| "Foundations of Neo Genesis" Reviews/Comments [ 97 ] |
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 17:23 EST
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That was a very well written chapter. I know exactly what you mean about your muse being set on writing a scene that's not ready to be written yet. I want to write the very end of my story, but that has changed five times since I started writing. ///////// I like the way you portray the annoying brat that I know is in every group. I am anxious to see what they do in the future, since there is so much to do, everyone is going to have to stop sitting around and start actually doing something. I love these kind of stories. Have you ever read "Hatchet" and the sequels derived from that? There's "The River" and "Brian's Winter". If you haven't read them, I highly suggest that you do. It will provide a really good reference when writing scenes that address the problems of surviving in the wild. Cloths, food, hunting, *winter gear* (If I am correct it is summer, and winter is not too far off. If they are not in a tropical region, freezing cold temperatures will definately present a problem), even building shelter. I don't meant to tell you how to write your story, I'm just giving some suggestions. Keep up the good work! ^___^
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Reviewed By: update On: September 14, 2004 10:24 EDT
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i love this story! please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 16:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always a great fic! With so much school and work how do come up with the time to watch Inuyasha?
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Reviewed By: BabayBunny aka BB On: May 27, 2004 11:08 EDT
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Ah i love this story! I can't wait till you update!
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 03:27 EDT
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i love the was Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship is growing. the descriptions of the sounds and smells are really good and well done. does Inuyasha still have the leaping abilities he has in the anime? and are some of the less important members of the group going to die from one thing or another? i liked your descriptions of the fruit and animals. can't wait for more. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Moon Child (lazy) On: May 26, 2004 21:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhhh, now there is some Inuyasha/Kagome stuff. I like how you had chapters to lead to very small Kagome/Inuasya. It makes it more enjoyable. Update! YOu are seriously my favorite author, well one of them up there with Ookami and Nanda. But I've read more of your work than theres. I love yours!
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Reviewed By: katz21 (stupid MM.org won't let me sign in) On: March 20, 2004 00:21 EST
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awww....dats a good fic! u should keep writing it....no pressure tho....jus reminding ya!!buh-byez!!!
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Title: ohhhh hi
Reviewed By: grinning idoit On: February 27, 2004 23:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! ITS VERY WELL WRITTEN!!! oh and any way.... if you havent read inuchan82's story its very good!!! oh ya and... I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOON
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Reviewed By: ME On: February 27, 2004 21:11 EST
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Inuyasha--attitude much?? ^_^ gotta love our hanyou!! it'll be interesting to see how their relationship evolves--update when you can!! ja ne!!
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2004 04:17 EST
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lol, they got sunburned, face sunburns always hurt the most to me, but then again you don't have to worry about lieing on it or anything. i love the tention between Yash and Kag. it fits them so well. ^_^ up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(not signed in) On: February 26, 2004 21:44 EST
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ugh inu ur such an ass...good chapter!
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2004 16:29 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wooh! Another great chapter! ^___^ Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(not signed in) On: January 25, 2004 12:23 EST
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i like this story. its interesting.
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Reviewed By: ME On: January 24, 2004 20:50 EST
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Off on a new planet--can't wait for some interesting Inu and Kag action to get rollin'--should be loads of fun^_^ update soon!!
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Reviewed By: sabriel7 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 21:03 EST
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This is like the most awesome story! Update soon! I can't wait to see what happens!
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