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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 14:50 EDT
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"suddenly feeling both sorry for Trunks never knowing his father loved him and glad his prince had resisted for so long. If this had happened to the boy..." --- THAT is one of the best lines. It sums up so much in so few words. So Dende is no longer a bad guy. Good, Poor kid. Glad to know tha Vegeta is going to be Ok. Thank You for writitng. -El-
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Title: all of it
Reviewed By: michigander On: July 23, 2004 23:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am a bad bad reader. I don't think I've ever left a review for this story. I love it. I've run into a few that are like yours but they either go off on a tangent that I can't follow or could believe. You've done a wonderful job with the emotion. I also liked the way you've made them appreciate each other. Also, the way you handled Goku and Chichi not being a couple is good. I could keep going but I am quickly running out of space. Please continue writing, even after this story. Thanks. And "Thank You" for the great story.
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: PrincessKatreena (LadyKATT) On: July 23, 2004 12:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thankyou I am getting better. Hope too see next chapter soon. Looking foward to the sequil. Bye Bye LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: pannybaby123 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 00:03 EDT
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yey!!! new chapter how cute man i love this fic write more soon!!!
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Title: chap 43
Reviewed By: XxNeko_YoukaixX On: July 22, 2004 06:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!! Vegeta didn't kill himself! Now we need some good stuff like oooh i don't know how about a LEMON!!!!*bounces around Pixelgoddess lap* we haven't had a Vegeta/Goku lemon(not rape) for a while. *neko glare* oh great now look at what u've done. now u've got me all worked up to see Vegeta & Goku go at like rabbits.*scrabbles around on lap tryin' to get comfy & wait for the next chap*(might cause a disstraction to Pixelgoddess) I WANT LEMON! I WANT LEMON!(sugar high at the moment hehe too much cat nip)
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Reviewed By: Renzu-chan On: July 21, 2004 14:55 EDT
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Sorry for reviewing so late! I wanted to write a good one since my last one sucked. First, though: +high fives debbiechan+ I want a seme Vegeta too :D Okay now for Pixelgoddess. Phew. The aftermath of Frieza's death. It's not so happy :( At least Krillin is gone for now. Mwaha. I wanna see Chichi kicking him again :) Yay, Vegeta! Stay with Kakorr! Oh and Vegeta's new nickname. Eh, I can't say I like it, but I don't hate it either. Isn't Sailor Jupiter's Japanese name Makoto? Yeah, Kino Makoto. Wow I just surprised myself with remembering (I am known to be the absentminded type). Ha, Sailor Vegeta. I know what it means in Japanese but I just associate that with Sailor Moon stuff lol. But oh well. I'll just skip reading all the Makotos. Kakorr was good though. Love that petname. Don't hate me :( I check my inbox (!)all the time for an update to your fabulous story~! Because you're such a great author that you even EMAIL your loyal readers! (still can't get over that) :D I'm dying for a happy moment between the two Saiyans without worries! Beggin' for some fluff, whoa oh. +makes a song+ +shatters glass+
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Title: Remorse
Reviewed By: Plyric - not signed in On: July 19, 2004 01:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!* Plyric *busts down in tears! Grabs Vegeta in a super-big bear hug and pets his hair.* My poor, poor 'Geta! *sniff, sniff* Plyric *goes to cry herself to sleep now...*
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Reviewed By: AltairKaosu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 13:54 EDT
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I was a little confused when Goku began to call Vegeta Makoto, but now that you explain what it means, I really like it! I think it's perfect. The rest of the chapter was great too, you had me reaching for Kleenex by the fifth paragraph. I'm still hoping for 'happily ever after', but I'm sure that however it turns out, it'll be fantastic. You're a great author.
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: Princess Katreena (LadyKATT) On: July 17, 2004 12:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LadyKATT Takes the tissue dots her eyes. (Thankyou) Now I am composed. Well I am looking foward to next part. Hurry I need to know that Vegeta can feel happieness again.
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Reviewed By: Kethry [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 11:59 EDT
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Vegeta can't die again **whine** Kackorrot has to stop him. but anywho.... your going to do it aren't you... have the brainwashing triggered again.. you evil evil lady (j/k) **grin**
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 10:21 EDT
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you were at fanfiction.net? they just had a purge this past weekend--the best writers didn't survive it. The place can just rot for all I care. Ah well, I do love a weakened Vegeta but in my heart he's seme. I love getting up on Saturday mornings to read your updates. I want my Veg to show some fortitude and stand up for himself next chapter! Let Goku help him stand, but I loved it when Veg killed Frieza--let him get his pride back! GO VEG! Wondering how Goku was planning on protecting Vegeta in hell? Isn't Goku pure as the driven snow and always headed for heaven? Heh, maybe Vegeta's knocked him down a peg too. I like an angstier Goku. He's turning into an interesting character here. Now bring back Piccolo to make these lovebirds shape up and stop their boo-hooing!! your fan debbiechan
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Reviewed By: El On: July 16, 2004 23:55 EDT
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I almost don't know what to do with myself today. This is the third fanfic on my rec read list that's been updated today. ff.net seems to be bumping a lot of people lately. Beautiful chapter by the way. Makato is perfect. Good name. Was Goku asking for time because he thought that was the only way that he could prevent Vegeta's suicide? I'll go back and read it again. maybe I'll figure it out. If you don't come up with the happy ending don't worry about it. I don't necessarily believe in them.
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Reviewed By: 'Stal(Crystal) On: July 14, 2004 09:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
(9.5 overall) lol. adultfanfic isnt workin on my comp right now so our kitty told me where i could find your story on a different site. the angst/drama has me on the edge of my seat here. poor tormented (little crazy) vegeta... cant wait for more!
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Reviewed By: chayron [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 16:35 EDT
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Somehow I knew it's going to happen... But I hope Vegeta isn't going to die. It would be very sad if he died... I prefer happy endings. I am sorry that that stupid Fanfiction net blocked your account. Bastards! They should had given you award that you was posting there!
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Title: Save Vegeta!!!!!
Reviewed By: LadyKATT [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 14:30 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No please save vegeta. He finaly got rid of frezza. Please save the prince. I am trying to type her with small tears in my eyes, hope you up date soon. I did not realise you had the other chapters done, I just checked today. If you could let me know it would be cool. Katt39@hotmail.com How much more is there? Well got to go. GOOD JOB!!!!! Bye Bye LadyKATT
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