| "When We First Met" Reviews/Comments [ 334 ] |
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2004 23:02 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: shedvl929(nli) On: June 22, 2004 20:05 CDT
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I admit that i am sometimes guilty of calling people names myself, but that is either in good fun, or when i'm trying to tell people to update, or yelling at them to update cause they leave a cliffy... which by the way, i absolutly HATE, so no, i wasnt the one who called you names before, but i will keep in mind, that even though i get mean name-calling flames, that other people hate them and i will try and never do it again. gomen. This is a very great fic, and i'm so happy with where its been taken so far. i havent found many errors at all, and i am very suprised at the origionality of this fic. all i have to say, is make it long and keep the story beautiful. also, it would be awesome if you could add some more mir/san 'dating' snippets in the future, or make another fic that had them as the main pairing. i think you are doing a very good job at waiting to do the lemon. not only does it keep people reading you fic in anticipation, but it would seem akward if you put it in too soon. keep writing!!!
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Reviewed By: Lady Battousai [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 18:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! i really love this story soo much! whoever calls u names for ANY of ur story are just jealous loser that are sad because they can't write as good as you. i mean i read all ur stories and i LOVE them all so if they are doin' that then just give them my e-mail and i will deal with them lmao n.e.wayz update soon!! byez(K)
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Reviewed By: Rabid Fangirl On: June 22, 2004 00:47 CDT
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The next one of you little flame-writing little bastards decides to pick on Queenie THINK AGAIN! I WILL hung you down and I WILL make you miserable! Great chapter QUeenie! Loving it! Ja Ne, RabidFanGirl Lizzy!
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2004 14:16 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE SOOOON ITS A REALLY GOOD STORY & I WANT TO KNO WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
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Reviewed By: Orb(n.o.) On: June 20, 2004 10:44 CDT
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Wow, people who call you names are stuff really have problems. You're an amazing author, and it doesn't take much to realize that with the relationship building the way it is there will EVENTUALLY be a lemon, gosh. Anyway this was agreat chapter. It's good that Inu explained everything to Kagome before it got too complicated. Stupid Sessho....oh I can't stay mad at him...but still. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 21:46 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: June 19, 2004 18:23 CDT
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Excellent chapter. I wish there was something I could say to help but I don't know what. I think it is sad that people behave that way. Thank you for updating so frequently and apologies for the burden. Good luck & best wishes to both yourself and your puppy slave, Hououza
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Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 13:55 CDT
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Awe, that was such a sweet chapter, other than the fact Sesshomaru and InuYasha fought. I loved the ending, where InuYasha grabbed Kagome's hand.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: June 19, 2004 10:48 CDT
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I likie!!!!!!! Bad fluffy bad!!!!!!! Now who is the nutter caling you names!? I'm telling you some people need better mamas to teach them better manners. It's okay if they're just joking though. Sooooo what's gonna happen in the next chapter???
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Reviewed By: Orb (n.o.) On: June 17, 2004 15:24 CDT
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aww little Inuyasha's runing around, i saw an 8 year old Inuyasha once and boy was he a cutie lol. I have a feeling the next chapter will be kind of awwqward, but i cant wait to read it. I hope you get better soon.
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 03:28 CDT
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hey good work. update asap. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 21:08 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: June 16, 2004 21:07 CDT
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Go Shippou Go Shippou It's your birthday not for real just for play play!!!!!!!!!!! So it was Shippou who saved her, cool!!!!!!! I hope you feel better, you don't have to update if your not up to it.
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Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 21:04 CDT
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I really enjoyed this chapter, especially Kagome's mother wanting grandchildren with InuYasha's ears and eyes. That was just too cute. And I definitely can't wait to read the next chapter and hear what InuYasha has to say to Kagome and how she'll react. Hopefully you'll feel better soon and whatever you have isn't serious. Feel better soon. Take care.
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