| "Sloppy Seconds" Reviews/Comments [ 198 ] |
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Reviewed By: zenia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You aren't happy with this chapter?! XD I loved it. I got all teary at some parts. I am glad I have found this story.
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Reviewed By: Vulcana On: August 13, 2006 19:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There is a reason why "may you live in interesting times" is considered a curse. In this case I hope things become boring for you quite soon so you may get some stability back in your life. I picked up this fanfic when you posted this chapter and I would like to say it is really well done. I was touched how you brought your own personal experience (what some would view as a tragity) to play in the fanfic to bring things alive for us and to show us that even though bad things happen to good people this too will pass and you can gather strength from it. I hope to see more from you soon and wish you all the best in whatever you may decide to do.
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Reviewed By: MG On: September 26, 2005 22:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This story is one of the best I have read yet; you capture each character perfectly, as most people make them act accodrding to the authors own will. This is truly a 10/10 story, but you haven't updated in almost a year?! No!!! Hopefully I will see an update sometime soon! -MG
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2005 22:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow, I just finished up through the last chapter posted and I'm still reeling in the after effects. The story is beautiful and complicated just like the characters. The friendship, family, and love are so touching and real. You are a wonderful writer. I hope that you continue their story because it has been one of my favorites and I can't wait to see where their choices lead them. Thanks so much ;)
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Title: abheff
Reviewed By: abheff29 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 00:39 CDT
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I loved your fic, especially the last couple of chapters, anxiously waiting until you update again.
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Title: Ch 1 - 34
Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 19:02 CDT
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Wow, I really like your story. I'm very impressed with your character development! I loved 'watching' Kagome's power grow. I'm pleased with how you kept all the characters IC and I was touched by the addition of your experience as transposed upon Kagome's mom's. I am also a mother of one boy, and I was impressed with your strength and faith. I look forward to your next chapter! Please update soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: DraconisPrincess On: June 15, 2005 03:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy this fic. I was also very touched that you included some of your real life issues in it. I also know what it is like to have someone with Leukemia and for some reason, this story has really touched me. I have often wondered about the what ifs, what if he didn't have Leukemia, what would life be like, but for somereason, reading this has helped me to accept it. Thank you so much for this fic. You may not have set out to affect someone's life, but you did and I am greatful for it. Like I said, this is a wonderful fic. sr63705@appstate.edu, Sarah
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Title: Update PLZ!
Reviewed By: Inuyasha or Inuchan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2005 15:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz. update i want to see well read what happens next.
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Inuyasha or Inuchan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 02:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
holy crap your story is the best fanfict i have ever read in my life! I have never red a fanfict that made so much sence and had a good story line to it. I cant wait to see the next chapter of your story.well what i want to say is KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!!!p.s update soon plz.
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Title: Sloppy Seconds
Reviewed By: Aj On: May 18, 2005 18:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it so far cant wait for the nezt chappy, you rock it was the shit.
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Title: I like it
Reviewed By: AmonLover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2005 17:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I ve always Love The story and yeah Great job
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Julies On: May 02, 2005 00:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story!!! There was nothing about this story that i didn't like, i wanted to cry at some parts but the way that you ended it was awsome. I don't think that there could be a better way for someone to end the story. I think the way that you were able to make a part of this story in memory of your husband, was beautiful. I was crying by the end. I just love how you were able to keep with the charaters, with/o to much OOC. I would say that this is one of the best that i have read with in any genre. The story had pefert amount of ups and downs. Even M&S lemon was perfert. I would never have thought that Mikrou would be a card carrying member of the V club. You had me on the edge of my seat all the way through. I had to wait awhile for the last chapters were being writen but the wait was complety worth it. I loved the way that true love would come true. There is nothing more sweet than that. But I wish that you would have killed Kikyo in a painful way. But her going quietly in to the night was nice. But i would like to know what happened after the story ended. that would be intersting to see if she could go "home". But i can't wait for another story to come out, so i can see what other troubles you can get the group in. Or more pics that would go with any of your stories. the ones that go with this story was nicely done. With the shadeing and every thing. Keep up the good work. I think that you could come up with several more stories like this one. Thanks for writing
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Reviewed By: Ikiwi (not logged in) On: April 11, 2005 23:32 CDT
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Gahh! That was amazing. Great lemon - very erotic and enjoyable. I just began reading this fic yesterday, and I just finished now. It truly is remarkable. I loved it. Your characterization and plot are great, and I love the detail. Again - an amazing story. Please update again soon!
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Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2005 03:14 CST
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Reviewed By: kittyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 21:15 CST
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Wow. That took me two days to read, but it was damn worth it. I don't even have the words to tell you how amazing that was. I mean.....wow. If you ever have any free time I would love love love! any kind of tips you could give me.....wow....so good, update soon please:)
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