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Reviewed By: Bookkbaby84 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2005 00:09 EDT
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Meryl-san's reaction was perfect! I could see Meryl-san get angry and start shooting of Vash-kun and Caden-san got into a fistfight! I like the way Meryl-san decided to not just instantly go back to Vash-kun. If he didn't work to get her back, it wouldn't be nearly as much fun! Hopefully, though, Meryl-san will assure Vash-kun that she and Caden-san are not in a relationship. Or, she could also use the fact that Vash-kun thinks she and Caden-san are 'together' against him and put on a charade so he gets insanely jealous. (That would be interesting to read!) Of course, the damage resulting from Vash-kun's jealously wouldn't be pretty, but it would just be so interesting to see how he reacts if Meryl-san decides to pretend she and Caden-san are together.
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Reviewed By: Tai Sora Potter [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2005 16:32 EDT
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Hey, it's me TSP. I decided to start reviewing on Media Miner since FF got dumb. Any way, onto the good stuff. Let me say that you fully delivered in reunion. It was funny and heart breaking at the same time. And I love how Vash took that comment the wrong way. It's classic! I can't wait to see what stupid things he does to, I guess torture Meryl into wanting him. Men.... Can't wait for the next chapter! -Stacy a.k.a. TSP
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Reviewed By: Aaml4everFC On: August 21, 2005 15:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree with Darkflameangel they both deserved a beating. The part I most enjoyed was when Vash has the inner conflict on what he should do as to not try to let on with what he was really there for, even though its very obvious to everyone except for meryl but then again shes in denial about the whole thing.Im sooo looking forward to the part in the story where Meryl finds out about her being changed into a plant herself, I believe that it will bring up many a good moment.I wonder how she will find out, will she have eavesdropped on someones conversation or will she hear it from one of the characters and if so who, cause it would make a huge difference I think. It would affect the way she wuold deal with it. Sorry for being a bit impatiant, sorry :P but then again I really enjoy this fanfic, so I have a legitiment reason to be excited for the next update. Heres to the next update *glasses clinking* cheers. Good Luck with the next chapter!
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Title: i do hate the spam codes...and they hate me
Reviewed By: Darkflameangel(not logged in) On: August 20, 2005 01:29 EDT
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mwahhaahaaa...so not signed in. yea...Caden did kinda deserve an ass kicking for that comment...then again so did vash. Do you know how hard it is to find any Brandon Heat/Gungrave pictures so i have something to look at to draw that picture of Caden? no...thats what i thought. lol. Hoo-fricken-whoop-dee-doop-dee-ray! The rally is over. Highlight...that tall blonde gorgeous biker(not that i actually had any success other than some laughs with said biker)..yep thats it.. now i get to fence till school starts and i have to use all my hard earned money to buy books...uggh...well...i suppose this chapter was satisfactory, but the hentai little gnome on my shoulder is clambering for fluff! uggh...best go to bed. Ja ne~ DFA ~uh...if i can find picture of brandon heat soon, the caden drawing will take shape post haste...if not...it may be longer...if you can help..wondermus!
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Title: Awesome Job
Reviewed By: Aaml4everFC On: August 18, 2005 11:53 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cant possibly tell you how great the last chapter was, I thought that it was great how they broadcasted the annoucement of Vash's bounty. The part when Meryl was affected by how Vash was now free to live his life "With another person" that part made my day. Then came the cliffhanger *sighs* how very irritating.XD Good luck with the next update.
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Reviewed By: dragoninu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2005 23:14 EDT
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Eh? That's it? *sigh* Guess I'll have to wait until next update. ARGH! Anywho, awesome job once more. Can't wait. As much as I like Caden, I really hope that he ends up with Milly, because Vash and Meryl are supposed to be together in my mind. . . But author's preference. Thanks again for the update.
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Reviewed By: amber_waves [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2005 21:56 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I think you're just having fun confusing me! He definately is a flirt! I can't wait for the next chapter. Isn't Caden a darling for playing on V's jealousy that way? :) I suppose we'll see, eh?
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Title: LOVE IT!!!
Reviewed By: sexy77 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2005 22:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aine - I got hooked on your story a couple of months ago and have been following it ever since! I love your originality, maturity and your ability to leave me hanging in suspense until the next chapter!Keep up the great work!Much love!
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Title: 100th Review!
Reviewed By: Amie On: August 13, 2005 19:32 EDT
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I'm honored to have been your 100th review! Congratulations!
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Amie On: August 13, 2005 19:30 EDT
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This is going to be FUN! I have to feel a little sorry for Vash, though. I can't wait until Meryl sees him. Thanks for updating!
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Reviewed By: Darkflameangel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2005 14:36 EDT
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umm...no i still have to work 2 more days for the rally, then ill be done. ooo fluffy moment! i like the fluffy fluffy. more fluffy caden/milly moments are in order. i see much pain and bruises in the next chapter for a certain blonde gunman. when the rally is over i shall try to get started on you picture. but only if you give me a really good chapter...heee hee... but i better go eat now.. Ja ne~ DFA (signed in again....better write this momentous occasion down)
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Reviewed By: S On: August 12, 2005 22:11 EDT
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It's back to 'S' again! (I was signed in last time and didn't feel like signing out...) I loved this chapter! The touch with the radio mentioned that Vash-kun's bounty was gone was excellent. I can't wait for the next chapter- how will Meryl-san react when she sees Vash-kun? I also want to find out what happens after Caden-san says that Meryl-san is HIS insurance girl now. Will Vash-kun get all defensive and cause a scene? Maybe Meryl-san will walk in just in time to hear what's going on? It would be interesting if she heard Vash-kun's voice and stayed out of the bar, but listened as he told how he went through hell and high water to try and get her back. Or perhaps she'll have paused outside when she heard Vash-kun's voice and then Caden-san said something to make Vash-kun leave and he and Meryl-san run into each other... I love the way you're slowly developing the relationship between Caden-san and Milly-chan- they would make a perfect pair!
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Reviewed By: LiLlAdY [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 21:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story and i just found it today i really hope you update soon
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Reviewed By: amber_waves [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 01:39 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow, was I really wrong about the Caden and Milly thing?! :) But you know, a bit of jealousy can never hurt a great story. It just keeps getting better. Here I am half-way across the country and still have this to depend on! Keep it way up, girl!
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Reviewed By: Bookkbaby84 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 23:50 EDT
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I loved this chapter! I almost forgot who Keele-san was, but then I remembered when Meryl-san and Milly-chan told Caden-san about him. I do hope that Vash-kun catches up to Meryl-san and she takes him back. I hope that Caden-san gets his name cleared- and I would also love to see Mac-san and Knives-san in a traditional ceremony, but that may be pushing Knives-san a bit too far... I hope to see the next chapter out soon!
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