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Reviewed By: Renzu-chan On: July 12, 2004 11:14 EDT
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Yeah!! A Vegeta pennent! +flails it around+ Can't spell, but that's okay. I kinda expected Vegeta to go off and kill himself because he hurt his Kakorr. Poor guy, he cares so much. I'm not all that interested in Dende. He was mean to Vegeta. But an explanation helps why he's such a butt :) Boo on Krillin the most! You must have him return just so someone can kick his ass. Make it ChiChi again. That was funneh :) You sure love to make them lay in agony a lot haha. Gohan, Videl, and Dende should have a picnic. Yes. Piccolo can come, too. No mpreg! Happy ending! Man, this wasn't a good review. All thoughts are jumbled :/ I'll write a better one. I promise.
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Title: chap 42
Reviewed By: XxNeko_YoukaixX On: July 12, 2004 06:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh sorry 'bout not reviewin' ur last chap i didn't think u'd update so soon. when i tried on the other sites its wouldn't let me for some stupid reasons. its a BIG relief that Frieza is FINALLY gone. but poor Vegeta he can't kill himself. *neko whimper* Goku better get his ass up & stop Vegeta. i want a HAPPY endin' PLEASE! as for me goin' human form well geee i don't know i kinda like buggin' u like this. *grin* (greatly enjoyin' the attention Pivelgoddess gives) *purrrrrs loudly* i think i'll bugg u more before i go human form. until then i'm gettin' some sleep while i wait for the next chap. *crawls under Pixelgoddess shirt; still purrin' loudly & curls up into a ball so the brown fur tickles Pixelgoddess stomach*
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Reviewed By: pannybaby123 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 02:20 EDT
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yea i read it dats y i said that 2 you lol.... write more soon !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i wana read it!!! so bad!!
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 16:15 EDT
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I love a suicidal Vegeta--actually, that's the word I'd use to characterize his whole personality, but given that he's in love here at last and softening, I'm confident that the mushy love stuff will kill the raging self-hatred instead of the raging self-hatred killing Vegeta himself. Or, as was my previous suggestion--TURN THAT RAGE LOOSE IN BED (let V be seme, pretty please? The killer of Frieza deserves to be on top, eh???) This is the most kick-ass wonderful story. I don't want mpreg, though--never cared for it, just my taste--but the Piccolo squick thing? Might work! Renzu-chan, I know Firecracker's squick fics--they are hilariously well written. I could see pixelgoddess' humor working for her in a similar vein! TTFN! debbiechan
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Title: Nickname
Reviewed By: AltairKaosu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 12:43 EDT
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I return to write another review! Heh...anyway. I almost cried when it was revealed that Vegeta was the one hurting Goku. I do like these last few chapters though...Frieza getting his ass kicked, Goku surviving. All great stuff! Oh, and I had a suggestion for Vegeta's nickname. I don't know if you thought of it already, or it's already been suggested, but here it is: Vega, like the star. Sounds pretty respectful and not at all childish to me. But that's my own personal opinion. I'm looking forward to reading more, it's such a great story! :) ~Altair
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 11:31 EDT
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I liked the explanation you gave for Dende. God really shouldn't be a jerk. No sensu is a good thing. Vegeta is scarred in both body and soul. The sensus or Dende's healing techniques only cure the body. As it is, healing works best when both are working in harmony. And you have a lot of healing ahead of Vegeta. Depression is a nasty little bug. I liked the reaction that Gohan had when he got to the Lookout. The rushing straight for his dad was an effective reminder that he is still a manchild. Although I did feel a little that he should have shown some concern for Vegeta as well. After all Vegeta was like a second mentor/ father figure to him while Goku was dead. Well I'm being called away so I'll stop here. -El-
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Reviewed By: AnimeDuneJediElf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 10:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES! Way to go Vegeta! Whoo-hoo! *does a happy dance* Awesome chapter! *|Mari|*
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Reviewed By: Kethry [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 14:07 EDT
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WEll at lest you are rolling them out for us!!! eeekkers he killed the lizard at long last!! but my question is this... what about the hypnosses.. is it gone? or will he slip back into that if he says he loves someone again.. is Trunks still in danger??? need to know these things... and I like the way you discribe the level shift, a twisting of ki, great wording! I do not buy the Dende being weaker at healing thing.. I think he was just being a spoiled little green brat **crosses arms and glares** keep up the great work! Kethry
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Reviewed By: (i am snen, but the damn thing won't let me log in!!) [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 05:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I joined mediaminder just so I could get update alerts on your fic ^^ It was so worth it! This was a really good chapter :) Perhaps a nickname Goku could call Vegeta could be Vege? It would be pronounced in a sorta french accent, making the g like a soft j sound in french (like j'ai?). And it'd sorta correlate with how I think he seems to pronounce Kakorr (although that always sounded kinda russian to me).It's so hard to think of a nickname for Vegeta, they're all taken lol! Keep on writing!
