| "When We First Met" Reviews/Comments [ 334 ] |
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Title: title?
Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2004 21:07 CDT
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*gasp* a katana?! lol, hmm...maybe Tetsusiaga? lol This was a really good chapter. Good luck with your progect, I have a 4 days math exam type thing this week blegh!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: May 05, 2004 17:50 CDT
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Excellent chapter as ever! I think I have a guess regarding the katanna but will have to wait and see. Good luck with the essay! Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2004 17:34 CDT
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Don't have much to say... only that I enjoyed this chapter. Update whenever possible ^^
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Reviewed By: starhealer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2004 17:16 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait for the next one!! Hurry!
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Title: inuyasha
Reviewed By: uni_youkai [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2004 09:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is getting gooooooooooood. hehe. write some more plz.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: May 05, 2004 06:32 CDT
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YYYYYYAAAAYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!! He found Tetsusaiga!!!! (yes that is how you spell it in Japanese) So when is it going to transfrom for him??? Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2004 02:30 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: May 03, 2004 22:18 CDT
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Come on you can tell me what it is!!!!!!!!! Maybe Inuyasha got a little excited when he saw her naked??? And she's feeling the result of that??? (me and my hentai mind) Inuyasha has to meet her mom!!!! That should be funny!!!! Update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: candycorngirl On: May 03, 2004 18:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story it is so much fun and it is so original. I haven't read one story like it and most have the same structure. i hope that u update really soon.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: May 03, 2004 18:09 CDT
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Excellent chapter, hope both things clear up given time. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Orb (not online) On: May 03, 2004 16:50 CDT
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dun dun dun!!! What could have gotten her attation? She IS in his lap, and he DID catch her bathing...hmmm....lol I hope you feel better soon.
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 16:09 CDT
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Longer chapter than usual (I think) and I appreciate that. Anyway... not sure what else to say, or even any ideas for what caught Kagome's attention... if you want something dramaish or something to ramble on/use for some of a chapter (or even come back in later chapters) then use the bad one... anyway, update whenever possible. Good luck with future chapters ^^;
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 10:48 CDT
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make it something good thids is a great fanfic please update sooon
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Title: MORE!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: cassandra v On: May 01, 2004 15:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want more plz i love it
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 13:47 CDT
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aww, sitting in his lap lol. I'd say how cute these two are but I say it in every review, so maybe I'll give it a break. I like how sweet this story is, even though he makes snide remarks, he doesnt seems like a jackass. You're such a great author.
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