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Title: k9gmilly
Reviewed By: lovagirlalot [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2005 22:21 EST
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Hey it's me (k9gmilly) I finally can write a review. I don't know what was wrong but it's fixed now. Anyway I like this chapter can't wait till next chapter. Your friend K9gmilly
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Reviewed By: igbogal [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2005 00:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Internet Explorer finally let me review! This is getting so suspenseful....I just knew a Romeo and Juliet type fate was in store for somebody. *sniffle* Well, maybe not - positive energy is powerful stuff; it holds the universe together! Okay, that and chocolate ;) Too bad McKenna can't help them. Oh, and THANK you for posting my little fic thing! What a kindness. Plus, your comments gave my self-esteem a much needed boost. Write when you can!
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Reviewed By: childofdarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2005 18:06 EST
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I swear, if you kill Meryl off, I will cry, and then have to hurt you until she is somehow brought back. You cannot have her die, it`s just not fair. Vash needs her!
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Title: Awesomeness!
Reviewed By: Blazing Neko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 21:17 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
'"I'm fine now," Meryl replied happihappliyeather colored orbss.his lack of mastering the skill was part of the issue. Knives would not have ever let such a_______ly, unable to keep the tears from her bright heather colored orbs.' This part really confused me. No idea what it means. xD Where you having problems uploading the story? I checked my inbox and I had, literally, 22 e-mails from Chapter alerts from this story. >
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Reviewed By: Bob13 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2005 11:35 EST
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Vash has to save Meryl so there can be a happy ending! You can't have a good story like this end with the death of a main character, it would be depressing.
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Reviewed By: amber_waves [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2005 21:28 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I was starting to worry. Were you just making us wait because we're near the end? Hope all is well. How is it going to end???? I'm getting pretty anxious. I hope V doesn't jump out his skin when he hears what's going on. And killins... there could be some killins! :p Can't wait til friday!
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Title: Once Again. . .
Reviewed By: dragoninu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2005 20:46 EDT
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I love reading this. . . it is so well done. Now if some of my other obsessive pairings would be written in such detail. . . Awesome job once again. You have me on the edge of my seat!
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Reviewed By: Darkflameangel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2005 23:26 EDT
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yea uhuh...you better like them freebies, denyin me a chapter last week and all.lol...and another thing while i rant..I swear that chapter was short. It may be my seriously over worked brain malfunctioning, you never know. Oi, bleach is awesome. I would so have its metaphorical babies. Renji and Urahara and various others such as Zangetsu you are mine. (ok so the thing with zangetsu is pretty much physiologically and anatomically impossible(you will understand onee you watch)). Im tellin ya..that show is laced with some type of opiate that has got me addicted and when I am granted magical crazy wierd powers..I am going to make some of those characters come to life and become my slaves(what kinda of slaves...who knows? ;) )Back off of my little Bleach inspired rant...Curse you and your twisted plots..between you and Resmiranda I am about beside myself trying to figure shit out. You are so evil at times...but I like it. damn...hooked again.
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Reviewed By: Darkflameangel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2005 00:55 EDT
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oh balls....discontinue that review....i thought i was on the page for the other story i intended to review....wow...stupidity has taken over ...again....balls....but on a side note....friday has passed and i am anxiously waiting for the aforementioned chapter that you said was going to be delayed...and glad you loved the pic.
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Reviewed By: Darkflameangel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2005 00:53 EDT
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omg....that was, how shall i describe it. incredibly touching...so much to the point that i darn near cried.. currently thinking about finding the tissues. very very well written. i dont think it was all that hurried, and any oocness is gonna happen anytime you make a character that is stoic and outwardly cold engage in some type of emotional response. i dont think Jin was out of character though....just right. wonderfulness and my romantic side hopes for Jin to get his wish.
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Reviewed By: MoonlightMage [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 16:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it, Love it, LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this story has taken on a new twist and it is totaly enjoyabl, can't wait to read more.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: TGIF... actually its saturday now
Reviewed By: a_cute_bunny [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2005 14:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah! Friday again and a new chapter. I just love the Meryl attitude! I gotta get me an attitude like that!!! I do so enjoy the fluff, sigh, just a little while longer until they are reunited. Keep up the excellent writing.
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Reviewed By: Bob13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2005 13:34 EDT
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Will Meryl be saved or Vash goof up in some way? Hopefully we'll find out in the next chapter, yes? BTB, update again really, really soon.
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Reviewed By: Darkflameangel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2005 00:04 EDT
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ewww....i would so be boiling my ear if i was meryl after keele licked it. *shudder* woot! you will love bleach...they just had the big hour long episode 52-53 released.. I doubt netflix has it released yet....i dont think Bleach has been officially released in the US, I just think you can download the free fansubs right now. but seriously...that darn show and its sub-within-sub-within-sub plots are killing me. Especially since they wont have episode 54 up for another couple weeks...*cry*...dang nabbit i want to know who killed that one guy and why they want to execute her for a relatively minor crime. vague arent i? dont want to spoil it for you. i could read the manga...but naw...i prefer the anime...its got moving pictures. Oi! will there be fluff in the next chapter? Caden fluff perhaps...oh check it..30 peeps have visited my picture since i posted it.. makes me all warm and fuzzy. cant wait till the next chapter...it would be no good to have "Forever Mine" and Bleach withdrawls! Ja ne~ DFA
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Reviewed By: amber_waves [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2005 16:21 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I got a little teary there at the end. Very well done. As always I can't wait till next week. Oh, I just had a thought - I know we've seen Maryanne and Jessica (blech!) but are we going to be seeing Lina? Just curious!
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