| "Kagome! Where are you?!" Reviews/Comments [ 409 ] |
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Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2004 13:59 PST
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This was a great chapter! Vampires are cool! I havn't read to many stories about them (or werewholves) so i can say that i didn't know they could regenerate... Also what day is it O_O. Yea Sess probally would kill her in chapter 2 lol. but this is a Kagome/Sess fic so we can't have that! Great i havn't read A shard in Kyoto but i will! i will if not today because there will be so much to read... YAY thats a good thing ^_~
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Reviewed By: Sundragon (not signed on) On: February 22, 2004 13:53 PST
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Sorry! That's Sex in the city! I'm a ditz! Like i said You are great? Oh, I'm not so sure on the comparison so.. don't get offended! please!
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Reviewed By: Sundragon (not signed on) On: February 22, 2004 13:50 PST
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As a female I don't think you protrayed her sluty! You are doing great! (slightly similar to sex and the city, right?) Keep updating! YOu are a very good author! Adios!
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2004 12:40 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Okay, first things first. Loved the chapter! And yeah, Kagome is probably not going to be a happy camper that Sessho went on a "rampage" to get her back, but all things considered, she's really not a warrior and isn't THAT good with tactics (although she's learning ^_^ ). And the way I read it, Sessho's tactics will be a lot handier where they're at than Kagome's ... wanting to "fix" things. Okay, second point. For as mature? as Kagome is portrayed (unless she's in a rant about something), last time I checked, she was still a teenage girl. Being a female, and having 3 teenage girls in the house, I don't think that at any point you've painted her as being "slutty" at all. Emotions change on a daily basis for most teens, male or female. And only someone who's never been caught up in the emotional roller coaster that happens when you fall for two different people would see a problem with what's going on with Kagome and Sesshoumaru. Basically, the same thing as someone who's never dealt with depression trying to understand someone who has to deal with that. It just don't work. Personally, I think you've done a heck of a job with dealing with the characters and the possibilities ... but go figure ... it's your story. I happen to like this story very much, but for those that don't, they always have the option of not reading it. So, for all that the characters are OOC at points, there are just as many points when they're in character. Just keep doin what you're doin ... the rest of us are enjoying it immensely ^__^
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Reviewed By: 12blue12(logged off) On: February 22, 2004 10:43 PST
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yeah u made some of the characters ooc but i got to say that u may be a little of at kags reaction of sex (female prv) your not totally of so its not that bad and i got to say your makin sessy more ooc every chappie its kinda funny and can u kinda do a para. about wets gooin on with inu and the group hmm well just a thought so hope the next chappie will be update before march 7th cya!
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Reviewed By: ChibiMethos [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2004 16:39 PST
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Uh . . .who turned up the heat in here? I can't breathe . . . ^_^x *Walks around for about 5 minutes* great chapter. vampires, hu? can't wait!
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Reviewed By: RabidSquirrel210 On: February 21, 2004 03:33 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic it is by far my most favorite that i have ever read...please write more soon it just keep getting better and better. As I said in my last review you have real talent... I love Sessho fics and you write them well.
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Reviewed By: 12blue12(logged off) On: February 19, 2004 20:26 PST
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very suductive very well written i must say soi hope more come soon and i hope the next upate comes soon cya!
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Reviewed By: bmr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2004 19:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Enjoy the time off! Please come back as soon as you can. Lots of love and luck.
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Reviewed By: dark huntress On: February 18, 2004 21:26 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is getting better and better. I can't wait til the next chapter. Update soon. This fanfic is my fav so far.
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Reviewed By: Sesshomarusgirl56 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2004 18:22 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man you are like the best writer well some of your chapters made me cry just thinking about them makes me want to cry so keep up the good work!!!!
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Reviewed By: ChibiMethos [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2004 13:59 PST
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AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you keep stopping!! more! i need more!
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Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2004 13:40 PST
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very interesting! wow i was wondering why i never saw Shesshomaru eat... No the relationship is perfect! Like if they started making out right now NOW that is to fast, but because Kagome still can't choose but is getting closer to SHesho its very good. I hate it when relationships ZOOOOM by.
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl On: February 18, 2004 12:43 PST
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This fic is so good, I can't use words to describe it! Please continue to update!
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2004 11:22 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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haha, you and your previews! The story was good, I enjoy their banter/learning about each other. How Sessho could possibly think of trying to put Kagome in a "customary" role ... but she shot that one down well ^_^ From the looks of that preview, they lady may have ... um ... bitten off more than she can chew???!!
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