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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 07:54 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great last few chappies sorry i haven't review but MM wouldn't let me for awhile but your story is awsome so I wouldn't have them doing that up-date as soon as you can^_^
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Reviewed By: Gwat On: August 08, 2004 23:58 CDT
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okay, so i guess i cant really complain, you did update rather recently, but i would still luv it if you could update again soon! you are doing a great job on the story... ... that little kid is friggin creepy man. you havent even started developing the character yet and i already feel like i'm going to hate him! i dunno... he's prolly just trying to get them all away from their huts so that demons can go ravage them or something. .. .. .. .. hahahaha... watch him be like inu's half-brother HAHAHAHA that would be soooooooo funny... "oh yeah, inuyasha... i just found out, this little kid is your half-brother" "my WHAT? that crazy s.o.b. is my half-brother and he's hanging off of you... grrrrrrrr... i've only known you for 2 days and i already despise you almost as much as fluffy" hahahahaha, and then the runt gets his @$$ kicked... you know the drill... hahahaha keep up the great work, and i'll check in on you in a couple dayz!
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Reviewed By: Orb(n.o.) On: August 08, 2004 23:16 CDT
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wow, now I dont trust that kid. What is hs a demon? You'd think Inu would notice. I still think its cutw they' re mates. cant wait for another ipdate. take your time, you so deserve it.
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Reviewed By: ammiers On: August 08, 2004 21:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW mes loves it plz keep going
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Reviewed By: earthshine411 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 06:32 CDT
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I like this fic. At first, I had a hard time getting in to it... but now I really like the plot line. I want to give you credit for your tactful way of dealing with Kikyo. Usually when she's mentioned, writers bash and slam her to no end (which, I don't always feel is fair. Yasha running off to be with her, though... *grumble* makes me like Sess/Ka, Mir/Ka and Kou/Ka scenarios all the more. (Heck, I'd even entertain a good Nar/Ka.. haven't found one yet though.) That's a whole different can of peaches, though). So, instead of taking the usual road like other writers, you took an approach I haven't seen too much of: you decided to seperate her and (so far) make her a non-issue. I like that. I think it's a creative way to handle it, and I will say that it put me at ease knowing our dear little Kagome wouldn't get heart-broken _this_ time 'round. (In other fics, that always tugged on my heart-strings. Sigh.) Anyhoozle, keep up the great work. I can't wait to see an update! I get giddy at the thought of Yasha and Kagome having a litter of pups.
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Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 00:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWWW....another kid that's just so sweet!!!!! ^_^ keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 21:59 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: Inus_Kagome_Forever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 20:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked that chapter but i wish you had put more in it, please up date soon! And coud you tell me what Ja Ne means?
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: August 07, 2004 20:26 CDT
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I wonder who the boy could be...excellent chapter. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: continue
Reviewed By: LaDonna On: August 06, 2004 14:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue I can't wait to see what the next thing you write
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Reviewed By: FicFan7 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 00:03 CDT
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great fic, i haven't reviewed before because i was to busy readind, keep up the good work
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Title: Best
Reviewed By: Niko with a I [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 13:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are the best author. I've only read like three of your fics, but so far they are all good. I can't wait until you make another fic. =^_^=
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Title: Cute Cute Cute
Reviewed By: Mic Mic [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 12:28 CDT
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I apologize for not reviewing every chapter but I love this sotry so much. I loved how Inuyasha and Kagome met in the very beggining and everything about the story. I wonder how Kouga will take Kag's getting marked by the Inu and how Shippou will take it too. Also I am looking forward to the evil Naraku coming back. I think he would make a good character to take Kag away from the Inu. Specially if it happened while she was pregnant and when he takes her away he tries to rape her and put a spell on her to make her his...sorry I just love plots like that though. They rule. Your story rules too. Anwayz I am planning on reaching the limit on the letter countdown I am going to make this review pretty long or I'll at least try to. What I liked the most about your story I think was how Inuyasha just up and marked Kagome and she didn't do the whole resistantance thing. In fics like that my head hurts because they are too sorry to get together. I hope Sango and Miroku get together soon. They really need to hurry up and get to gettin it on. I hope that if Inu/Kag have a kid I hope it's boy though. And Sessy did promise to come back and kill Inuyasha so what'll happen if he does threatening Inuyasha's little pups. I hope that happens though I love it when there is conflict. But I can't wait for Kouga to figure it out though. Hehehehehe. I know Shippou is going to be on Inuyasha. Well here's my super long review. Anywayz this is for not reviewing. See Ya! ^_~ Mic Mic
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE THE STORY!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON, IT WAS GETTING GOOD!!!!
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE THE STORY!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON, IT WAS GETTING GOOD!!!!
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