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Title: woot
Reviewed By: purplepeopleater with one "e" On: December 08, 2004 22:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurrah for the new fanfic! Despite the fact that Kikyo is an evil owner of a make-up line, the plot is altogether engaging. Kikyo's proffesion made me giggle a bit though, which I shouldn't do seeing as I'm taking a cosmetology course. (ducks heavy projectiles thrown from classmates) Make-up and evil, murdering Kikyo just struck me as odd, but it's new and on a realistic level, greed is a powerful motive. Your character interaction is as comical as ever and humor coming from Naraku is refreshing. Most closed minded people don't see potential for humor in him but as you have proved it can be achieved and earn cookies and confetii. A toast to Rozefire, for another incrediably original Inuyasha fanfiction. Cheers. PS. People who critize your spelling probably sit home all day with a thumb up their ass looking for ways to make people miserable. If they are upset by non-american spelling then they probably have never read anything other than books assigned in junior high which they probably got cliff notes for. Cheers again!
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: BlueDayDreamer678 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 22:10 EST
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Terribly sorry to hear of the people bugging you about your spelling, I like your style and I think it's interesting to see the difference of spelling of certain words from what I'm use too! You're an awesome writer and I can't wait for the next update! Keep up the fantastic work and please update as soon as possible!!
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Reviewed By: D.E. not signed in On: December 08, 2004 21:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I haven't spotted anything wrong with your grammer or your spelling. maybe its because the differences are so small nobody should care, but its still funny that people are getting mad at you for it. (coughLOSERScough) Great Story! I don't like reading alternate universes that deter to much from the original story line, but you do it so well, I can't help but give you a perfect score! Keep up the awsome work! If you'd like to some constructive critism, Bring a few more minor characters, Like Sessho, and/or shippo, maybe Sango and Kohaku. I realize these might be hard to fit inot a story centered completely on Kagome+Inuyasha= Good, Kikyo die= Good. But it might be a good twist to add in a little Sessho try to kill INu, or Shippo annoy the hell out of Inu, or something of the sort. Just try not to completely focus on Kagome and Inuyasha. This may be really out of line, but I really don't care.
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Reviewed By: LSIE(Offline) On: December 08, 2004 21:29 EST
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Yay! Another chapter! I KNEW he didn't kill her :) How can it be an Inu/Kag story if she's dead? Err... nevermind... =_=" =smiles= Love it. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 20:52 EST
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I never noticed you were spelling things differently... oh well, does it really matter? What matters is you killed Miroku... T_T I'm still crying over that. Who are you going to kill next? Shippo, Sango? Grrr... You just had to kill my favorite character... ah well. What's done is done, and Inu's gotta make a living. So let's all rejoice and be happy... or not. Let's all hope Kagome clears out 'fore the bomb goes off...
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(nsi) On: December 08, 2004 19:39 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha i love that a/n...i didnt even notice that you were spelling the words differently...maybe cause i spent two years living in england...anyway great chapter amazing story! and ignore all the morons who tell u others and demand things of u cuz its ur story.
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Reviewed By: tiff tiff On: December 08, 2004 19:13 EST
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I have decided. I love this story. I would enjoy a little more content in the chapters....but then the updates would take longer... so I think that I like things the way they are. One more thing. You're English? I can never tell anymore. I do like the English spellings better though. I kind of...hate my own country in more ways than one, it's very sad. I could go on for hours, but i'll spare you from that.
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Reviewed By: queenserena(*sniff* On: December 08, 2004 19:01 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniff*You killed Miroku...Are you going to kill Kagome and/or Sango and/or Rin!?/Rin:...../Uh oh.../Rin:...NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!/..My ear....
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Title: Astounding
Reviewed By: Ryu Sachiko Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 18:11 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I still love your stories, no matter what. People need to 'read' more. Slang is not the only english that is in use these days. I think that your writing is beautiful and mostly grammatically correct. If it wasn't, you wouldn't be on my favorites, AND you would not have heard from me unless your story made a ridicule of the english language and of the anime you are writing the story of. Continue, we await your next update! -Ryu sachiko Sama
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Reviewed By: TFN On: December 08, 2004 17:22 EST
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SEXY! though sexy as in cool... anyway very interesting fic keep it going!
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Reviewed By: Sabichan (MM won't let me sign in...) On: December 08, 2004 04:34 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the interaction between Inuyasha and Kikyo in this last chapter, very wicked ^_^. I don't mind the fact that you write the way that is natural to you. I don't usually notice-my good friend spent a few years living in England, going to school. About two years ago, he finished his first novel, and asked me to read it-he never got out of the habit of writing in "English", so I had to adjust according. I'll admit that "colour" looks much nicer than "color". Lovely, story so far, as expected; I'm hooked again, and patiently awaiting more. Thank you for writing!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river * not signed in* On: December 08, 2004 01:52 EST
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Cool chapter.
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme. On: December 08, 2004 00:55 EST
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Oh, how the tables are turning. Awesome chapter... can't wait for the next. Great work! x3
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 00:24 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Honestly, I didn't notice any overt spelling mistakes and your writing is good enough to make up for any mistakes you might make. Not "did," "might." I won't kiss your ass, dear but I will say you deffinately (I can't spell, so :-p) deserve something nice for your great work here. I've read a few of your other stories and I've really enjoyed them. Hope you can update soon.
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 00:03 EST
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Just tell those poor saps that you are not following 'Amercian'. That should wake them up. Oh and I am an us citizen. And tell them to go read Shakespeare. Ha, that should get them to. And I would like to say the even if you used english word I didn't notice. One of many I am sure. On other things. Great chapter. I am glad that Kagome found out that Inuyasha was tell her the truth. I still hope that he tells her the truth about how she was hurt. I mean sure she will be mad. But in light of everything, he didn't kill her. Hope you update soon, later.
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