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Reviewed By: DivaLicious89 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2004 20:47 EST
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Hey! Sorrie that i didn't update sooner...my old computer has been very messed up so i had to wait until this guy came to fix it~hehehe i love the sango/miroku scene!ooooOoOo and Naraku is a tricky bastard! tsk tsk....OoOO But i seriously can't wait for the kag/inu/kikyo event that's prob gona happen...i hope!!!!hehe i'm sowwie i'm not patient!!I ADMIT IT!~Well lots of Love~DivaLicious89
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2004 14:03 EST
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It seems Naraku hasn't changed much at all, has he? Update soon!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2004 10:17 EST
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Wow! when I saw the notice in my mail box that you had updated the headache just stopped!!! I'm glad I make you smile, it's my mission in life to make people happy, or horny, which ever. Okay did Naraku just call Kagome a cow??? His mama!!! There!, nobody calls my girl a cow, bitch is okay because being mated to Inuyasha she is technically a bitch, but that whole cow thing was way out of line, thats why she blew half his ass off!!!! Oh YEAH, THEIR BAD, HIS SAD, THEIR BAD, HIS SAD!!!! So he thinks he can use Kikyou because Inuyasha won't hurt her huh? Okay yeah he may be right about that one, but Inu can only be pushed so far people!! That was so funny, the thing about Zi's grandma yelling at him about his mouth and he was afraid of her!!!!! But she should know he got it from his mother, that women has a mouth on her that could stop a bull in heat! Naraku thinks he can take on Sesshy in his big dog form huh! I got three words for him, bow wow bitch!!!!!! And you know theres no way Zi would let him go out there alone even if she doesn't remember eveything!! I can't wait for the next chapter! *dances around singing* THEIR BAD, HIS SAD!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2004 19:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
if i could give u a higher rating i would. its taken me a while to read this but i have loved it none the less. Your writting is so spectacular to read, it all flows together and i cannot wait until you have updated. some of it was a complete giggle fest. keep up the good work. Krystal. :)
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 22:11 EST
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Wow!!!!!!! Zi doesn't remember anything!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And how DID she climb through the floor??? If Kagome is drained completely, how is she going to fight Kikyou(if she has to)??? His tail just came out of no where!? And what about Miroku? Don't tell me got a windtunnel on our hands, or would it be his hands??? How is Sango going to react to this, how is Sango period!! My head hurts now, just please update.
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Reviewed By: DivaLicious89 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 21:18 EST
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ooo finally!!haha jk i'm just super glad you got another chappie in so soon!!!I'm soo happy 2day cuz i bought lots of inuyasha dvds..haha and imma buy more anime dvds later...:P~It just makes my day after reading this chappie....aww has Zi got ammnesia!!???!!lol oo i wish you wrote more about kagome/inu/kikyo..like wuts going on w/ dat bitch kikyo...haha...jk~Well g2g update soon~Lots of Love~DivaLicious89
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Reviewed By: ME On: February 15, 2004 20:42 EST
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GREAT!! just fantastic!! I so love your story--great battle scene--yes, I grew up with Arnold and everybody, too!! can't wait to find out what exactly happened to Zi and when will Sesh and Zi finally 'do the deed'^_^!! update soon
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: February 09, 2004 19:03 EST
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Why can't I see Sesshoumaru slaping anyone on the butt??? No wait it's coming...now I can see it!!! funny!! They're going to fight next right? I can't watch, yes I can, no I can't, must watch, must not watch, okay I'll watch. Update soon!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: DivaLicious89 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2004 20:07 EST
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yay i'm really glad for Kagome/Inuyasha! Lol i love sesshy!!!Really enjoyed this chappie~It's getting better and better!I also liked the sango/miroku part!Well anyways g2g but promise to update asap!Lots of Love~DivaLicious89
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2004 20:06 EST
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Wow, this is getting really exciting! War! I love it! Sorry if I sound morbid, I just like battle scenes sooo much, whether watching or reading them, I really just relish those battle scenes! Hurry with the update soon, I wanna find out what happens next!
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Reviewed By: CherryBlossom_312 On: February 07, 2004 19:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked it i hope you update soon i can't wait to find out what happenes next Cherry~_~
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Reviewed By: jschu25(NLI) On: February 07, 2004 17:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Two thumbs up for another great chapter..~_~ jschu25
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Reviewed By: Babsie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2004 10:04 EST
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Oh My God! I can´t barely wait to see how Inuyasha will tell Kagome that he love her and only her...but i have the feeling that our hanyou, being stuborn as ever, will not tell her...or will tell only when he lost her. Please, update soon
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Reviewed By: DivaLicious89 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2004 18:37 EST
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yay! another chappie....it really makes my day even better since ya got a new chappie!!!hehehe I love Nzinga's personality!!! Lol and i didn't nzinga had a thing w/ miroku wen dey were young...very very interesting!!!Well anyways g2g~HUREEEEY AND UPDATE NEXT CHAPPIE!!!!!Lots of Love~DivaLicious89
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2004 15:43 EST
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Awwww...I wish you didn't hafta cut off da lemon part so soon! Oh well, I can wait, don't wanna make you feel like all us reviewers are pushing you *glares at anyone who was thinking of doing just that*. Although a sooner update is alwayz a better one, I still stand by what I said. I'll be back 4 da next update!
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