| "Forever Mine" Reviews/Comments [ 199 ] |
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Title: Tear
Reviewed By: childofdarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2006 15:50 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just can`t believe it`s almost over. This chapter was really great,and very enjoyable. Vash better get Meryl a ring though! I`m going to be so sad when the epilogue is up. *hug*
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Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: Blazing Neko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2006 14:39 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe this story is almost over. Just the epilouge to go! It's been a great run and this has been an absolutly amazing story! I hope you are going to be writing more in the future! -Blaze
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Reviewed By: Darkflameangel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2006 23:48 EST
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Youve seen all my doodles....so proud you think so much of them...I so thought it was gonna be Caden sucked into the dream...but Knives, very nice. Toooouuuuuccccchhhhhiiiing! A new story....hmmm, if you want 2 more cool series to start watching try Blood+ and Noein. Good luck with the Big Contest...And props to your beta, I myself have beta duty for someone. better go do work now...laters Drop me an informative type email sometime...I had thought you went and died there for awhile.
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Reviewed By: igbogal [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2006 01:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwww! You mean, it's almost over? *sniffle* People can hear me whining all the way over in Japan... but as Frost said, nothing gold can stay. What a delightful ride you've given us, with plot developments to the very end, and stunning original characters that grow alongside familiar ones. Knves and McKenna are my absolute favorite couple; very sharp writing for those two. VxM is well done too. I can just see what would happen if they had kids: 'Meryl stood on the shady porch, letting the lull in the conversation stretch on as she searched her mind for the words. Swallowing, she looked up at her husband and said, "I saw the doctor today...Vash, I'm pregnant". He turned and walked into the hall, calling, "That's fine, I think I'll take the truck and make a quick trip to - " He stopped. When he spoke again, she could hear him out on the porch. The people on the other side of town could hear him. "You're WHAT?!" ;) Anywayz, good chapter - thanks!
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Reviewed By: childofdarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2006 12:46 EST
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Only one more chapter? Noooooooooooooooooo! But seriously, I have absolutely loved reading this fanfic, it`s one of my favorites. This past chapter made me happy, as Milly and Caden were so cute, but her love for Wolfwood can never die. I just hope she moves on eventually. I can`t wait until next week. Thank you for your great story.
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Reviewed By: Darkflameangel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2005 00:21 EST
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Ahh...so touched by the mushroom dedication. Therefore I will reply with my very own "Holy Balls", which incidently was exactly what I was thinking when Milly started her little striptease for our dear Caden. Poor man...I give him props for his self control. If it woulda been me in a similar situation I think my little inner mantra woulda been "must not let inner thoughts bleed into outer actions...must not let inner thoughts bleed into outer actions.." etc. That cliffhanger...pure evil. pure unadulterated evil. Nice in other words. Hopefully you will get to feeling better soon and you can wrangle your pillow away from the puppy. (such a nice present from hubby I must say...minus the house training that comes with puppies). To make you feel better I shall inform you that I have been drawing again and now have two more pictures joining the Caden one in my account. Hopefully they will inspire giddiness in you. Feel better soon and Soooooo cant wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Bob13 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 23:42 EST
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You can't end it! You have to go at least two more chapters then the epilogue! Please don't end it so soon.
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Reviewed By: amber_waves [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2005 11:40 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A christmas lemon - how thoughtful! Brilliant as always! Hope your holidays are wonderful and bright.
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Reviewed By: childofdarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2005 14:50 EST
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*praise and worship* Well, those past two chapters were in a word: HOT! I loved them both, but I especially loved Meryl and Vash. And Vash finally coming clean, in so many senses of the word was great. I can`t wait until the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Bob13 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2005 12:07 EST
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Update again real soon. Please.
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Reviewed By: MoonlightMage [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2005 00:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Simply put that was just as amazing as the other chapters you have produced. can't wait to read and have a very merry holiday!!!
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Reviewed By: Darkflameangel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2005 12:37 EST
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holy balls...the ever popular "get ur done" is a little late in the saying for vash. check that off the list. now Caden...."now where am I gonna sleep?" Well thats an easy question to answer, but the whole matter of sleeping will probably be relative. Nice chapter though. progressed very well and if you dont get a chapter out between now and the x-massing.....MERRY CHRISTMAS!
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Reviewed By: igbogal [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 01:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, a new part! Christmas came early! So we see that McKenna has found a dessert that is indulgent, free of artificial ingredients, and actually helps to burn calories - what a medical breakthrough! ;) Mmmm, lemony....Knives will surely wake up hunched over the table, splinters in the side of his face, groggy and wondering how he got there and where his woman is. It was great to see the characters making the kind of mistakes people can make in a relationship - like not seeing the other person's needs when we're wrapped up in ourselves. You added a nice resolution, too, bless you. Looks like the Humanoid typhoon isn't as nervous about bounty hunters or blue-haired psychos as he is about a fiesty little brunette! Can't wait to see how it all goes... muchissimas gracias!
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Reviewed By: amber_waves [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2005 12:09 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay well there's one moment of lemony freshness out of the way... I belive you now owe us 2 more! :) Glad to have you back, being a grown up is definately no fun! Luckily I get to come home every night and read something fun and cool. And on weekends I have you! V is nervous, what a baby... but of course, all will be well when he meets back up with M. (I'm sure you wouldn't have it any other way.) And Caden... I don't think M will be confused too much longer! :)
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Reviewed By: Darkflameangel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 00:48 EST
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good god woman..I had thought you died for awhile there. but, eh, life does call every now and then. hmmm, since i apparently didnt review last time i should do so now, ne? wonderful chapter as always, fluff....tis good. im sure future chapter shall be overflowing with the smutness. there may be comments lurking in my brain yet, but as they are escaping me i believe i shall go work on my latest drawing. hopefully it will come out as sexy as it is in my head(a big hopefully there!). Ja ne~ {on a side note...hooray my bleach episode is downloading!}
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