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Title: 0_o
Reviewed By: AltairKaosu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 11:36 EDT
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Oh lord...evil cliffhanger! Now I'm going to be biting my nails until you update again. *gnaws* It's a fantastic continuation to 'Maintaining' though. I love it, and I really hope everything turns out okay in the end. Like I said before, I'm a sucker for happy endings. Keep up the great work!
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Title: Chappie 10
Reviewed By: Plyric (not signed in) On: September 23, 2004 10:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG OMG OMG OMG! Bulma can be self-centered to fatality's-end sometimes, can't she? I wonder if she'll live through the next chapter, or if Goku will be able to instant transmission them out of the house in time before Vegeta kills Bulma! OMG! MAJOR CLIFFHANGER!!!!! =)))) MORE MORE MORE MORE!
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Reviewed By: Renzuite On: September 23, 2004 02:49 EDT
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I...drew you a picture of Vegeta.. doing arts and crafts.. It's very amusing, actually. I think long ago I said that to make him happy again that he needed a new hobby. Anyway, on to reviewing this chapter: BEST CLIFFHANGER IN A LONG WHILE. I was happy. Right now I'm in the dark because my roommate is sleeping, but I really wanted to read this before I went to bed! Yay! Now there are bugs flying around my monitor, attracted to the light. Man, Bulma sucks in this fic. Usually I love her. (Holy crap a lady bug! I didn't know they like light!) And Chichi rocks. I've always liked her. Except in Firefly's fic lol. Okay going to go now before more bugs land on me, mesmorized by the light of my monitor. Good show.
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2004 23:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok I will try not too cry and have faith it will get better. But what is wrong now why did Vegeta stop talking and what is wrong with Goku? Please up-date soon Those two need too be happy I hope Bulma backs off and can help them....ChiChi is understainding so far hope it stays that way Ok I gota go up-date soon k? Bye Bye LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2004 23:04 EDT
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Why are you starting with the evil cliffies now? Bulma is such a bitch. She just had to push, didn't she? Looking forward to more. -El-
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: September 18, 2004 19:52 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok now I am crying hope things are better soon bye LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Kethry(not loged in darn it) [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2004 10:23 EDT
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**hides her OC away** A good OC is hard to find I agree but once and a while you find some. **changes subject before Tarma gets upset.** Oh yes I can SOOO see Dende as a Peeping Tom, he can peep anywhere he wants. and he must get bored yes? Nice to see the little green man has finally come around. I was laughing my butt off about Nail bugging Pic. I like that ^_^ So Vegeta is going to put himself in the hands of Kacky for this meeting with Bluma eh? ..... well I hope it goes well, I really think they need to hurry up and clear the brain washing. It seems the more aware of it Vegeta is the more dangerous it has become. Wind to your Wing, Kethry
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Reviewed By: Kethry [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 02:14 EDT
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Good Kacky got hugs! **smiles** he needed them, now he needs a shrink. >.< Talk about repressing! I hate to say it but I have been so waorried a Vegeta I hadn't thought about how good old Kacky was handling this. **wonders if that shows her Charater loyatiy** but you have made me see that the goofy baka has feelings too. **hides** sorry, not Kacky bashing I swear! And for the pairing with the grean bean, well.... I just can't see it. to be honest dear pixelgoddess I think I would skip it. I just see Pic and Dende as well, asexual. **sighs** I really hope Ivan misses you, I have other friends that way and I haven't been able to yak online with them for a while do to the storms and it sucks! So be safe. Kethry
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 00:57 EDT
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I stay awake just because I know that you'll update every Sunday. Poor Goku, Poor Vegeta. I'm actually worried about Bulma's reaction when Vegeta tries to explain the tape. She must have already made up her mind if she was telling Chi Chi about it without trying to talk to either GOkuu or Vegeta about it. I'm really not sure if I trust her. Looking forward to next week. Thank you for writing -El- PS: If Ivan heads your way, you're always welcome to head here. Its just a 13-15 hour jaunt down the gulf coast.
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Reviewed By: Renzuite On: September 10, 2004 18:36 EDT
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My dear sadist author, I am glad to hear you safe and sound and back to torturing Goku. Is there no end to the hurt?! I didn't check my email before I replying to Maintaining on Paco's Hotel. Now that you've mentioned him, please bring Captain Ginyu into the story :D Like some really odd reference. Ahahaa any will do. That is your task. Go forth! Clever making everyone a victim. No wonder Vegeta unconsciously pushed everyone away. He's such a nice guy deep down, trying to protect everyone. Sob sob. Will everyone "die" like Goku did so that they can be safe from our lovely prince? And how long are you planning to make this one? ;)
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Title: chayron
Reviewed By: chayron [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2004 11:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thanks for another great chapter ;)
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Reviewed By: Webtester01 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 14:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wondderfull writing. I think that Goku needed to go through that experiece to make him stronger. He will then be more able to help Vegeta through tough expericences that occur in the future. Furthermore having just said the above, I think their understanding will be deepened and the Kais's will eventually help them (hopefuly).
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Reviewed By: Kethry [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 00:28 EDT
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**hugs Kackorrot and smooths his hair** Oh poor baby!!! It will be alright **looks at Pixel** won't it?? **sniffs and stands** EEP! I just huged Kackorrot! Now thats weird for me. **wipes tear** he just looked so damned sad and torn. **sighs and sits** I hope the storm leaves you guys alone soon. Sorry I missed reviewing the last chappie but my 7 year old wanted to know what I was reading**frowns** and well, it sorta slipped my mind after that. >.< sorry! **gets a drink and kicks up feet** Well I iwll not let it happen again. *grins* Wind to your wings, Kethry
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Reviewed By: Prinsess Katreena (Laddy Katt) On: September 08, 2004 23:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiya!! Hope the storm pass soon I have bin watching them I have kin down that way so here's hpoing. Realy love your story hope you can update soon I realy hope Goku can find peace of mind it is no fun living with that guilt it eat at you well gita jet Bye bye LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: ladykatt [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2004 22:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hiya!! Cool I realy feel sorry for Goku it seems all his so called friends keep turning thier backs when needed the most. I hope they can help Vegeta. Grate job Bye Bye LadyKATT
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