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Reviewed By: ~Darkflameangel~ On: June 04, 2005 00:37 EDT
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not logged in(not a surprise there)....daaaammmn girl, well thats gonna lead to another priceless dream tonight...much appreciated though. i dont blame Mac for hurrying to his room, i probably woulda sprinted..lol..bout time knives got some loving, a hundred plus years without any lovin was bound to make him "cranky"...lol...well after that chapter, you may have just inspired me to go write that citrusy fresh chapter of Hidden Intentions that i keep promising you...hmmm, whoops back to what i was trying to type, darn visual got ahold of me for a second...there goes any hope of being productive, lol.. seriously awesome chappy! i bow down to your all encompassing greatness! keep it up...and you know the rest of the drill! DFA
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Reviewed By: S On: June 03, 2005 23:10 EDT
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Awwww! Mac-san and Knives-san are finally together! Knives-san is so in love with her, and MAc-san feels the same way about him. So sweet! (Maybe they'll get married... ^_^) Go Vash-kun! He's finally getting the courage to break it off with Jessica-chan, and then go after Meryl-san! He so does deserve Meryl-san... Milly-chan and Meryl-san centric next chater, huh? This ought to be interesting... I actually had an idea in one of my own Trigun stories that I was planning on writing- Vash-kun and Meryl-san are apart, and Meryl-san starts going out with some other men, just to get over Vash-kun. He arrives on the scene of one of her dates and gets pissed off- even drawing his gun, though just to threaten. It would make for an interesting turn of events, ne? So... I loved this chapter! Hope to see the next one soon!
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Reviewed By: dragoninu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 21:06 EDT
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Hello, my dear! ! ! I see some interesting developments occurring! I still enjoy your story, and I'm sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, but with school and all I had to catch up! And I love the direction your taking with Knives and Mckenna, not to mention the mutation as a result of sexual activities. . . Delicious! Look forward to the next chapter!
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Title: More goodness
Reviewed By: Amie On: June 03, 2005 13:33 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
These chapters were great! I love the idea of the mutation that will change Meryl and allow her to life a longer life. And Knives ripping Jessica a new one - ha ha ha - LMAO! That was so good. Thank you for that. And Knives setting Vash straight, too. Please update soon! I'm looking forward to Knives breaking Vash's record. Merci beaucoup!
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Blazing Neko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 15:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I absolutly love this story. It seems so hard to come across a good fanfiction these days, and then I stumbled on to this story! Excellently done, update soon!
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Reviewed By: stephers On: May 31, 2005 12:48 EDT
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THIS WAS SO GOOD! loved how jessica got a talkin to! update soon!
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Reviewed By: Darkflameangel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2005 01:25 EDT
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oooo....so you say you sprayed yourself with the hose...o that is classic...it gave me a big ole giggle yesterday ill tell you...i swear your hentaified little mind has gotten in league with my mind and will decide to make it so i have kinky little dreams of what you are going to have knives whip outtonight..( couldnt think of a better phrase)(probably doesnt help i have that pic you sent my taped to the wall by my bed)..but yes...still formulating the next chapter of hidden intentions(im tempted not to post it till i get some reviews..or maybe not ...hmmm)...trigun fic...very still in the works...well dont hose yourself again and update soon! As Ever Me~ DFA
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Reviewed By: amber_waves [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2005 01:23 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ohhh wonderful as always! I'm glad that K finally got V to see exactly what he had gotten himself into. Poor V! Are we going to get a chapter from M & M's point of view? Just curious. On pins and needles til next week!
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Reviewed By: S On: May 28, 2005 00:11 EDT
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Lovely chapter! I just have to say that I'm so happy that someone finally told Jessica-chan what she was doing to poor poor Vash-kun. I mean, he was practically drinking himself to death, and all because of her! (Jeez, she was SUCH an idiot not to realize the effect Meryl-san's leaving had on the poor Plant!) I loved the way Kinves-san developed in this chapter! There was quite a bit more Knives-san and less Vash-kun than in previous chapters (and I totally LOVED it!) He stayed beautifully in character while playing the good guy at the same time- a true show of writing skill! I love teh fact that Knives-san will also be taking Mac-san as his mate and not just a plaything. Mac-san deserves someone who sees her as Mac-san, not just a way to get what he wants or a toy to use and break. (Besides, she can keep him in line if she really wants. Knives-san would travel the world for her if she asked, though he would make such a blather about having to go.) I hope that Jessica-chan breaks off the engagement with Vash-kun now that she knows what she's doing to him. If not, then Vash-kun has to get the courage to break his promise to Jessica-chan and break it off. (Of course, Jessica-chan will probably just be down for a little while, then move on to her next option. Cold hearted- well, you know!) Again, a great chapter! Please update again soon!
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Reviewed By: Stephers On: May 23, 2005 23:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was really good! UPDATE SOON! THis is great! keep on going!
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Reviewed By: S On: May 21, 2005 00:23 EDT
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(Bookkbaby84... again.....) Love it! Awwww..... angst! I love the way that Knives-san and Mac-san are gravitating towards each other as well..... It's interesting the way you have Vash-kun drink himself into a stupor every day- it certainly seems like something a sensitive guy like him would do if his girl left! Knives-san is a lot more open and just cooler than before he met Mac-san. She changed him, but that's what love does to anyone, even a haughty Plant! So, Jessica-chan even annoys her writer? Hardly surprising. I would probably have had her kidnapped and slowly tortured to death by rabid Vash-kun fangirls.... well, if I wrote comedy.... Fine, I'd probably just have her meet up with another guy, fall hopelessly in love, then dump Vash-kun so he can go for Meryl-san, just as it's too late. Meryl-san will have met someone- a nice guy, but no one really special- and she'll at first use him to forget Vash-kun, then to make Vash-kun jealous, and then the guy she's dating will try to force her to do something that she REALLY doesn't want to and Vash-kun will leap in to save her. Awwww.... I make up the best plots in my head... (not really!) Anyways, I'm loving this! PLease update as soon as you can (and find some way for Vash-kun to break it off with Jessica-chan so he and Meryl-san can be together....) ^_^
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Title: Great chapter!
Reviewed By: Amie On: May 16, 2005 20:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Vash... poor MAC! She's really in for it, isn't she?? Heh heh. Can't wait! Merci beaucoup!
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Reviewed By: Stephers On: May 15, 2005 13:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter! Can you base the next chapter on what Vash is thinking, and maybe have him, since he is most likely drunk, tell jessica who he really loves... which is meryl of course! But, hey, what am i saying, you are after all the author here. Stephers
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Reviewed By: DFA* On: May 15, 2005 04:21 EDT
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Yep you guessed it..de ja vou again...and yes i am to lazy to log in. Wonderful chappy(as always), hmmm it would seem vash and knives are both suffering from their own respective varities of denial..im not sure where you are going with the blood sample thing, but i will have to think on it. yea there certainly arent many reviews here, out of 29 visits to my revamped chappy of hidden intentions i only got one(but it was a good un) and ah crap another plot bunny has bitten me(ive got more plots floating in my head) but update soon and keep it up!!!
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Reviewed By: amber_waves [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 19:58 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, another GREAT chapter! It's great to see that K is becoming a bit more... friendly. Oh, if he'd only stayed the night. Now all you need to do it give V a nice big kick in the a$$! I think you're doing a great job keeping everyone in character, that makes it so much more fun to read.
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