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 Title: heres a review if the spam code ever works
Reviewed By: Darkflameangel(not logged in)  On: September 23, 2005 21:48 EDT
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how cruel!?! not fair...you leave me with a cliffy, you dont post early, AND no Caden and Milly...thats just cold..lol...jk...eh no rolling sweatily around in the sheets, poor sexually frustrated vash. hmmm, i was wondering when there was going to be a twist in the ole plot...now i know... Ummm, the party kinda sucked for me as i was the youngest one there...so shoulda went to visit my friend instead...question of the week, so is everyone and their dog trying to set me up or what? i swear...lol...i intend to go post one of the picks as soon as i get signed in...feel free to link to it...You know my usual requests and what not...hop to it...lol jk..or am i? Mmwahahaaa! Ja ne DFA
 Reviewed By: Aaml4everFC  On: September 18, 2005 22:29 EDT
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That was a great chapter. Have I told you just how much I hate cliff hangers lately cuz I really hate them. Oh well it just means that I will have to come back here next week for the next update. Good luck on the next chapter ~FC
 Reviewed By: Bob13 [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 17, 2005 16:35 EDT
Comment/Review:
Update again soon! I want to know if Meryl will take Vash back now or if she'll blow him off again, for good this time.
 Title: Holy balls! Awesome chapter!!
Reviewed By: Darkflameangel(not logged in)  On: September 17, 2005 01:57 EDT
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Wooot! Yes i loved the chapter almost as much as the teaser. might have fallen off my computer chair if I somehow managed to come up with an even better sexy half naked caden image. get 'r done Vash! bout time he overcame the testosterone filled baka gene and got his broom-head in gear as far as meryl is concerned.GASP! that was a horrible cliffy! *sounds of sharpening of pitchforks can be heard* Hmmm....i might be persuaded to post one or two of those pictures on my MM account. You will have to choose which ones if i am sufficiently persuaded. 7 days!!!!! I dont think i can wait that long...*Gasp..cough...shake...shudder...other Forever Mine withdrawl symptoms* I just cant take the tension anymore(sexual and otherwise) between our dear characters. Well i best get to sleepy since i have to go to a party tomorrow night for all of us employees that used to work there before they closed it down...man it is just so depressing driving by where that building used to stand...anyways...off i shall happily go to dream of wet half naked gorgeous Caden like mens...lol..jk*(or am i)Keep up the kickin' work!!! Ja ne~ DFA
 Title: haha
Reviewed By: Senn [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 17, 2005 00:23 EDT
Comment/Review:
So I cheated and I decided to leave you comments on here. I noticed that you updated MediaMiner before Fanfic and plus I love reading your replys to my comments. I'm hopin gyou do recognize me from Fanfic. :D Yes, you are incredibly evil and that was such a cliff hanger. but I'm glad to FINALLY got (or is about to) talk to Meryl and straighten things out. Man this has been such a great week. Our football team finally beat our rivals after losing for 23 years.haha. I'm looking forward to next Friday!!!! love and peace! -Sen
 Reviewed By: amber_waves [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 16, 2005 22:59 EDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ohhhhh I like it! Finally everyone is saying what they mean. And of course, it was Milly who got the ball rolling! Is she awesome or what?! I can't wait to see how M will respond. She has been hurt, and may not just rush back to V... but you never know! Till then. Keep it up!
 Reviewed By: S  On: September 16, 2005 22:21 EDT
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Awwwww! That had to be one of the sweetest cliffhangers I have ever had the pleasure of reading- can we just fast forward 168 hours (or 7 days) so we can find out what Meryl-san has to say to Vash-kun? I love the way you advanced Caden-san and Milly-chan's relationship- those two are so meant for each other. Knives-kun and Mac-san didn't appear much in this chapter, but a paragraph about them would have seemed a bit out of place as they are already happily in love and attached to each other. Cadden-san and Milly-chan have yet to form those bonds, and Vash-kun and Meryl-san need to find their connection and layer it with their will and true emotions so it won't get broken by a stupid child's selfish wish ever again. (Jessica-chan sneezes in the background) I can't wait to find out how Meryl-san reacts to this new bit of information- and I wonder how the plot will twist next time? We still have a way to go until the end, correct? Cruz-san needs to get his just desserts, after all...
 Title: Short and Simple
Reviewed By: Aaml4everFC  On: September 13, 2005 01:01 EDT
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I really loved this chapter, I just wanna beat Vash for acting like such a *******, Caden too. DARN CLIFFHANGERS, I HATE YOU ALL SOO MUCH!!!!^^. Keep up the great work, youll know I will review not much I can do since I am soo odssessed with it. I for I think 4 am would count as really early.
 Title: YOU...
Reviewed By: Blazing Neko (Not logged in)  On: September 11, 2005 21:57 EDT
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And your evil cliffies!! Why do you torture us like this? I MUST read more, keep up the exellent writing! ^^
 Reviewed By: childofdarkness [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 10, 2005 20:51 EDT
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Okay, Vash has officaly reached a new level of stupidity. Making a girl jealous is the absolute last thing you do! At this point, I`m saying Meryl deserves better. Maybe not Caden, but if Vash is going to continue to hurt her like this, then she should get herself a new man.
 Reviewed By: Darkflameangel [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 10, 2005 00:59 EDT
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uggh...with the cliffy. Hmmm....Vash's "Meryl getting back" method is not what i would call a winner. I cant say id be likely to take a guy back after something like that, unless i was given some super good reasons. Poor girl...Oi...I can see some serious beatings in the future or some dismal moping...not sure...Vash is sure in a pickle.. Well Cadens diversion worked a bit too well. I can so see why Meryl was shall we say stunned into submission..daaaang...Darn you and your cliffy of leaving us hanging with Vash witnessing said "ardently kissing" moment...I so cant wait till the next chapter....Curse you *all the while bowing down to Aine's fanfiction greatness*....Dont suppose you could release that next chapter early eh?...naw...didnt think so...I have a wonderful colored version of that Caden pic for you...well i better go before my thoughts run away with me...Hmmm....what does Knives think about all of this i wonder...interesting.... Ja ne DFA
 Reviewed By: Mageblood  On: September 10, 2005 00:05 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was a very creative way to turn the story!, anthing can happen now. what will vash do? go balistic and try to hurt and kill or just Sucome to the pain and once again become an empyt shell??????? I DON'T KNOW!!!!!!!!!!!!. But hopfully i will find out next week, stay great and Loveable to your readers.
 Reviewed By: Lady moon  On: September 09, 2005 23:57 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I soooo can not wait till next friday!!!! I soooooo hate clifs but it was a very nice set up!! insperation to you and your work!
 Reviewed By: amber_waves [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 09, 2005 23:14 EDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You do know that you're killing us, don't you?!?!?! All the back and forth... at least we know you won't be wrapping it up anytime soon! I think V went way to far... he really just needs a hard kick to the ass! I think M is too messed up to be responsible for anything anymore. But it doesn't mean she can't open her mouth either. Anyhow, till next week.
 Reviewed By: Bob13 [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 09, 2005 21:21 EDT
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Poor Vash! How could Meryl do this to him!? But the moron (Vash) could've just explained everything to Meryl in the first place. Update again soon.
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