| "When We First Met" Reviews/Comments [ 334 ] |
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Reviewed By: Inus_Kagome_Forever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 10:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh thx, you just have to keep me in suspence... i just love suspence, plzz update soon its no fair doing this to me!! update soon!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 15:05 CDT
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AH!! That's just as bad a cliffy as you were going to leave it *mumbles about authors and their cliff-hanger super powers*. Isn't Kitsune a cute word? I think it is, lol. This was a great chapter. I really liked the last line in the previous chapter. Inuyasha is so sweet sometimes lol. I hope nothing happens to Kagome and Shippo, I'd cry. lol
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Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 13:58 CDT
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Oh, I hope Kagome and Shippo I all right, just like in the episode.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: May 21, 2004 08:29 CDT
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YOU ARE EVIL!!!!!!!! Well I can't really talk, I left a cliffie and haven't updated in weeks. But by Hiten's Raigekijin do you mean his thunder pike??? I love the thunder brother episodes of Inuyasha, for some reason they're my favorites!!!!! Update soon please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 01:47 CDT
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this is a very good fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: jyn&tonnix On: May 21, 2004 00:22 CDT
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LOVE LOVE LOVE!!!!
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 05:37 CDT
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confused..but hey, loved it soo far. keep up the good work. i love this story.. te he.. don't know what else to say.. Sorry for the late review. computer's not working too well at the moment. Well i gots ta go to sleep. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme (take another wild guess x.x) On: May 17, 2004 23:08 CDT
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I don't know if I liked this chapter a whole lot. Kaede and Shippou didn't seem so well written at all. I think you skipped over some of the things Shippou would have done and Kaede didn't talk in her 'olde english' a lot or whatever you call it. Anyway, I guess I'll be looking forward to the next chapter. ^^
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Reviewed By: Inus_Kagome_Forever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2004 19:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good as ussual... i just wish you would update faster!!! PLZZZ UPDATE SOON
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: May 17, 2004 18:45 CDT
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Excellent chapter! Interesting how you introduced Shippo. I wonder if the people...er, demons that killed his parents will show up? Looking forwards to the next chapter. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2004 18:39 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: May 17, 2004 17:39 CDT
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Aaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwww poor Shippou!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Who did it!!!!!!!!!!!! Who killed his parents, that's soooo mean!!!!!!!!!! I hope Inuyasha cuts them to ribbins with his claws!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2004 15:57 CDT
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What a sweet chapter! I loved the fact that InuYasha thinking of Kagome being a wonderful mother and wanting to have pups with her.
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2004 15:51 CDT
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This was a really good chapter. I liked the end with Kagome said she'd take care of SHippo, and her mom said she wanted to her to get married and have grandchildren, wne Inu Yasha was standing right there. I know whenever you decided to slip a lemon in the story it will be really good. The connection between this version of Inu Yasha and Kagome is so sweet and innocent. I love it to much lol ^__^
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Reviewed By: RabidFanGirl On: May 17, 2004 01:28 CDT
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Anytime Queenie...someone has to keep him in line or he'll never do his job...lolz Luv Ya
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