| "Foundations of Neo Genesis" Reviews/Comments [ 97 ] |
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2006 16:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not half bad, its survival asylum futuristic meets inuyasha, instead of Survivor meets inuyasha (which, I have to say, that idea disgusts me). Keep writing, this one looks interesting. One question, Kouga and he other demons only see Inuyasha as a half, and he's disrespected by both sides. How can they even tell he is a half demon, if demons are animal human hybrids? Scent alone? In addition, are all the half-demons low class and uncouth like Inuyasha? Just asking in terms of your wtory, it makes things more obvious. Anyway, keep on writing, this story seems to get more interesting.
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Title: Yasraena
Reviewed By: Emotionless_Facade [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2006 00:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aaaahhh! You updated! Oh my god the apocaclipse is coming!... alright, i'll quit with the dramatics, but damn, i thought you had dropped off the face of the earth or something, anyways, I'm off to read the new chapter as I have yet to do, and I know it'll be as good as the others. Ciao! ~_^
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Reviewed By: sabriel7 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2005 18:28 EST
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This review's a bit late, but thanks for updating! I can't really blame you for the long in between updating gaps because I do the same thing. -.-' But please update soon!
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Reviewed By: SevenStar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2005 10:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was the best chapter as far. To bad he use that favor but it's your story to do as you like. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Maggie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2005 02:08 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! I love how everyones in character and that you're not rushing Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship too much--its very endearing and more fullfilling then reading overly mooshy stuff. I'm sad that it seems you don't update quick but--what can ya do? ^^;; Thanks for sharing your story with us! Much love!!
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Reviewed By: sabriel7 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2005 21:00 EDT
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I LOVE this fiv, I really do! And thanks again for that help with finding 'Trascending a Dynasty'. Please update soon, I'm dorry this review couldn't be longer.
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 16:01 EDT
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i liked this chapter. fun and relaxing. did Inuyasha not want to get in the water because he didn't want Kagome to see his brandings? well anyway. loved the chapter, can't wait for more. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2005 02:40 EDT
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it's starting to become laughable how naive those people were when they planed this trip. Inuyasha has a point when he says it was stupid to not bring any weapons. i know they didn't want people to get hurt but they seemed so conserned when they saw the eye of that bird in the beginning, then they decide it's a good idea to bring nothing to defend yourself with? stupid if you ask me. i agree with Inuyasha and Kagome. it's stupid of Sango to think the same laws on Earth aply on the new planet. things don't transfur over that easily, you have to change your rules to best sute your surroundings, i don't think the demons were wrong to search out other food. they had a good idea they just weren't prepared for the outcome. learn from mistakes. i have to admit i almost laughed when Sango said she wanted to have a trial for them. she's being ignorant of the siduation and acting like they are back in the city. i think she's going to find that her military rules won't help her out this time. also the Omega symbol on Inuyasha's neck. that's the symbol for murdur isn't it? it's for Kikyo's death. that's why Shippo had such a strong reaction to it. out of all of them Inuyasha has the best bet of staying alive at this point. he may be acting like an ass but i think he has his reasons and has the best chance of learning from his mistakes and addapting to survive. they're in the world of animals, normal living standurds don't aply. the street people should know that better than any of them.
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Title: Great story!
Reviewed By: Enchanted_Nymph(not logged in) On: August 02, 2005 20:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, I really love this story but I have a question. Does the political issue you mentioned this story being based on a bit have anything to do with taking care of our enviroment? It's just a guess, but you had mentioned the pollution thing and other stuff like that. Also, are you going to talk about how Inu feels having pretty much gotten someone killed? Again, I love this story and know that you will always have fans for your writing. Please update soon. Ja, kittie. oh, P.s. I understand about not having time b/c I have 2 younger siblings, and I have to watch them, go to school, write papers, take care of the house, and work. So don't think we don't understand when it takes awhile to update. You're better at that than most writers.
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Title: I'm sorry but....
Reviewed By: sabriel7(not logged on) [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2005 02:06 EDT
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I know I just reviewed this story, and I'm terribly sorry to trouble you again. But please, I have a question I was hoping you could answer for me. You see, when I was reading one of your stories, 'Playboy', you made a remark about a story called 'Transcending A Dynasty'. You made me curious and I would love to read this story. However I've searched for both the Author and name of the story on this site and the search pulls up nothing. Has this author pulled down their account and story? If so, I'd appreciate it if you told me. I thought you'd respond better to a review than an email, thus this review. I'm sorry this isn't about your story and feel free to delete this if you'd like. If you have the time could you please answer my question by emailing me at either cheetah_girl7@hotmail.com or kagome_miko@hotmail.com. If it's easier you could leave an answering review on one of my fics like 'Camp Koshin' or 'Bittersweet Farewell'. Thank you very much for listening and I hope you respond.
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Reviewed By: sabriel7(not logged on) On: July 28, 2005 00:58 EDT
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I absolutely LOVE reading this fic! Inuyasha doesn't just bow down to Kagome as easily as some fics would say, and the plot is absolutely spellbinding. PLEASE update I'm dieing to read more!
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: kagome12_2001 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 11:48 EDT
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can u make another lemon oneshot i love yours
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 04:01 EDT
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well that's an experience. not what i would call a good one but one none the less. i feel sorry for the bear if someone was going to die i would have liked it to be Aodh, but readers can't be choosers. i wouldn't have done anything different. i would have tried to hunt. i comment your talant for 'dumbing' down the hunting skill. it was hard to keep in mind that these characters have grown up without the knowledge that people have now. i had to keep reminding myself that they don't know what i know, and therefor do not have the hunting skills that i or someone from this time would have if we were put into that sort of siduation. i was wondering though, if there were fish of some kind in the river. that perhaps they could have started with something a little easier to track, see, and predict. i don't know. it's amazing how hunger can improve your modivation to learn. i also noticed you decided to take a more realistic path with your story instead of choosing to follow the anime where Inuyasha will get a hole ripped through his stomach and be able to recover just fine. i like this fact, it always confused me when tring to figure out how he did that. based on how Inuyasha reacted to what he heard Kagome say once that he will be quick to learn that observation of other preditory animals will greatly increase his success in hunting. i'm glad you up dated. can't wait for more!! up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Davi Man On: May 12, 2005 10:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, great story. Just keep updating!
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Reviewed By: shaid (nlo) On: April 11, 2005 13:56 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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I simply love this story and I'm very glad you updated.
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