| "Kagome! Where are you?!" Reviews/Comments [ 409 ] |
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Reviewed By: anime otaku 58319 On: January 11, 2004 12:05 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really funny fic. You've actually put a lot of work into it. Ican't wait for your next update. Bye.
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Reviewed By: Midnight001 On: January 09, 2004 23:29 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*Great!* I think you are going at a good pace BUT! it would be nice to see some action start to go on between the two. I seriously love your fiction. Your so great!
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Reviewed By: ;) On: January 09, 2004 13:45 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i dont think your going to fast. i think it is an awesome story! you must update soon!! please!!!!:)
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess (not logged in) On: January 09, 2004 00:32 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story and everything, but…your going to Slow!!! >< its already been 19 chappies and all the have is the beginning of friendship!! You think you could speed it up a little? Pleassss…well update soon, k! cant wait for the next chappy! =^-^= W.T.P.
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Title: I needed something larger than a "10" for Enjoyment Factor
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin *does she EVER log in?* On: January 08, 2004 23:03 PST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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*sniffles* That was SO sweet... can you tell I'm not only a hentai but a hopeless romantic? Yuppers, I'm guilty. But I like angst too. Sesshoumaru's mememories held that. His dad was an evil son of witch. Did he change after he met Inuyasha's mother? Just wondering. Despite the like of action. (I NEED some violence/fighting/horror every once in awhile too) Sorry for the spelling/grammar rating... maybe I'm just seeing things again. Anyway... my point, as usual, is that I like this story and can't wait for you to update it next week. ^_^
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Title: Wow....keep up the great work and update!!
Reviewed By: Psycho Demoness On: January 08, 2004 21:13 PST
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I really like this story. I happen to love Fluffy/Kagome fanfics. I'm such a sucker for them...anyways I think that at first the relationship was building too slow and I think you should go a little faster. I really want them to be together!! *sniff* So keep it up and update as often as you can! Thank ya! Ja ne!
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Title: Kagome! Where are you?!
Reviewed By: Edge [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2004 20:26 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww, you made Sesshomaru so soft now! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Chibi Methos (not logged in) On: January 07, 2004 21:53 PST
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wow! I so love this story. T_T; I have to cry though, cause the chapter was so short. I'll keep checking back for updates. I think I'll have a look at "Shard" while I'm waiting.
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Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin *still not logged in, but still snowbound* On: January 07, 2004 21:45 PST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*grins* Why do I get all the boring jobs like READING fanfics about Sesshoumaru instead of living in his lustful side... *blinks* I did NOT just say that out loud. ANYway... I liked the sides of Sess in this chapter. I thought it was a little rushed, overall, but still pretty good. The lustful side was still the best part. In the library when Kagome got some of his memories, I expected her to absorb them instead of return them to him. Maybe there's still a residule memory inside her. *shrugs* Go Kagome! Way to bargain with lustful Sesshy! ;) I'm holding you to that, btw. ^_~ The next world should be interesting... that preview is making me think already. So the spirit of the cube still exists... it's just no longer inside Sesshoumaru. Gotcha. Take time to write the next chapter, if you need it. I, myself, am guilty of super duper neglect of my unfinished stories. When I get going on one that I really like... it's hard to finish the others where I'm lacking inspiration. (Can you tell I'm an Abstract Random?) Good luck and keep the chapters coming! ^_^
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Title: C'mon no suspense!!
Reviewed By: Melli [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2004 10:34 PST
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UPDATE!!!!! Alright, you can update when you can. I'll read your story A Shard in Kyoto while I'm waiting.
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Title: Awww so cruel!!!
Reviewed By: Melli [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2004 18:16 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're soooooooooo cruel!!!! You left me at a cliffy!!!! Anywayz, I love your story and URGE you to continue it. UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!
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Title: It took me awhile to catch up... but I did it.
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin *probably not logged in, snowbound in her mountain cavern* On: January 04, 2004 22:10 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This story is awesome! At first, it reminded me of a great DBZ fanfiction called "The Long Way Home." (that one reminded me of that old show Sliders) But they're not alike at all. (Although, Bulma and Vegeta also shared... *ahem* bodyheat in one sleepingbag) I did like your Ranma 1/2 reference, btw. Ha, only Genma Saotome would use a scroll written by Sesshoumaru... poor Ranma. Cat-Fu rules! I really liked the ice chapters-- especially all the sexual tension. (If a naked Sesshoumaru started rubbing MY breasts... I could NOT resist! O.O) I've always loved dinosaurs. (Where was my stegie?) The bathing scenes rocked. Mostly when it was HER turn to look. ;) I couldn't believe you added the Alien vs. Predator universe. Some friends of mine played the computers games. I couldn't handle being a space marine... I was too creeped out by the damn aliens. And Predators rock! (Ever since the end of Predator2, that is) The ending of the book you mentioned sounded cool as Hell. That girl goes WITH the predators??? She must REALLY kick ass if THEY liked her. ;) A vs P was a great addition to this story because the InuYasha universe is primarily an action/horror genre. You write a nice melding of each. :) Back to your story again... at first, the whole "This Sesshoumaru" thing really REALLY bugged me. I got over it, though. This fic just seems worth it! ^_^ Oh, eventhough you said the cube looks like a Rubiks cube... it made me think of the puzzle from the Hellraiser movies. *shrugs* That's just me. Lemme see, if you end up writing Sess/Kag action... I sure as Hell won't stop you! ^.~ But I too like them to go through some... challenges first. The end of chapter17 included. Poor Sess... I'm glad Tokijin POSSibly helped Kagome increase her powers. And that cliffhangar... you are EVIL!!! Muahahaha!! I can't WAIT to see what Kagome does to save him next. ^.~
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Reviewed By: 12blue12 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2004 19:41 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
lov the story update soon
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Reviewed By: ChibiMethos [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2004 00:33 PST
Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!! I Love this story!!!!! Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess (not logged in) On: January 01, 2004 22:56 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!! UPDATE!! UPDATE!!....and before i forget...UPDATE SOON!!! Bye! =^-^= W.T.P.
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