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Reviewed By: Darkflameangel(not logged in) On: July 10, 2005 01:29 EDT
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Oi! Yea..you should post it there. uggh...so many troubles with the new fic...it hates me. curse the celibate plot bunnies....If i ever get to wisconsin(planning is not working with tme) i probably will end up smuggling back cheese too. Did you enjoy my loverly picture? Hope so...o and now that i have this excellant new mental image, Can i have Caden since you wont let me have Vash? Dang my desire for tall men with dimples...curses...well lovely chapter and whatnot...i think it is time to go sleepy sleepy since i dont have to go pick rye out of the wheatfield in the obscenely hot weather tomorrow..keep up the good work and update and all that whatnot..you know the drill... Ja Ne~ DFA
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Reviewed By: amber_waves [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 00:32 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow - I just had some catching up to do! And boy did I miss a lot while I was gone. I love the new guy - I bet he's gorgeous!!! A man for our lonely little Ms. Thompson? :) *sigh* Getting ready to drive halfway across the US - and no internet for 2 weeks - I'll be doing some catch up again! It's worth it - the story just keeps getting better!
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Reviewed By: S On: July 08, 2005 23:13 EDT
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(Continued from last review) I'll only have a bit of time in the morning- and I have a 6 AM flight on the 17th)
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Reviewed By: S On: July 08, 2005 23:12 EDT
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*jumps for joy* I absolutely loved this chapter! Maybe we're trying for a Caden-san/Milly-chan pairing? He seems really drawn to her. Of course, I could be wrong. The interaction between Knives-san and Mac-san was just adorable. It showed in every word how much he cares for her- it was so sweet! He managed to remain in character and care about someone- I loved it. Vash-kun is acting like his old self again- like he was when he was with Meryl-san. Knives-san is getting ready to start some serious mayhem- he's happy and a bit more carefree. I can't wait to see what happens when they get inside the Federal Building. I hope the next chapter comes out soon! I wonder if something will happen to Mac-san. I mean, she's told to go to a safe place, but what if someone sees her and she has to get help from someone? (Like Knives-san.) He'd probably warn Vash-kun that he was going after Mac-san as he was leaving, right? Knives-san loves Mac-san too much to tell her to wait a moment. Well, that's if Mac-san can contact him without him opening up the connection. I forget if she's done this before, gomen nasai! I'm leaving for three weeks, starting the 17th, so I won't be able to read the story while I'm gone. There might be a few computers, butI may not have the time to sit there, read the story, and then write a long review. (Could you please please please try to have the next chapter up by the 15th? I'll be busy most of the day on the 16th- I'll only have a bit of time in the morning- and |
Reviewed By: dragoninu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 20:39 EDT
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Eeeee! Cool. Another player. Please allow for a fangirl squee *wait for it* Okay, I'm done. But anywho, I would like to see Knives in that outfit. Okay, on to other things, this story has progressed well. I still enjoy it and I can't wait for more. . .
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Reviewed By: D.V. On: July 04, 2005 13:07 EDT
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Ooh, nice new OC - VEERRY NICE, LOL. He sounds just brutally hot - besides that, I like guys with reddish hair, LOL. Nice work - AGAIN! Vash deserves some competition.
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Reviewed By: Darkflameangel(not logged in) On: July 02, 2005 15:58 EDT
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Gomen! Nope didnt get ye ole outline done as you can tell...woot vacations for you! Although technically i am on vacation i should be going on a roadtrip to wisconsin in a few. seriously...i have a plot..sort of..in my head..but the celibate plot bunnies are so not helping me..oi, i posted Hidden Intentions on AFF and i have 15 reviews buddy! and almost 400 hits so far..im soo proud(i blushed at one of the reviews..)but yes..wondermus chappy as always..cookie for you! hmm so we gots another hottie on scene..what is it with me and the hottie outlaw type characters..shiznit if you made him haver curls oi...i might not survive. so how many chapters are you going to have in this story..curiousity wonders. but i best get back to cleaning the porch(ick!)...keep up the good work and a big ole cookie for you(a huge one if you update before friday).. DFA Oh yea...ill mail you the outline if you send me your e-mail again..i think i lost it...Gomen
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Title: Caden=yummy
Reviewed By: Amie On: July 02, 2005 03:07 EDT
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Yay, more chappies! Knives and McKenna are so sweet together...who'd a thunk it? You did a great job with the sparring session between Vash and Knives! You write action so well. I like Caden - I hope he's a good guy. Is he trouble for Vash, or a new light for Milly? Thanks so much for keeping up with this fic. Did I happen to mention that I really love it? LOL Merci!
