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Title: ch. 4
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 23:45 EST
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Hmm... Never told Naraku what? Your portrayal of Kikyo as a pure evil bitch (tm) isn't accurate, but it works, and way to psycholanalyze dog boy. If the two of them were dating at times past and now she's with Naraku, then Inuyasha could get his (cough!) "fingers" caught in a vise from two different sets of pliers. ~~~~~~~~~ What is it about those evil headquarterses always having unguarded vats of acid? ~~~~~~~~~ you little fibber." he murmured ~~~ comma, not period ~~~~~~~~~ Kidnapping, I could forgive. Attempted murder is part of the cookie, but she RENAMED THE PRODUCT?!?! DEATH TO EVIL!KIKYO!! ~~~~~~~~~ Ouchie! They made him pin his ears? Ten thousand yen is only about $100 US. ~~~~~~~~~ Wait wait wait... If they changed the Harry Potter books, then why did they leave in so much British English spelling?
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Reviewed By: RadiosNmyHead... can't... sign... in.... [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 23:44 EST
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Another great chapter! Your fic is very well written, and I find it very sad that people cannot recognize the difference between British spelling and bad spelling. Honestly, that just shows ignorance on the reader's part. Anyway... poor Kagome can't get a break, or a clue for that matter. Luckily she has her little hanyou... who is about to give her an earful when he finds her. Great chapter!
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Title: ch. 4, part the first
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 23:01 EST
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(sigh) It looks as though this 'fic is going to follow the typical Rozie update pattern: rapid for many chapters, and then slow as the stupid flamers and real life wear ya down. I should just wait 'til the whole thing is done, but I just can't help myself. Have you found a way to broadcast heroin into my eyeballs? (And why aren't my glasses filtering them out? I shelled out for the tinting, darnitt!!)
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Title: Lovin the fic.
Reviewed By: lancrGrlSingrGrl_5069 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 19:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love your fic/fics all of your fics i mean. Please write update i always wait to see if you upated i'm glad that you posted these stories you made I am very thankful for it thankz alot! -Roe Masumi Hukimaru-
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Title: From a Fan
Reviewed By: Alyah77 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 13:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are my absolute favorite author!! The story's great so far. Just thought you'd like a note from a big fan!! Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: queenserena(YOU THINK I SIGN IN!? Apocolipse... On: December 06, 2004 17:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Rin:*pouts*/HOW COULD YOU!?
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover (not in) On: December 06, 2004 10:11 EST
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Ack! Oops! I spelled InuYasha wrong....T_T. Stupid me.
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover (not in) On: December 06, 2004 10:10 EST
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Wait a sec....I'm confused. Who did InuYasaha actually throw in the canal if it wasn't Kagome? And how did he make it look like her? I mean, after three days of a body being in a canal.... any disguise put on it will wear off.... And wat's gonna happen to Miroku? Update soon!
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 20:53 EST
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Your... your killing Miroku? T_T Or maybe not... T_T or maybe you are... One question, were you having a bad day when you thought up this fic?
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme. On: December 05, 2004 13:27 EST
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OMGWTF. I'm confused now. I'm sure it'll be cleared up in the next chapter. Good luck and hope you get it out soon! :D
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 13:00 EST
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Wow! This world is freaky! All black. I bet the goths like it. Lol. And poor Miroku! Who's next, Sango? Did you really kill Miro though? Or is Inu holding him hostage to?
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 03:02 EST
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Wow great story. So 1984 meets Japan with an Inu Yasha twist. Awesome. Keep up the great work. coolsa.
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Title: Love It!
Reviewed By: BlueDayDreamer678 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 01:42 EST
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Love it! Yet another brilliant story that you have written! I'm begining to wonder to who's body that was? How on Earth did Inu fake Kag's death so well! And when did Kikyo become such a good actress? Anywayz, great story I loved it, please keep up the magnificent work, and update as soon as possible!
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 20:33 EST
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Oh dear. Inuyasha is in for one heck of a ride. I just know that Kagome is going to give him an ear full when he gets back. Wonder if he keep Miroku alive too. I am glad that his showing a softer side. But will he keep Kagome in the dark about what really happened to her? I mean relationship required trust. Right? Well update soon. This is really good. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(nsi) On: December 04, 2004 18:08 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol inuyasha going :choo choo is so hilarious...damn i wish i could write half as well as u can...great story! love it
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