| "When We First Met" Reviews/Comments [ 334 ] |
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Title: the whole story
Reviewed By: Crimson warrior On: July 01, 2005 10:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN!!!!! This is good stuff but try to have a whole chapter to Mir/san beacause it would be funny for Miroku bragging about he and Sango in bed and he keeps getting slap. Other than that everything is good. Oh one more thing make your Kagome want pups and then have one chapter on there life with Mir/San married life with Kag, and inu trying to manage there children.
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Reviewed By: sunshine07 On: June 10, 2005 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was GREAT!! love your story!! update soon!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Danchik On: June 02, 2005 18:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best I ever read. If I would have enough resources I would make a movie "Part5"
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Reviewed By: Inus_Kagome_Forever (NSI) On: May 31, 2005 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter, update!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: May 29, 2005 18:35 CDT
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Excellent chapter. Nice bit of fluff there, nice to see the two of them doing so well. I can't help but wonder what will happen to the four of them now. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Orb On: May 29, 2005 14:19 CDT
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Great chapter! AWw Sango and Miroku, so cute! Good way to get Kagome out of the room. Who would Onigumo not see people after sunset hmm? Can't wait for another chapter. Take care!
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2005 10:06 CDT
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i luv fluff in general, so long as it's not the nasty couple stuff or the creepy stuff that burns my eyes out....update soon please
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: May 27, 2005 20:20 CDT
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Excellent chapter. I wonder who this person is who knows where Naraku is... Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2005 21:54 CDT
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aarg, stupid cliffies. update soon please.
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2005 21:25 CDT
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hi, update soon and stuffs. Shippo's age is about 50 years old. thought you'd like to know. Oh, and no one, not even the anime experts know what Kag's mom's name is. ja!
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 18:33 CDT
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this is great please update
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2005 17:40 CDT
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that was a great chappy!! update soon!!!
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Title: Uhh...
Reviewed By: Inus_Kagome_Forever (of course I'm not signed in) On: April 08, 2005 18:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like Kitz, I also think this chapter was for the wrong story because it says chapter 40 but you put 35 in the chapter and it has nothing to do with the last one ::So confused:: please um... update soon and explain, but now you got me thinking of reading your other story so tell me the name please if this is for another story so I can read it. Just hope it doesn't have TOO many chapters cuz then I'll never update my own stories and my reviewers will hate me! Oh update soon please!! ~~~ Laterz~~~~ Inus_Kagome_Forever!
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Title: Umm...
Reviewed By: Kitz On: April 08, 2005 18:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm confused. I think you might have meant this chapter for Awaken instead of WWFM. I luv both stories btw! Your really a great writer! You just might wanna watch which chapter is for which fic... Newayz Luv Life. Luv Yourself. Luv Writing. Luv Anime. Laterz.
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2005 22:35 CDT
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this great update
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