| "The Yami Virus" Reviews/Comments [ 379 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mariku 182 On: July 19, 2004 16:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!! I love this fanfic!!! It's really good. I hope you keep updating. I like it so far even though I'm sad that Miranda lost the baby...*sniff* please update as soon as possible. One of your dear fans... Mariku 182 P.S. did you know thaty i did'nt read the other fanfics before this one... but I'm not confused... Go ahead and call me weird if you want... i'm not denying what I am. ok Again.. Please update as soon as possible!!! ^-^ *hugs Wing Dragon of Ra plushie* I'll be waiting for your update!!
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Title: YAY!!!
Reviewed By: lissete13 On: July 19, 2004 16:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
how could you do that to Miranda?she could adopt, I'm adopted!my mother lost one boy before they adopted me. his name was Christopher. I dare you to use the following saying sometime in the future. "the village called, they want there idiot back"
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Reviewed By: tolazytologin On: July 19, 2004 15:32 CDT
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HAHAHA! Vira ain't gettin no sleep!!! DA BITCH!
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Reviewed By: Seto Lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: July 17, 2004 10:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awie... ^_^ That was so sweet! Poor Miranda.... Marik's being so.... non-horny.. about it... O_o He's being.. sweet... ^_^ So happy Aten's being accepted... I love his paintings.... It so kawaii! Also.. I feel so sorry for who ever has to hold Tristen back.. I mean, If you care about your limbs.. maybe that ISN'T the safest job... O_O
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Reviewed By: Kura Magician Girl On: July 17, 2004 01:01 CDT
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Aww that was a sweet moment. ^_^ And I'm so glad Aten is fitting in. And Tristan needs to be held back from squishing Aten so hard. lol. Till next time then. See ya!
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Reviewed By: Valea On: July 17, 2004 00:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hold back? BRING ON THE SQUISHING! That goes for me too! Do your worst! SQUISH ME! *eats a pastry* First I want to say, I'm so proud of Aten, painting all those kids pictures was kick butt (i jsut went to camp for an art and photo session it was good times) and i loved the last part of the chapiter when it was a cute lovely Marik and Miranda moemnt. it was all sweet and liad back and...yeah! *keeps eating pastry* want some? *holds some out to her with mouth full* its good! and yeah! MIRANDA IS A COOL MOMMA! and so is ryou! yay *runs around in circles*
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Reviewed By: I_Is_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 19:31 CDT
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Uh oh! *splints your hand* sorry. Is that better?-----Awwwww.... Universal love is sooo awesome.-----*pulls out cowboy rope and lasso* I'm ready to hold Tristan back now!
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Reviewed By: Jedi student On: July 16, 2004 02:25 CDT
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I likws this chapter poor meranda it hurts alot when achild diees any way i no this is not the plaace for this buy the way haave yoou seen or no what happen hato chiisai just wonderng since your friends.
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Reviewed By: Kura Magician Girl On: July 16, 2004 01:32 CDT
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Poor Miranda, at least Vera's gone, for now. ^_^ So Aten meets new kids, that's good. And that brief flashback of Jessica, was evil, I read The Fall of Icarus and I think I started reading the one after that one, I forgot about reading it. Lol, till that flashblack reminded me. Well till next time, which is probably tomorrow. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Valea On: July 15, 2004 23:38 CDT
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Oh poo! Why! oh wehy did she have to loose the baby! Im so glad that she at least has the support of everyone no matter what that vera woman says but ti doesnt matter because she's gone now! All gone! Marik is so considerate, a great father he be! And go Aten! He made friends with his homie g in africa! its all good times, now he won't feel so different, at least for this point in time. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Broken Time On: July 15, 2004 19:27 CDT
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Oh my gawd.. I'm sorry I wasn't here to update ;-;! I was in Sudbury.. but that's asode from the point... POOR MIRANDA!! That's got to be hard on her...
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Reviewed By: Seto Lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper, and hugger of Miranda! On: July 15, 2004 18:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AW.... Seto hugged Miranda! T_T That was so sweet! poor Mira-daaaahling.... She could always adopt.... poor angel... T_T It's sweet that Aten's happy... ^_^ I was thinking/hoping the wedding was his... ^_^ Yeah! Vera's gone! Sure, she'll probably come back, since you're pure evil... Still.. SHE'S GONE!!! ^_^_^_^ Great chapter! ^_^
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Title: I LOVE THIS!
Reviewed By: "Ty" On: July 15, 2004 13:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Miranda and Marik REALLY make me laugh my ass off, they are the best, no doubt about it! Seto got Diane's ass GOOD, that was SWEET. I love your guy's fan fictions so freaking much, I've read EVERY ONE based on the main series, I laugh, I cry, it's the BEST, keep at it! I'm holding onto my seat here! WEE!
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Title: Roxria
Reviewed By: Millenium_Girl_222 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2004 12:26 CDT
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You are doing such an awesome job! Sorry I haven't reviewed but I've been on vacation in Toronto. I almost died when my reletives told me they didn't have a computer. Anyways, you are such an amazing writer! Keep this story going! It's amazing and I cant wait to see what happens!
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Reviewed By: I_Is_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2004 11:21 CDT
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NO!! No head starts for you!!! *stabs you with everything in reach, including a candle* O_o---------- Poor Miranda. My mom lost two children before me... both on the same day a year apart. Weird, huh?
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