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Title: Chappie 41
Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 17:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOO-HOO! YEAH! WOO-HOO!Vegeta POUNDED Frieza's ASS into a bloody pulp, literally! AWESOME!!! WOO-HOO! Very, Extremely, Supremely well-written! Can't wait for next chappie! =)
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Reviewed By: Renzu-chan On: July 06, 2004 11:15 EDT
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YEAHHHHHHH VEGETA KILLED THAT FUCKER YEAH~! HE DID IT HE DID IT HE DID IT! +cheers like a madwoman+ BETTER THAN FOOTBALL!! Wow, I bet he feels like, "OMGOMGOMOGMGOMGOMG." Hurry and heal, Kakorr! Reunite with your LOVER! xD! Okay, a nickname for Vegeta.. Hm, a toughy since you want an original one.. No ideas come to mind :/ Piccolo is just GREAT in this fic. I usually don't care for him but he's ultra cool! But how can he hear Vegeta talkin' to him by telepathy? Gotenks/Piccolo?? ARE YOU NUTS? LOL! I'm sure there's one floating about somewhere. I knew an author named FireCracker at Paco's Hotel did a whole series of squick fics. Very interesting. Very humorous. But I have one request: MAKE IT A HAPPY ENDING PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! I'll do anything! +begs+
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 08:49 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU GET HIM VEGETA!!!! Yey!!! He killed the pasty faced lizard freak! I dunno about a pet name for V. I would never have come up with Kakkor. I've always liked Geta but something tells me Vegeta wouldn't. ;-) So happy that Frieza is dead. Thought it was cool when you described V as being so out of control when he killed him! Now let him turn loose some of that passion in bed! LOL!
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 01:07 EDT
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Very cathartic. Yes I'm letting my vocabulary do the walking. YES!!! It was spectacular, superb! Yeah!!!!!!! I'm using Ve as a shortened version of Vegeta mostly as a distinguisher. But I like it. I see Vegeta as the name that had to be grown into and Ve was the younger version. Hope that helps. -El-
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Reviewed By: pannybaby123 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 00:17 EDT
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YEY!!!! Another chapter!! Go Vegeta!!!! Kill dat Evil Bastard... haha its funny i named my cat Vegeta n its funny she acts like vegeta some times... lol... humm nick names 4 vegeta i like Geta cause i dunno its cute... n then theres Veggie Head lol... humm wut ealse Vega lol dats acutaly a charter in one of my charters form a story i never posted ... humm Ve or V how ever you wana pronounce it is good but dats cute lol... ok im just rambling here lol... so Write more!!!!! Get Vegeta or Goku Pregant ^_- they need a baby... lol cant wait till da next chapter!! Write more soon!
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Reviewed By: AnimeDuneJediElf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 11:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY FREAKING GOD! These last few chapters have been freaking amazing! When I read that it was Vegeta who tortured and raped Goku, I freaking screamed! You have gotta update soon or I'll freaking die of suspense! *|Mari|*
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