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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2008 17:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude i was rollin at the part where kagome called inuyasha a "boy with an overgrown…sword"... lol... great job so far!!!!
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2008 05:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok i just have to let you know... i just read the first 19 chapters and i have to say that i am in love with this story.. it has been a while since i read a good story, but i am oober excited that i picked yours.... i can not wait to see what happens next.... great job!!!!
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2008 05:19 CDT
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I think I've reviewed before (I certainly HOPE I have, at least) but I wanted to stop by and let you know just how much I love this story. Absolutely awesomeness. That being said... I have ONE nitpicky thing... in Chap. 26, it says "the waxing moon"... and then "in a few days, there'd be no moon." But the moon waxes and THEN wanes, so if it were waxing, wouldn't there be at least a week or more for them, because it'd still have a chance to be full... Sorry, nitpicky sciency stuff, but I just thought I'd ask.
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Title: oh my god oh my god oh my god!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: kagome012 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 22:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG that has to ba one of the greatest love stories i have every read!!!!!.......hey have you read "just roomie" yet. just wanna know .lovwe your storie bubye.:) :): ):):):):):):)
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Title: chapt. 20 LOL
Reviewed By: kagome012 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 01:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg this is great, but i know this will sound bad but when i heard kagome say "You're just an…an…an immature boy with an overgrown…sword!", one thing popped in my mine if you know wat i mean
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Reviewed By: Teardra [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2007 10:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved your story,I love how you stayed with the original story line and gave reasoning to why everything happened in the series. I especially like the end with InuYasha, is was so cute and appropriate.
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 06:18 CST
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So absolutetly brilliantly wonderfully good! I mean, it was just awesome!
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Title: awthum sthtory!!
Reviewed By: luvofanhanyouandmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2007 00:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story!...it was so awesome please write the epilogue soon...i'll be waiting by the computer day and night 24/7 'till you do! lol jks jks. but still its really good so continue on with the writing of good stories hehe. any way once again it was totally awthum so update soon...if you want...no pressure...lol....yeah anyway, ja!
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Reviewed By: aluna87 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2006 20:26 CDT
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I completely HEART your work. I hope things in your life pick up soon (I promise I really mean that for your sake not my own greedy fic-loving ways! ^_^) I love the end, can't wait for the epilogue!
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 00:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If I had to imagine how Rumiko would write the end fight scene with naraku, it would be similar to what you described. And if i had to imagine how Rumiko would end the Anime of Inuyasha, it would be like the ending of your story. Thats how i would want inuyasha to end. Does that make any sense? *if not then...* Hell yeah, your story rocked!!! keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Miss Mischief [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2006 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
absolutely brilliant, totally loved it. i can't wait till u start the sequel.
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Reviewed By: Miss Mischief [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2006 20:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
absolutely brilliant, totally loved it. i can't wait till u start the sequel.
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Reviewed By: zenia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You aren't happy with this chapter?! XD I loved it. I got all teary at some parts. I am glad I have found this story.
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Reviewed By: Vulcana On: August 13, 2006 19:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There is a reason why "may you live in interesting times" is considered a curse. In this case I hope things become boring for you quite soon so you may get some stability back in your life. I picked up this fanfic when you posted this chapter and I would like to say it is really well done. I was touched how you brought your own personal experience (what some would view as a tragity) to play in the fanfic to bring things alive for us and to show us that even though bad things happen to good people this too will pass and you can gather strength from it. I hope to see more from you soon and wish you all the best in whatever you may decide to do.
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Reviewed By: MG On: September 26, 2005 22:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This story is one of the best I have read yet; you capture each character perfectly, as most people make them act accodrding to the authors own will. This is truly a 10/10 story, but you haven't updated in almost a year?! No!!! Hopefully I will see an update sometime soon! -MG
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