| "Foundations of Neo Genesis" Reviews/Comments [ 97 ] |
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Lucifer001 On: March 25, 2005 00:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awsome story, i can honestly say that i havnt run across any like it except with the exception that it reminds me of the movie matrix, but other than that this story has taken my breath away and is impossible to stop reading once ive started... trust me, i tried lol. You have used a wide vocabulary and i have not seen any spelling errors and it's extremly fun to read in the sense i can let my imagination take hold! I cant wait for the next chapters!!!
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Reviewed By: baka onna On: March 17, 2005 18:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, I just hate it that you havn't updated in so long, not that I can talk though. Hope you update again soon, such a good story!
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: March 09, 2005 19:32 EST
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yay! you've updated!
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Reviewed By: BabayBunny [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 13:44 EST
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*wipes away tear* you updated! Ah...*breaths in the sweet scent of an update* i hope you updated soon. *looks around* thats really all i wanted to say. that and that is seemed inuyasha is not as much an introvert as before.
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 02:04 EST
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yay for new chapters! i love this story. can't wait to read more. sorry for the late review. been really bissy. now i must go to bed. i have to get up to catch a plain in 2 hours. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess - not logged in On: November 14, 2004 23:31 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a cool story! really can't wait for the next chapter and i hope u update soon!
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 10:32 EST
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you updated!!!!! good chapter! Looking forward to more.
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Reviewed By: sabriel7 (2 laz to log on) On: November 02, 2004 23:45 EST
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YAY! You updated! It was an interesting (though short) chapter, I can't wait to read the next one! Next time don't wait so long, the suspense is unbeARABLE! ;p
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Reviewed By: an update! On: November 02, 2004 23:42 EST
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yay! i'm so happy! it's such a great story! hope you update again soon!
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Reviewed By: Zonza [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 21:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow ^_^ Another good story by you! I like it a lot too, just like the other one of yours that I've read... I really need to cheek your profile sometime and see what other stuff you've written, your a really good writer... one that's gotten me hooked on two stories already ^_^ anyway, I shall be eagerly awaitng your next update ~Zonza
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(NSI) On: November 02, 2004 20:44 EST
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aw yes inuyasha is charmin as ever...glad to c a new chapter =)
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 19:59 EST
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*sarcastic* ohh Inuyasha's such a sweet guy. yeah right. he can be such an @ss sometimes. I know it's his defense mechinism and all but sheesh you just want to twist his little fuzzy ears right off sometimes. but you know we all love him because if it. (or atleast in spite of it)
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Reviewed By: Moon Child [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 19:40 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm lovin' it like I always love your stories. This one is more slow and realistic in many ways, not that any of your other fics aren't. This one is just...calm, but you never know what will happen next since they're in such an unpredictable situation! Can't wait for more updates. It seems no one updates their fanfics very often anymore, and I don't search or begin to read new ones unfortunatly. *le sigh*
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Reviewed By: Umi2583 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 18:54 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweet Jesus, there IS a god! I adore future-Earth fics, and JadeWing's is a good story, like you said. But this one....Whew. This one will be hard to top. I haven't seen such an outstanding AU fic in a long time. Your narration is great, and the pace is excellent. Hm, is that a little tension I'm sensing between Kag and Inu? Ohhhh yeah. ^_^ I will say, though, I couldn't quite picture the "eight-foot tall" ...thing. Is it more griffon-shaped, or giraffe? Once again, love this! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: skne On: November 02, 2004 18:21 EST
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I like the way this is developing. And somehow I'm still interested after such a long wait... ;) Nicely written and all. Looking forward to the next chap.
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