| "Kagome! Where are you?!" Reviews/Comments [ 409 ] |
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Title: Here's another review
Reviewed By: Melli [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2004 08:25 PST
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150 reviews!!!!!!!! Lucky you!!!! Great STORY!!!!
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Title: Hey another great chapter!!!!!
Reviewed By: Melli [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2004 08:17 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know how many times I've said this but I'll say it again, I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!! I swear you're a fabulous writer!!! Anywayz, I can't wait until your next chapter!! (P.S. Umm...I don't know how to really ask this but here it goes, Can you read my story To be so close and yet, so far away please? I mean, you don't have to if you don't wantto but I would be really grateful if you did. Thanks and great story!!)
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Title: *you're probably sick of her reviews by now*
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2004 23:40 PST
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OH! I forgot to mention that I loved the dog legend. Very interesting. And based on real legends? Makes it even better. And you know what... it kind of goes with that saying that "The way to a man's heart is through is stomach." Okay, so not all men are dogs (SOME are!)... but it fits with the Inu-youkai in my opinion. Keep adding cool tidbits like that when you can. It just makes reading this story even more enjoyable. ^_^
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Title: Ch 32 - Anything part 2
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2004 23:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniffle* Kagome pretty much ruined the nice atmosphere with reality. *sigh* She's totally right as usual. I'm very impressed that you write her so intelligently. And then came Sesshoumaru... *grins* He fixed it again. Damn damn damn damn damn. He is maddening. And I mean that in the worst, as well as the best, way. ;) *blushing* Some people have... well... the earlobes... they're sensitive. *beet red* So I've... heard. (yeah right) "Lesson number one." There is an element of excitment at being the teacher in the relationship. But when they know something you thought they might not... it proves just how surprising life SHOULD be. *grinning* Bathing. Hell yeah. *grins more* The little *ahem* TASTE of what's to come next is... too good to wait for. ;) But having waited 32 chapters makes it worth the wait. ^_~ Well... you know me. It's time. To me, the relationship isn't moving too fast. It seems like this is THE time and the setting is, for lack of better terminology, perfect. (Don't forget the waterfall! They tweak my imagination) And plus, I'm addicted to lemon. And I am SO looking forward to yours right now. I'll be waiting in anticipation for your next update. And believe me once I read it... nothing will keep me from reviewing. Not even MM. And that's saying alot. Whatever you write... I'm sure I'll love it. Anything.
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Title: more about ch 31-anything part 1
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2004 22:54 PST
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I forgot something about the last chapter... I loved Sesshoumaru's reaction to Kagome's virginity status! *grins* My favorite part! He has such a sexy voice that those words rolling off his tongue just... well, you know. ;) He's so positive that ... it's getting hot it here. *wink* Honestly, I haven't been this excited by a story in long while. There's just something about the way you write their interaction... it takes my breath away. *blushes* I think I've said enough to gross you out for a thousand lifetimes... On another note, I was gonna cry when he said those last two lines. That rarely happens for me. But he's so... him.
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Title: Ch 31- "Anything" part 1
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2004 22:48 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lemme see... where to begin? One, I LOVE the chapter title! ^_^ It's probably just me... I have a whole series of Gundam Wing fanfics that I call the "Anything" saga. (All of the story titles involve "anything") I guess the fact that you and I seem to like the implications/thoughts stemming from that word is... intriguing. Anyway... I love the title! :) Okay... personally, I think Sesshoumaru and Kagome fit your stories well. (Given what events have befallen them, of course) If anything, (heh) I liked their personalities this chapter. Kagome is even more complex with her beliefs and fears-- much more unique than most authors portray her. And Sess is..... even more desirable!!!!!! ^_^ (Sorry, he's my sex god) His mix of strength, tenderness, and passion.....it's making me SO jealous of Kagome right now! There were so many lines of his that just took my breath away. (I'd quote them, but I don't want to spoil it for the readers. They're worth reading for yourselves!:) Anyway...I'm off to read Anything part2! ^_^ *lol* The preview for the next chapter is priceless. She shoots down his fairytale. How frickin hilarious. *grins*
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Reviewed By: Ainbthen On: February 17, 2004 22:40 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story gives me shivers (good ones!), and we haven't even gotten to the lemon yet! I can't wait to read it. No, you aren't going to fast, it's just right in the situation they are in. This is a great story!
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Reviewed By: Julie K [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2004 20:48 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, You know I probably should have written more reviews, but I've just been loving your story so far. I find x-overs to be so hit or miss. This is really well done. When I first started reading I thought it was kind of a dumb ploy to get Inuyasha characters to go "world" hopping, but you've gone beyond that. This last chapter was extremely well done. It reminded me of Roger's and Hammerstein's "If You Loved Me" from Carousel, where the characters imagine what would happen rather than actually coming out and saying they're in love. It's an interesting love song and this chapter kind of had that flavor. I love how you're writing the two characters. I also like how you include actual mythology, legends, history and folklore into all you're stories. Of course, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. It sounds delicious. I've been waiting for the lemon for a while. Although I like the Inuyasha and Kagome pairing....I really hope there's more of Kagome and Seshoumaru. Please hurry with the next chapter!! Oh...don't be concerned about chapter length. I love long chapters!!
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Reviewed By: Kuro No Miko On: February 17, 2004 19:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had to check your story here at MediaMiner because you didn't have it up in FanFiction...To answer your question: NO...you are going at a perfect speed....not to fast, but slow enough to make the reader,well read more.....Very nice chapter.....but why must you torture us with those previews...i hate you...j/k.....I'd never say that to a fellow writer....gtg
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Reviewed By: AsianEyes [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2004 18:50 PST
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Woah! That was an interesting chapter...I can't wait till the next one...Oh...and that thing about the dogs following you after you feed them? I fed a stray dog before and it almost bit my hand off! :-P Hope you update soon, although, you update quite fast, and I like that. Good job.
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Reviewed By: Inari-foxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2004 18:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
no, not to fast. I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is the best story ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: 12blue12(logged off0 On: February 17, 2004 18:40 PST
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ohh i cant wait till the next chappie some eroticy has been prolonged for too long well coolie chappie a little OOc on sessys part but that is expected and coolie legend i would of never thought somtin like tat would be said coolie on originality well hopin for next chappie soon cya!
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Reviewed By: blackberry [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2004 09:02 PST
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I thought this chapter was interesting, and for the most part the conversation was necessary for certain plot points. (Of course, some stories depend on characters not talking and bumbling their way through relationships.) I liked the statement about marking being a form of control. I know it's a popular cliche in Inuyasha fanfics, but I'm glad you made the point that a relationship built on a magic crutch of that type might not be all that stable. Good work, and I look forward to your next update.
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Title: re note
Reviewed By: D D S On: February 16, 2004 00:51 PST
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read the message i wrote two messages ago REALLY IMPORTANT!
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Title: good job i hate my comp
Reviewed By: D D S On: February 16, 2004 00:50 PST
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if you are writing it ... giid job !! .... BUT......BUT...... my comp got a virus +-+ - hate it... hate it... hate it... hate it... hate it... hate it... hate it... hate it... hate it... hate it... this sucks i can't even open My Computer
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