| "When We First Met" Reviews/Comments [ 334 ] |
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Title: C'mon, please update!
Reviewed By: Kaname_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 15:15 CST
Comment/Review:
Why haven't you updated at all?! C'mon, please!! It's just one more chapter, please updtate!!
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Title: WE NEED AN UPDATE
Reviewed By: inuluver313 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 11:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
we NEED an update come on.....update soon please...just one more chapter like you said
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Title: UPDATE ALREADY!
Reviewed By: Kaname_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 10:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Come on, how long has it been since you last updated this story?! Please update as soon as you can, please!!
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Title: Chapters 1-44
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2006 02:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to start off saying that I love the plot and the AU would you have created. It flows rather well and you keep the story interesting. ^^ I like how you keep the characters true to themselves and how there was never a need for the prayer beads. I did wonder though why in the beginning Kagome used shields/barriers a lot, which was good, but near the end she barely ever used them. I mean, just because she was finally able to use her powers for offense doesn't mean she forgot the defense. ^^ Especially in that battle with Naraku and his double. Other than that I thought everything from battle scenes to love scenes was done well. About your style, you tend to use a lot of "saids". For example, "Kagome said" Inuyasha said" at the end of your sentences. You do this a lot throughout your fic. I suggest spicing it up and alternating your terminology more. You did that rarely but when it was done it made reading your fic much easier and more enjoyable. I also suggest describing things more when you write, such as places and people. Your spelling and grammar wasn't too bad but could use some work. The main tip I could give you would be to flesh out your writing. ^^ I do hope you continue this fic and in turn I hope to read more of it in the future! ;)
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Reviewed By: Koski [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2006 22:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
PPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEE update!!!
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Title: Hi!!!
Reviewed By: Neko_angel666 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2006 10:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi. I love your fanfic and I hope you'll write the next chapter really really really really REALLY SOON!!!! **Get's on nee's** PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLLLLEEEAAAASSSEEE!!!!!! Love, Angela
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 17:23 CST
Comment/Review:
awesome chap. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 17:22 CST
Comment/Review:
awesome chap. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: VScorpio [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2005 15:53 CST
Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter. So, Naraku faces a full demon Inuyasha while the others remain unaware. I wonder what will happen in the concluding part. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: WRITE MORE!
Reviewed By: Shadowgirl435294 On: October 03, 2005 19:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WRITE MORE!!! This is great! Don't stop writing. I want to know what happens! Please write more!
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: D.J.-J.P On: September 12, 2005 10:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really good! Oh please let the conversation between them be kawii! Oh and good of course. Great JOB!
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2005 08:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
awesome fic. please update soon.
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: ChicChicToo On: August 20, 2005 22:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great!! After all this time. I love the ending and the beginning and, well just all of it. But now I have to wait for the next chapter! :(( But I shall suffer.
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Reviewed By: IronFang On: August 14, 2005 19:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man this story is really good. I'll be checking daily for new chapters now. Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Jessi Mae On: July 23, 2005 04:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i always go to this story when i want to read something. keep up the great work! i want to know what happens next.
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