| "Quest" Reviews/Comments [ 162 ] |
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2004 12:07 EDT
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I missed chapter 5!!!! I was really happy when I got my E-mail that you had updated (esp since it had been awhile) and then thought to myself, 'Wait a minute, I'm missing something.' Had to go back, read chapter 5, and then read chapter 6. Don't know how that happened exactly but I apologize. Both chapters were excellent. I feel sorry for Piccolo for having to go through all of that. I'm still trying to decide how it is that he handles the personalities involved in his fusions. I liked his squimishness about it. You don't figure him as being the squimish type but I guess everyone has that one thing that they really just don't ever want to do. Look forward to reading more. Thank You for Writing. -El-
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Reviewed By: Renzuite On: August 29, 2004 10:09 EDT
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LMAO You evil woman. You start this chapter off all flowery and nice and feelgood.. then you once again start abusing everyone!!! Dah, you are a freakin' sadist ;) Very good chapter, despite your fondness for making everyone suffer. I guess now everyone has to die for Vegeta to become public-friendly. Let's start with Krillin! Mwahaha. Thanks for delivering a longer, better chapter this time :)
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: Princess Katreena (LadyKATT) On: August 24, 2004 23:11 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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hi, sorry it so long to review this chapter. Well I hope to see up-date soon hope your back is feeling better. Hope you can work Gohan in somw how. Bye Bye LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: chayron [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 11:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was nice ;)
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Reviewed By: Renzuite On: August 20, 2004 15:25 EDT
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Oof, I've been so busy! I've been packing and scrambling around town to prepare to move (tomorrow!!) but I wanted to make time to read your fic!!! I adore it. So sweet. Sorry if my review is so short. I've got tons to do still ackack starting to panic !! But I do oh so love Vegeta purring "Kakorrrr" oh man, if only they did that on the show hahaha! Take it easy with your back. I hope you get better soon--bad back is no fun at all. I'd give you the massage! So feel better okay and eat some blueberries.
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Reviewed By: Kethry... ((darnthing wont let me login) On: August 20, 2004 03:05 EDT
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Sappy saiyan sex...well I can hadle it as long as you promise to have them distroy more things at some point. **holds nose at fish guts covered boy** oh me! that stinks! **sighs a bit and grins** I like the idea of them having standing prizes for the most control or lack thereof... dosen't every couple? I always lose that, but I like my prize **big grin** keep it up...
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 15:03 EDT
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Is pixelgoddess feeling ok??? First weekend in a long time I haven't had a new chapter notification to brighten my inbox! Anyway, just wanted to say that I really like those little lulls in your epics that are about family life and relationships, and I want to see more of Chi & Rezu--they deserve their own fic! I'm already fussing about what to wear to the wedding--! You've been such a great updater, so no pressure! But I miss my pixelgoddess. *pouts* debbiechan
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Title: chap 4
Reviewed By: XxNeko_YoukaixX On: August 14, 2004 07:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww Vegeta was bein' a daddy to Goten *squeals* thats soo cute. at Chichi's weddin' is anythiun' big gonna happen(bad or good don't care just as long as i have my playmate & fics to read); & the brainwashin' problem, is it only gonna last like what a few chaps before everythin' is ok again & Vegeta & Goku go at it again like rabbits(don't they always). *BIG neko gin* i can't wait for them to hurry up & get on with it *cuddles against Pixelgoddess* & hey i like this tender flesh of ur hehe nice & soft *keeps cuddlin'* *glares at all* THIS IS MY PLAYMATE!! MINE MINE MINE!!
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Reviewed By: Kethry [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 08:46 EDT
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**holds nose** Boys covered in fish guts!! Oh yuck! I do like you reason for the harpy Chi Chi.. makes sense in alot of ways. And yes Kackorrot was an bad father for so darn long. The flash back is nice. Vegeta riding to rescue, I like that and in full Vegeta "hn" style at that **wink** .... **rubs hands toghter** play play! teehee, more Super Saiyan distraction sex yes??? **makes cute face, batting eyelashes** pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee. Piss of Bulma more muhahahahahaha... **clears throat** I always thought she was a bit to hauty anyway. **whisles and rocks on toes** I didn't say that, nope nope didn't at all. **grins** keep is up! **huggles and skips away to torment her readers more, still laughing evily over her cliffy lemon**
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 19:33 EDT
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It was pretty and sweet and yes, very fluffy. like cotton candy. I really liked the grocery store scene. -El-
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Title: HIYA!!!
Reviewed By: LadyKATT [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 00:04 EDT
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Cool I like how you are doing the flash back not to long but enough to explane some things. hope to see more of Gohan and how is The ever so loveble Price? Well gota run Bye Bye LadyKATT
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Title: chap 3
Reviewed By: XxNeko_YoukaixX On: August 09, 2004 08:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
poor piccolo he had to deal with Vegeta for 2 month hehe i can just see Piccolo gettin' ready to pull out his uhhhh what do u call thos thin's stickin' out of his head?(whatever just seein' Piccolo go crazy is always funny ^^) this was a cute chap *squeals*(hehe Goten doin' what i'm doin' *lays nested against Pixlgoddess purrin' pleasently*) i think the endin' was cute when Trunks got embarressed *does a neko grin* but i feel bad for Vegeta & Trunks. they both seem to be pretty upset 'bout not seein' eachother in a lond time. & when Vegeta saw Trunks & got that weird feelin' (thats usually NOT a good sign) just what r u up to?(why do i even ask that this is the queen of torture *smirk*) & the brainwashin' thats doesn't look like its goin' away anytime soon is it? uhoh why do i get the feelin' somethin' bad will happen to either Vegeta or Trunks or both of 'em *scrambles under Pixelgoddess's shirt & presses against her for tightly comfort*
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Reviewed By: Kethry [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 15:40 EDT
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Poor Trunks! and *pouts** your not going to let Kackorrot stay that way eh? aw sucks. oh I just had a cute image in my head of Kackorrot crouched and ready to pounce on Vegeta, his tail waving in the air. great to see an update so quickly. Thanks! Keep up the wonderful work.... and oh... being eveil is fun... I left my poor readers witha cliffy lemon, muhahahahahhahahahahhahahaha
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Reviewed By: snen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 06:47 EDT
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Um.. how do I view all your fics? I've tried clicking 'Other works by this Author' but it only comes up with 2, Eggs and Crime Doesn't Pay. I know you've written more (such as Maintaining) so how come I can't see em?
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Title: HI
Reviewed By: LadyKATT [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 21:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, Realy good please up-date soon. I realy am enjoying it. Bye bye ladyKATT
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