| "When We First Met" Reviews/Comments [ 334 ] |
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: June 16, 2004 18:31 CDT
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Excellent chapter. I had wondered about that. In the manga they spell it with r but in the manga they used l. It's a shame when they dont bother to prononce things correctly, even worse when they cut out bits... Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Orb (n.o.) On: June 15, 2004 19:15 CDT
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oh please pelase pelase be careful. im sure your stories are important to you as much as they are to us, but if your not well you have to come first. take a break girl, listen to your puppy slave, hes right. take the time to study, and rest up, then you can come back better than ever. now for the actual review lol, this chapter was totalyl awsome. i mean the demon was totally good (kinda reminded me of Yura of the Hair) and the dialogue from her was totally cool.
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Reviewed By: Taka TK On: June 15, 2004 14:39 CDT
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I really love the way this story is going!! The waff is great and the actions scenes are done really well! As much as I am dying to read more, don't worry about updating if you're not feeling well. Rest up, and don't stress yourself out! (and good luck on your finals) ^_^
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 21:57 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: June 14, 2004 18:55 CDT
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Excellent chapter! Good luck, hope you feel better before hand! Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 13:47 CDT
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What does Miroku mean by "I wonder who found her"? I hope nothing happens to Kagome.
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Reviewed By: Elisa On: June 14, 2004 13:39 CDT
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I love this story. You are a good writer, and have managed to write an original, interesting story. I like how you have the main story & characters the same as it is in the anime but put your own spin on it. I can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: Inus_Kagome_Forever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 11:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey that was a great chap. i hope you do feel better though. i really hate finalls, theyre just a way to stress us out before school ends. Please try and update soon!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: June 14, 2004 09:21 CDT
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Very nice original character!!! I think Naraku killed her for trying to take the jewel out of Kagome. I hope you feel better!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: monkeymary89 not logged in On: June 14, 2004 06:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!!!!!!!! I love this story. It just keeps getting better and better, if this story was a food, it would be icecream cake, my FAVORTIE FOOD OF ALL TIME!!!!!!!!!!! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!>:D *falls over* Uh, well, anyway keep up the good work and have a good summer. I know I will. *lathers suntan lotion and jumps into my pool* *starts singing* Schooooooooooooooooooolllll's out for summer. Schoooooooooooooooooooooooooooollllllll's out forever!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ahem, anyway great story keep it coming. *cannonball*
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 02:57 CDT
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oooh, more evil goodness. please update asap. I didn't understand what happened at all, but it was good! Krystal.
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Reviewed By: lovergirl On: June 14, 2004 00:00 CDT
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uh...for the previous message, i meant *friday the 3rd. last monday-thurs, we had a class field trip. school officially ended for me on the 3rd. so heh. friday the 11th was when school closed.
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Reviewed By: lovergirl On: June 13, 2004 23:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice story. i really like it. update really soon. by the way, i got out of school on the 3rd.i only came to school on friday and last week was because there was a dance on friday and last week was our class field trip. if we weren't going on the field trip, we don't have to go to school. but i went on the field trip so...^__^
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Reviewed By: Inus_Kagome_Forever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 13:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH good chap! So happy, you worried me when I read the part that kagome fell limp.... but Inu Yasha always comes to the rescue for his Kagome! I think it was pretty funny how Sango gets so flushed, and that sucks for miroku that he got hit for no reason, lol, but i cnat help but laugh at him because hes so perverted! oh yeah and i wanted to ask, your story is under NC 17 and hentai...but, does that mean youre going to have lemons in the later chaps? cause your story doesnt really seem that bad at all? Anyways, Update soon! (^_^)
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: June 13, 2004 01:54 CDT
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Ya know I'm happy Inuyasha killed that guy. He tried to kill Kagome and hurt poor little Kirara, and scared Shippou and Inuyasha half to death thinking Kagome was dead. But honestly I think Miroku got the worst of it!!!! ^_^ Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!
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