| "Sloppy Seconds" Reviews/Comments [ 198 ] |
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: January 09, 2005 20:13 CST
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take however much time that you need. i love this story and will stick around till i see the end of it. can't wait for it... well i *can* but... yeah... hope everything's alright!
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 05:37 CST
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Take as long as you need...we're not going anywhere.
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Title: hi again!
Reviewed By: bubbles-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 21:00 CST
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Wow, this was totally awesome! Instead of the typical gang vs. Naraku, this battle scene was unique, original, and totally kick ass! Thank you for thanking me! (wow that sounded odd) Oh wait, you're very welcome! I totally agree with you on making peoples lives better just by reading this. You have definitely made my days brighter. I'm sure that writing this and getting all of these amazing reviews has been a great experience for you. We all love you and your stories! Good job!
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Title: Ch32=Nice!
Reviewed By: Arthurschick [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 19:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that this is one of your best chapters yet. I love how you incorporated all the different characters into the final battle. Woot to smooth writing!
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2004 21:49 CST
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Nice save, Inuyasha. You really know how to talk to a girl. When she's asleep. Poor Kagome. She needs to start putting a recorder next to her head at night. Maybe he will tell her more. Anyways good chapter. Hope there's more soon. Later.
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Reviewed By: scherezade [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2004 07:30 CST
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Hello darlin! It is I, your hentai pal :) There's so much exciting stuff coming up in your story that I can't wait for the updates. Yet, I am struck again by how well you're maintaining character for our fave hanyou, Inu, and his complex feelings for Kagome. For some reason, I really liked the self deprecating way he says that he would be like a dog by Kag's feet. Not b/c I love the canine image..but it fits so well in so many ways. He's just dying to let go and be close to her. And yet, his own notions of what he must do to protect her keep interfering. I'm off to find your Christmas one shot... :)
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2004 03:14 CST
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Wow, lucky me! I caught up yesterday and you post the next chapter today! ---Loved it! A little angst because of InuYasha's terminal 'foot in mouth' disease, but nice save (even though he thought she was asleep) That will make for some nice dreams...and future plans. End up with Kouga...as if!! Who would pick a wimpy wolf over a loyal dog anyway? LOL
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2004 02:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your right, short, but sweet!! Sometimes the best moments are the shorter ones. A+ as usual, Cutie!!
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Title: Yay! I cought up...
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 15:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very enjoyable story and I'm looking forward to the rest as it comes. ---I will let others play your little "find the..." contest your holding, because I also have the whole series, (thank God for fansubbers!! LOL) I am working on collecting the manga and I'm on my way to pick up my reserved copy of the second movie on DVD today! (even though I already have all three on computer disc [love those fansubs!] and can't wait for the forth to become available...probably not until summer...dangit!) ----I love the way you have Kagome and InuYasha interact (they're my favorite pairing) and I especially love that you are trying to create a story that could possibly slip into the original. I think that you're doing a great job! ---Very sad about your loss but I'm glad to see you have found the blessing within. As long as we remember our loved ones, they are never truly gone. ----I hope you had a wonderful Christmas and will have a great New Year! I'll be waiting... *wink* Again, great job!
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Reviewed By: questofdreams [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 12:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My love for this fic has definitely increased 10-fold with the last several chapters...I love your characterization because even though there is some slight ooc-ness, that can hardly be helped although I swear Kishimoto is just hiding the fact that the sexual tension between Inuyasha and Kagome is just about scalding, hehehhee....I'm such a putz. Anyway, I thought the "plum" thing was adorable....I laughed at the chapter title ^_^ The story of Kagome's father coming from your own life...very touching and all your fans should feel special that you actually shared that with us (I sure do ^_^). I can't imagine the pain you were going through...I'm married with a daughter so I can at least try to empathize with how it may feel to lose your husband. I think the idea with the moon phases is brilliant! haha...I do believe that truly is an original idea so take it and run!! lol...thanks for your steady updating and I look forward to the next chapter ^_^
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Reviewed By: Dark Angel Of Love [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 22:27 CST
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OMG I'm soooooooorry I haven't reviewed in so long! but I'm here now! and I loved it! wow, you husband died December 26th four years ago?! that's the the exact day my grandmother died, four years ago. and my aunt died today December 27th, that's the reason I haven't been reviewing lately. we found out she had cancer about a month ago and my mom and I have been running back and forth like crazys. I know I shouldn't be on the computer this soon after she passed, but I wasn't very close to her so I'm not as sad as I should be. dose that make me a bad person? anyway sorry for rambeling, feel free to bitch me out. and I loved the last chapter! sooooooooo Inuyasha said he loved her and in front of Souts to, PLEASE update again soon! I REALLY want to know what happens! ^_____^ Much love Dark Angel Of Love
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 22:57 CST
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I found this today and I'm having a blast reading it. I just made it to chapter 13 and the AMV is awsome! I didn't know you could set up a "briefcase" and have a file picked up like that. That is very cool. InuYasha Amv's are one of my weaknesses...Thank you. I will do my best to finish reading this after I fix my tempermental pc. (it's telling me "error" dangit!) Great job so far. I also have to tell you I love your Author name. It's cute and it rhymes. LOL
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 21:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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another absolutly beautiful chapter. i was in tears reading about Kagome's mother's experiance as well as your own with the death of a loved one and the senses of a child. i do believe that children can see things that adults have chosen to look over or coersed into believeing that they do not exist. great chapter, a good tear jerker in the best of ways. as for the idea, its a great thought. of course, i love the human inu just as much as the hanyou inu. but that's a great thought. i'm not sure how it would make him stronger, because he recouperates right after the night, its still a rare thing. great story, great idea. wonderful story.
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 02:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If I wasn't crying before listening to Mrs. Higurashi's story, I am now after reading yours. It was beautifully written, but now knowing that there is a true story only makes me realize the strength behind this story. Bravo to your wonderful story, and bravissimo to your own. It takes a strong person, male or female, to continue after losing someone they love dearly, and you sound as if you've succeeded. It's never easy, but it helps knowing that there's always a reason behind everything, even if we don't know the meaning at the time. Kudos to your story, and kudos to you. You're obviously doing an awesome job!
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 01:12 CST
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Ha, he slipped. That's good. About time he said something. So now what is going to happen? Can't wait for more. Thanks for the great chapter.
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