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Title: HEE!!
Reviewed By: Silver Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2006 17:44 CST
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WHOOT! You live! ::clings to j00:: THANKIES FOR ANOTHER CHAPTER! Very well written, and I love how you make all the characters IN character, but at the same time....being luffed, or all hurt inside! YOU ROCK! ::leechs onto j00::
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Title: OH NOEZ!!
Reviewed By: Silver Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2006 22:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well HELL! This story is EXCELLENT! ... ::notices that it's not finished:: DANGIT! Please keep going with this! IT'S WONDERFUL AND I EVEN GOT UP FROM BED ((I'm sick like a doggy with food posioning)) JUST TO READ THIS!!! WHY!?!! ...Please keep going? I'll ...give you a cookie? ..and marry you! TEE!!
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Reviewed By: inu fan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2006 18:31 CST
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Oh great, amazing, all-powerful writer of 'Broken', I throw myself at your feet to beg you to update your amazing and wonderful fic. For if I do not read more I will surely die. So, please continue to write. That is all that this humble little peasant requests of you.
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Title: Broken
Reviewed By: Darkdemon53 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2006 20:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue to write this story it is a great story!
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Reviewed By: fireprincess59 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2006 19:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm lovin' the story so far. You really should update really soon. If your beta ever quits, just e-mail me. I'd be happy to beta for you.
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Title: Plz write more
Reviewed By: InsaneDragonSlayer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2005 10:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the story plz keep writing more. I gave you a 10 out of 10.
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Reviewed By: Adan11 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2005 17:09 CST
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Wow. I really like how this chapter has turned out! You got a really really good Beta! Still lovin this story! Maybe some new chappies soon? ;D ~Adan
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Reviewed By: Adan11 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2005 18:23 CDT
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@_@ Holy shit! XD Just so you know, it's like, one big block of text right now. You might want to fix that. ^^ I'm fine with you editing stuff, but don't forget to update!!! ^_^ *cuddles* This story's awesome! I love you!
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Reviewed By: Velvet Diamond On: September 15, 2005 08:25 CDT
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I just finished reading 1-4 and tears started to fall down my face. I really do like your story. I'm going to go finish reading the other chapters. Ja ne.
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Title: Insert Title Here
Reviewed By: Choi sama On: September 14, 2005 18:13 CDT
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I shouldn't be spamming up your review board or anything, but when are you are you gonna update Paradise? Also, That review took forever to write! But when I read it, I was done in like five seconds! Wahh!!!
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Title: Yes! A Review From Me! ^0^
Reviewed By: Choi sama On: September 14, 2005 18:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I finally finished reading the new chapters. Took forever too. Why? I really don't know. I just got interupted every time I sat down to read. =( I even debated printing this out so I could just read in the restroom or something (where no one can disrupt me) but decided that would be somewhat overboard. Oh well, I'm here now. .......... So, I like the plot development and everything! (If I was glad to see Naruto and Sasuke getting back to Konoha, I was delighted at the notion of killing infidels.) Really, it's as if the enamored couple are off to a lovely honeymoon in their hometown, stopping only to bring joy and happiness to those around them. (By killing infidels.) I mean, there's sex, passion, and ninja fighting powers! Oh, it's just so exciting! .......... OK, sorry about that. I'm just getting so joyful, you know? Oh. Fine. A few questions then. .......... What was the dirty, four-letter word? Is Choi from Choi-sama? What were all those infidels for? What exactly is up with Konohagakure again? (I vaugely remember something about boards and no ninja and important Akatsuki matters.)
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Reviewed By: theonetheonly On: September 08, 2005 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your style of writing the i feel bad for naruto though but i love your fic. keep writing
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Reviewed By: yurathewicked [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 12:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg this is so good! i love you! i read through chapter 19 in one day, and now im totally looking forward to chapter 21. whats gonna happen in konoha? im so excited! youre really good at writing action sequences, so i know the battle scene will be great. ill probably come back and read some of your stuff when im trying to write some battle scenes of my own (just for reference). thanks so much for such a great story! ill be looking out for the next chapter for sure.
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Reviewed By: bookworm51485 On: September 04, 2005 12:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I always get so excited when I see your story has been updated. I LOVE IT!!!! It's so cute with Sasuke and Naruto and him being scared to tell him he loves him. And Neji screwing with him. For a chapter you had trouble writing I thought it turned out good. Wasn't really expecting what's happening to happen, kinda just figured that he would go home and his friends would be happy to see him but most other people would hate him/try to kill him. But this definately makes things more interesting. I went to aff.net but for some reason even though it says that a new chapter was posted only 19 are there. Don't know if thats a mistake with the site or just something with me but you might want to try to fix that if other people are having the same trouble. Anyways good job, update soon and dont forget about the other story because it's really good too:D
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Reviewed By: shikonjewl On: August 27, 2005 12:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha you made another chapter yessss
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