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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 16:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG you recommended me and my story. I love you and want to marry you!!!!! Oh, I just stopped by to read chapter 24 for the millionth time. I come by and read it over and over again once in awhile when I'm in the mood for a good sex scene. It's gotta be my favorite sex scene ever. You rock, girl! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Animechicka1992 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 11:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This thing rocks! I actually read up to chapter 34 in about 3 days because it is so good. Keep it up and I can't wait for your next chapter! Woohoo! *does the 'you rock at writing fanfics' dance*
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Reviewed By: Doujo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 19:01 CST
Comment/Review:
hum... I don't remember if I reviewed that chapter... Oh well, just in case I didn't ^^ it was a really good chapter! though it was the first time I read a lemon lol anyway, I hope you'll update soon! As I can see you didn't update since Jan. 17th! a whole month... sigh... I guess you're really busy! well, I still hope you'll update soon ^^ lol see ya now!
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Reviewed By: Sexysaxist On: January 27, 2005 16:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!!! oh I say wow. That was...... That was..... so amazing. I can't even think of the right words to tell you how that chapter touched me. Damn. WOW!!! Honey you have got some major talent. WOW!!
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Reviewed By: Sexysaxist On: January 27, 2005 15:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved that book as a child!!! This story has had me up reading til 5 in the morning, it's so damn addicting. I also really loved that kitten nose image of Sango's beautiful parts. That was an original description. My sisters introduced me to this story and it had been an absolute delight to read. I love it.
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Reviewed By: Fujinakaheero (not signed in) On: January 20, 2005 15:52 CST
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Yay!!! you finally got the lemon chapter up. I loved it. I'm hoping you don't get too side-tracked 'cause I want to know what the wish will be!! My gods though I loved this chapter... different.. but different is good. HEhehehehehe! Okay I'm sorry I'm done... I'll be reviewing again when you up-date and post ur next chpapie
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Reviewed By: Hanging by a Moment On: January 19, 2005 22:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story has been absolutely fantastic! I've loved every minute, and you've really captured the magical feel of the saga (with a few appreciated citrus touch-ups!!). I must say that the only thing that could possibly make this story any better would be a "best of borth worlds" ending -- for Kagome to embrace the best of both worlds, and continue to be able to travel between the modern era and the Warring States Era, and Inuyasha to use the Jewel of Four Swords to become the "purified demon" form seen in the final episode. Fantastic work!
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Reviewed By: InuKag Fan On: January 19, 2005 17:33 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was AWESOME! EXTREMELY romantic and touching! This story just gets better and better! It was brilliant! ^-^
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged in On: January 19, 2005 14:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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wow, that was GREAT. absoultly beautiful scene between the two of them with such compassion in your writing. wonderful lemon and story behind it. keep it up, your doing marvelous.
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Title: hmmmmm
Reviewed By: inukenshin On: January 18, 2005 18:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmm very good i must say but it kinda drags itself out in the begining i do love it and its good its rare to read a good fanfic these days and this is really good (mi tping bytes del wit yt)
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 05:20 CST
Comment/Review:
(I wish one could edit reviews) To clarify, what I liked about Kagome's ear caresses was Inuyasha's responses to them, that it was so symbolic for him.
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Title: The Ear thingy
Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 03:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Random plot bunny" OOOhh, that's good!! Know just what you mean :) The LEMON though was fantastic!! The whole ear thing's STILL got me tingling...ooh, stop it...oooh, ...Mufasa.... stop it, say it again....MUFASA...ooohhhh!! MWAHAHA!! ok, that was a little bizarre, but hey, so am I :P Anywho, GREAT continuation!!
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Title: Thank You
Reviewed By: MaginMan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 23:01 CST
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That was incredible. I have not read something like that in a long time. Words don't seem to do justice here, and I really didn't see the point of trying to sum it up on 1 - 10 scale. This was probably the most intense and flawless InuYasha stories I have read; notice, I didn't say InuYasha chapter. Thanks for "putting out" this chapter, but I loved you without the sex. Seriously. I will be following your stories for a long time. Thanks again.
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Reviewed By: InuRevelation On: January 17, 2005 22:15 CST
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Ooooh, that was very good! After all that delicious sexual tension, and finally bliss ^_^. I need to take up smoking after that!
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Title: yummy-yum-yum-yummness
Reviewed By: bubbles-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 21:21 CST
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Damn, that WAS fun...AWESOME LEMON!!! That had to be the best one (yes, I've read a LOT). Silly puppy, I KNEW IT!!! He said to wait...I was like, "Liar!" Kagome is like "No, I want it NOW." me: Go girl!!! Man, is it hot in here or is it just me? No really, cuz it's like 12 degrees outside! Ahhhh, lemons...sour but good...VERY good...and YUMMY! Lemons rule! I say, 'When life gives you lemons...write one and get reviews for it!' AWESOME-NESS!!!
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