| "Sloppy Seconds" Reviews/Comments [ 198 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 20:16 CST
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Great lemon. I like this a lot better then the bit mark ones. Although those are good too. And Inuyasha is a bad boy. Can't remember saying that. Yay right. Hope you can update soon, later.
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 17:07 CST
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Well, it didn't read like every other Inuyasha/Kagome lemon. I thought the ear thing was a good touch and I particularly liked Kagome "deflowering" herself.
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Reviewed By: Dark Angel Of Love [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 16:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was one of the BEST lemons I have EVER read! ^_^ yes, Inuyasha is a very bad puppy *giggle* maybe plot bunnys arn't so bad ^_^ update soon!
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 15:45 CST
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Very tastefully done! *fans face* I really don't think, when considering the relationship between InuYasha and Kagome, that 'smut' should ever be used. While InuYasha may be illmannered and verbally crude (who wouldn't be, considering his lack of positive contact and the hostility he endured during his lifetime alone) but he has been ever gentle with Kagome. It's very possible that his fear of hurting her would create just this problem that arose in this chapter. And I also believe that Kagome is just strong and determined enough to take over and save him from his own conscience. I always love how everyone is surprised when this sweet and kind girl goes ballistic when she thinks someone she cares about is in danger, especially InuYasha. He may protect her from all harm when he can, but she protects his heart. --- I just love watching these two characters together. Great chapter.
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Title: o_O
Reviewed By: cj flutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 11:56 CST
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oh my *blush* I knew those candels were for something!
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Reviewed By: InuRevelation On: January 17, 2005 09:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is very good.
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Reviewed By: Dark Angel Of Love [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 22:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! that was soooooooooo good!(the last three chapters) I tell ya mm.org isn't letting me get to your chapters so I have to read them 3 and 4 at a time. -_- boy that gets annoying. but anyway that was your first battle? no way! I don't believe it, that was soooo good! way better then my first one. and the emotion in the last one was beautifuly writen. I don't know how you do it. and I'm proud to be part of your support group(I hope I am anyway) you've help me out too you know, knowing that I'm not the only one who had loved ones die around christmas helps alot. so the lemon is up next eh? I hope that doesn't mean that the story is over, I'm going to be soo sad when it finally is over. your going to write another after this one right? I hope so. anyway loved the chapters and I hope you update soon! ^_______^
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Title: YEAHH!!
Reviewed By: , INU-KAGLOVER On: January 14, 2005 02:03 CST
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I'm so glad to hear that your grandpa is going to be ok!! I don't know WHAT I'd do if something happened to mine. :( Anywho, your a/n was just awesome! I got this warm, tingly feeling (no, not THAT kind, and NO, i'm not being sarcastic!!) when I read what you wrote. And I totally agree about the whole mankind not being total dumb@sses :) And once again, your story's great and you've managed to get me ALL worked up. I HATE when you do that!!! :P
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Title: w00t
Reviewed By: Spaz913 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2005 11:52 CST
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Go you! w00t w00t! These last two chapters were awesome! Keep writing like that and I might just have to force all my friends to read the fic. ^-^ Of course, I'm probably going to do that anyway. Nice work here! Can't wait for the next chappie! Update soon.
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2005 17:06 CST
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Can someone wash my hair like that??? So - she just wants to get on with it... and why not, why did he light all those candles anyway??
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Reviewed By: nancey [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2005 22:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter, Keep up the great work! I'm gonna hold my breath waiting for the next chapter!
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Title: duh
Reviewed By: tessie_fanfic [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2005 21:52 CST
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dumb doctors, you'd think they would get things right for a change, lolz. anyway, i hope everything goes fine for u. keep you hope up and ur in my prayers! tessie
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion - not signed in On: January 11, 2005 20:52 CST
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Yay for you! Over 100 reviews!! That is phenominal. Go You! ---Glad to hear that your Gramps' news was better than hoped. Modern Medicine overlooking something that it considers erradicated...not unheard of. Many best wishes! ---Nice scene work with Kagome's vision of Kikyou and InuYasha's final goodbye. Yes, our doggie-boy F's things up too often, quick thinking. LoL ---and Major Fluffyness with the official proposal. Aww; candles, moonlight and a hunky half-dressed Hanyou...what more could you ask? WAFFage galore! ---Fruit? Did you say the fruit course was coming?? Yummy!
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2005 20:22 CST
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Fluffity fluff fluff, I love fluff.
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2005 20:21 CST
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Well that explains the Kikyou bit. Great chapter. I was hoping for more at the end, but I will wait. Loved the bath part too. He so nice when he wants to be. Update soon.
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