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Reviewed By: S On: July 02, 2005 00:46 EDT
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I absolutely adored this chapter! I've been in DC for the past few days and this was a great thing to come home to. I had a slight suspiscion (How do you spell that anyway?) when 'Ian' was introduced about him being the Bringer of Chaos, Caden-san. This is about to get very interesting... He seems a lot like Vash-kun, and though we haven't seen him kill anyone I'm betting he will kill someone. He started with his brother, correct? Though he may have been framed- and I just reread the first chapter in which he was mentioned. Maybe he's just like Vash-kun and doesn't kill and was only framed for his brother's murder? He didn't seem like he wanted to kill the men he faced, but that could have just been a way to get his message to Cruz-san. I can hardly wait to see the boys again! Knives-san is so cool in his coat and with his glasses- just like Vash-kun. They must really really really look similar now. Well, except for the shape of teh glasses and color of the coats, anyway. I can see their takeover of the Federal Building now. Knives-san may want to just kill the humans in their way, acting like the arrogant and merciless Plant we all know and love, but Vash-kun will tell him not to and Mac-san will ask him not to. Maybe Mac-san's connection with the bulding will help, maybe it will hinder them. Either way, this is one chapter that I absolutely can't wait for! The next chapter will be so cool. I look forward to reading it.
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Reviewed By: Darkflameangel(not logged in) On: June 24, 2005 23:27 EDT
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hmmm....i have an odd thought for you today...i was hanging up sheets to dry outside and a bunch of socks fell out onto the ground...the first thing that popped into my head(randomly i might add) was "its like christmas...but with socks". anyways lovely chapter...and i think i have the outline for the first chapter of my trigun ficy...expect it by monday if i dont get busy(i was planning this while i was checking heifers this evening)...wondermus...knives in a sexy duster and shades..will wonders ever cease? well my dinner is getting cold so ttyl. Ja ne~ DFA
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Reviewed By: k9gmilly On: June 24, 2005 23:15 EDT
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You had me worry when vash said "Do you wanna to do this in the kitchen or the bathroom?" but now I know he was just getting his hair cut. Anyways I cant wait for the next 15 chapters. But I have to dont I?
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Reviewed By: S On: June 24, 2005 21:06 EDT
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Another excellent chapter! Knives-san and Mac-san are so good together! I just love this fanfic- I can't wait to read the next chapter! Are we going to be visiting with Meryl-san and Milly-chan, or are we sticking with Vash-kun, Knives-san, and Mac-san? I honestly hope that we stay with Vash-kun and his group- I really want to find out what happens at the Federal Building! How will Vash-kun ask (nicely, of course!) for the bounty to be removed? How will everyone reply? What difficulties will they face? How many guards do they have to fight to get in? I got carried away... I hope to see the next chapter soon! (Meryl-san being irresistable will be very interesting when she meets the next outlaw she's supposed to follow around. I mean- even though Meryl-san is still hurting over Vash-kun, taht won't stop the new guy from trying to woo her with his gentle ways... (Gentle? Hardly! ^_^) Meryl-san's reaction will be most interesting)
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Reviewed By: K9gmilly On: June 22, 2005 15:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally Knives and McKenna are going at it. I just love this story? This is the longest story I ever read and liked at the same time. You should have saw the look on my face when I saw that you had I think 219 pages. I'll be back in to days.
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Reviewed By: Folken_Fanel19 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 10:18 EDT
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i love what you are doing with the story, i look forward to every friday when it's updated. I cant wait to see what happens.
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Title: Two great chapters!
Reviewed By: Amie On: June 19, 2005 03:09 EDT
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Things are starting to move on the Vash/Meryl front! I think you let psychotic Jessica off a little too easily, though. Should have made her suffer a bit more! Can't wait to see what will happen when the girls are on the road again. Hmm...Meryl with long hair. Will looking Rem-ier be a good thing, or a bad thing? LOL Can't wait to find out what happens! Merci!
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