're yummy! i sitll love this story so you'd better update again very soon!!!!! *puppy dog eyes* please?
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Title: :-)
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 13:27 EDT
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"You'll have to do the laundry, Kakorr." That was great! :-) Anxious for the Frieza resolution but also curious to see Chi again & all the other dbz guys. And your lemons are so damn good & fortifying I'm expecting another tossed in that's not a lovey dovey G/V one...sigh, no hardcore Raditz? Yummy yuri? Even banal yet humorous Bulma/Yamcha? Ah, my problem whenever I find a new good author is I want to boss them into writing exactly what I want! Never mind--just go on with this story. Just the hint that there may be a sequel made my summer! go, go goddess girl--keep on with that writing streak! debbiechan
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Title: Comfort - Ch 35
Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 10:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've got to be kidding? You are new to writing fanfiction? Uso! You are such a pro! You've become one of my absolute FAVORITE fanfiction authors out there! I have you saved under both my favorite authors and Maintaining, along with some of your one-shots, are saved under my favorite stories. Ok, enough reviewing the author... =) I loved this chapter, as usual. I especially loved the teasing going on between G/V. I have three theories on Vegeta's scar: 1) When Frieza did that last experiment on him, the one before he and Raditzu got to make love for the final time, Frieza implanted some device inside of Vegeta or 2) When Vegeta died and went to HFIL, Frieza put some kind of 'curse' on Vegeta and that scar opens up whenever anyone, other than Vegeta himself, touches it. Kind of like Harry Potter, in a way of sorts. ;) or 3) I'm still totally way off from the real reason behind the scar! =))) Anywho, onward with the next chappie! =)
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Reviewed By: MysticRose [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 22:53 EDT
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Impressive. I love it. By all means keep up the good work. I believe I'm going to miss not being able to read multiple chapters a day. Do hurry putting up the next chapter. I can't wait to see where you're going with this.
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 15:01 EDT
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Ok I've put this off long enough. I've been out of town and have not been reviewing as I should have. Even his dreams make him cold. Gotta wonder about that. I love the nickname. It sounds like Vegeta is out of breath and just can't quite get out that last syllable. *shivers down the spine* PS: That fic you asked me to finish... Chapter one is at the Beta reader. -El-
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Reviewed By: AnimeDuneJediElf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 16:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This last chapter had me in heat. Whoo! Cute nickname. ~_^ And that voice, *shudders* Great couple of chapter! *|Mari|*
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 08:10 EDT
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okey dokey, Vegeta's not seme but he's on top of his "anchor" trying for a semblance of control over his past! Nice loving lemon--you write good ones. debbiechan
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Reviewed By: AltairKaosu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 15:30 EDT
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I've read this fic from the beginning, I just haven't reviewed until now, sorry about that. I wanted to let you know that this is one of the best Goku/Vegeta stories I've ever read. I really, really want things to turn out okay for them! What can I say, I'm a sucker for happily ever after, and if anyone deserves that, it's Vegeta and Goku. So please, keep up the fantastic work, and I'll be reading to the end. :) ~Altair
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Title: Your my goddess
Reviewed By: ale_lestat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 12:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it, like it, like it. The story is amaizing, lots of lemon, angst, drama and MY tears. My poor Vegeta !!!! I bet that the scar is has something with Vegeta hearing the voice of Freiza. Maybe a device or something implantated, not sure. You know what your doing, keep going. Oh, did I tell you that your a goddes, if not now you know :) Lots of kisses for the next chapter.
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