| "Zero-G" Reviews/Comments [ 341 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 20:36 EST
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That was a nasty cliffie. What will Souta do? I bet he will be willing to continue his 'bad boy' act to safely keep Kagome's where about a secret. Hope you update soon, really soon. Later.
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Reviewed By: FlameDancer077 On: February 01, 2005 20:34 EST
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you do know i hate you now? well i do you and your evil chiffy!! but please update soon!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: PHoxy Kitsune On: February 01, 2005 18:56 EST
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Oooooo..evil cliffy....update soon! ^^
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Reviewed By: dark-wolf-soulX On: January 30, 2005 15:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In the last chapter, when Kagome walked in on Iny Yasha in the launderette thingy, did he his wound heal all the way ,or did he put a bandaid on it, or did he just not care and hoped that no one would notice? None of the above? All? Though i don't really now how it could be all of the above but hey! Upendata soon!! Me likie the story lotsness!!!
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Reviewed By: heyitsjenn On: January 29, 2005 19:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o0o this is turning out so good! I can't wait until the next chapter, I'll be checking daily for it ^_^
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Reviewed By: Phoxy Kitsune On: January 26, 2005 22:44 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
**laughing her ass off** Nice ending, And impeccable use of euphemisms at the end there. Update soon. **still giggling like mad..and I rarely freakin giggle...**
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Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 22:01 EST
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awww its over already.. ::sigh:: lol, and kikyo wasnt to far off about that.. getting desperate thing, lol. inuyasha's just about the only guy she sees, lol... any time now.....
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Reviewed By: silver_neko_kitsune (not logged in) On: January 25, 2005 20:38 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would just like to say one thing: I LOVE YOUR FICS! I absoloutely love all of you stories, especially this one (and 28 days ^^;;;). even though I haven't finished reading itI like the whole mafia thing: It's original, cool, underground, and I like the name! I hadn't realised the spelling was different... Maybe because I spell the same way? (Canada seems to have the same spelling). I only spell like Americans when I'm writing fanfiction because Word always corrects it. *grumbles* For some weird reason... I understood the old english. 0.o I am seee~rious. Oh well, add another language to the list. ^^ Anyway: Back to the story: *sniffle* Miroku... man, it's like a dream I had, where Inu choked Miroku with a pink licorice rope! 0.o Ehehe...
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(nsi) On: January 25, 2005 15:53 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic. thanks for sharing it =D god how i hate kikyo!! i know you said no more fackyews but what are your thoughts on her? sorry if you've already answered that and i didnt see it.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(nsi) On: January 25, 2005 15:38 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol petrified koala....
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Title: Ha ha ha ha!!!!
Reviewed By: ssp51201 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 06:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter is awesome! Man, I can't believe Kikyo bit him hard enough to draw blood! Talk about sick...But, I'm really glad that Inu made it out of the job alive and that he's not gonna get caught. Also, to end the chappie with him in his boxers while his clothes were washing in the laundromatt, Man! LOL!!! Poor Kags...what she has to put up with...Two words, You're Awesome!!!!
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Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 00:16 EST
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i loved it.. can't wait for more
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Reviewed By: darkempereror (not signed in) On: January 24, 2005 22:42 EST
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I don't know when I did an earlier reveiw but i did. Great story. kagome's a little naive, inuyahsa's got too little concious that is, like many other stories where INuyahsa starts out the bad guy, developing far to quickly. But Unlike most other stories, you actually seem to have caught the characters. Keep up the good work and tell everyone who complains about nonamerican spelling to go to hell. Because you know what? They never complain on the fanfics where the authors,(I'm guessing american) don't even know how to spell the words in american, let alone other languages. LONG LIVE STRANGE SPELLING!!! And out of curiousity, Why did you demand food in french and why were you talking about eating a pig?
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Reviewed By: FlameDancer077 On: January 24, 2005 22:40 EST
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nice chappie, ha wish me luck, having boy worries. ok well update as soon as you can ^_^
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Reviewed By: kagomestanton *not logged in* On: January 24, 2005 21:58 EST
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oooo she's not below anymore! hah! i was talking about graciestanton.... just so the real person below me didn't get confused.... hahah that would be kinda funny...
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