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Title: chapter 40
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 10:23 EDT
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I read this chappie the minute you posted it wed night but am only writing the review today bc...I'VE BEEN FREAKIN CRYIN EVERY SINCE! At least you didn't wait, Ms EVIL, until the next chapt to give us hope that Kakor was still alive (he *is* alive, isn't he??? *weeps some more*) Oh and thanks for you review on adultff.net. I had to go there when mm.org went down to satisfy my review cravings. I'm glad you like my het--I may write yaoi (thinking, thinking *evil grin*) but not G/V. I love T/Gt ones. And your hot V/R in this story gave me lots of evil ideas! Til next time, your new fan, debbiechan
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 00:03 EDT
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Go Vegeta. Fight it Fight it Fight it. Realize that Goku is just supressing his own ki as far as he can and KILL THE LIZARD!!!!!!!! Rip him to pieces. Go Vegeta GO GO Vegeta. yes its late and I'm tired and goofy. -El-
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Title: Chapter 39
Reviewed By: Kethry [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 18:59 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Well I am pretty new to MediaMiner.. so I just found this. Fic. I have really enjoyed reading this and can't wait for the next installment. It is nice to see someone else that has mused the Saiyan bond thing. I have started posting my own Fic. "New Dawn" and well it is long, lol. on paper it is over 200 pages. but I wanted to say thanks for this. I like the dept you have given the charaters... and I agress with reviews being food for the muse.... my Fac has gotten a good many vist but only one review *frowns* but I will lumber on, hehe. I see the ending of this one as being painfull, getting that chip out with be a trick I can not wait to see. Well I have carried on a good bit now. I just hope I don't have to go to AFF to read the next chapter like I had too with chap. 39. MM must behaving server trobles. Wind to your Wings, Kethry MoonDragon
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Title: Chappie 39
Reviewed By: Plyric *stupid MM.org* I am logged in!!! [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 23:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I've never read a story that has Frieza raping Goku in any way, even if it was indirectly through Vegeta! That was brutal! I can't wait to see that bastard get his ass kicked, and I sincerly hope Vegeta finally gets his chance to shine and send Frieza back to HFIL where he belongs! =)
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Title: ARGHHHH!!
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 11:53 EDT
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I've never read a Goku raped by Frieza piece before. That was truly horrifying. Of course, single-minded b**** that I am, I was worried about Vegeta the whole while! Oh, was that chappie a surprise! You are an evil, evil, evil pixelgoddess! (don't change! lol!) debbiechan
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 10:04 EDT
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Ok I'm over my shock. I still want my mommy but I'm over my shock. There is actually something I've been wanting to ask you. Does Freeza know about Trunks? I would think that he would but I'm not really sure.
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Reviewed By: pannybaby123 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 00:07 EDT
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YEY!!! u up dated... Very instering chapter!! cant wait 4 da next one... c i didnt 4 get this time lol
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 00:04 EDT
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AHHHHHHH! AHHHHHHHHH! AHHHHHHHH! -El-
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Title: Chapter 38
Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 22:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh... Plyric *looks down at stupid review* Darn MM.org! How did that review for that story end up on the wrong story?!!! So sorry for the confusion about 56 chappies! That was my review for Unforgivable. Plyric *glares at MM.org* Anywho, I knew it, I knew it! It was an embedded chip! Plyric *dances around hooting like the monkeys on Planet of the Apes* Alright, let's see some Super Saiyan action to blow Frieza to bits again! Yeah! Yeah! Yeah!
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Title: Chapter 56
Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 22:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was a shocking ending! Well, Tatoosh didn't leave me much to say since Tatoosh expressed in their review everything that's on my mind. I do want to throw in my extreme high amusement at the G/V kiss down in the "Hijinks" sections you always include at the end of the chapters. I seriously adored, as in loved!, the last three lines, especially the last line: "Vegeta: Good, then he won't see this. *kisses Kakarot* Goku: mrp???mmmm! *kisses back* Everyone else: @.@ *nosebleeds, passing out, etc.*" ROFL! I CANNOT wait for Forgiven and more Kuro's Escape!!! More, more!!!! =)
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Reviewed By: pannybaby123 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 16:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it but im an idiot and i always 4 get i read this story when i get the alirts ::bangs head on the wall:: lol but now i hope i remeber cause i love this fic so much dunno how i could 4 get bout it... but thats the hectic life i live... write the next chatper soon!!!! i cant wait to read it!!
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Title: !!!!!
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2004 15:25 EDT
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oooh, bad bad lizard! Well, that Frieza monologue explained a lot. You got the bastard down. Your Piccolo rocks too. Exciting chapter, but I'm already tearing in anticipation of what you're going to do to poor Veggie! And what's up with Karorr??? ACK! I couldn't get to this chapter til today--freaking computer blipping on me. You're really rolling--thanks for quick (yet fulfilling!) chapts! debbiechan
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2004 01:30 EDT
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From Otherworld? He was controlling from Otherworld? That is one hell of a chip. Well lets see. You could Take out Freezas, Have another type of formal bond overide it, or have it come with an off switch. Or something delilishly clever that you've thought up that I haven't. Gohan, Quit acting like saiyadork, go mystic, and kick some a@@. That boy has so much potential nad never gets to use it. I hope Vegeta is the one that gets to kill Freeza this time. Ok Update soon. -El-
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Reviewed By: LadyKATT [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 12:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI, Well I was be hind in reading your fic but cought up now, is Vegeta realy going to leave Goku? hope some thing happens to Krillen. It seams Gokus is starting to go insain as well, hope not. Well sorry got to go, I realy enjoy this fic hope you up-date soon. BYEBYE LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 11:11 EDT
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aww, you reviewed 2 of my fics! I didn't expect you to read sappy het, but thanks anyway! Freaking a.c. broke here so I didn't get to your last chapter til today (didn't want to be whipped up into a heated frenzy w/no a.c!) INTENSE, I esp loved the scene where V realizes that the tail hung low, too heavy to bear higher, and that freaky face is Frieza's! The fusion and the bond--interesting concept! Now that we now what the scar's about, you gave us more suspense--where's Veg going now!!??? AHH! He can't blow himself up or anything like that! Looks pretty bad for our tortured Prince and Kakorr!! (have I thanked you lately for updating so regularly? ;-) debbiechan
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