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| "Tales from the House of the Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 509 ] | | Pages (34): [ « ‹ 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 › » ] | Title: The End
Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 12:21 PST
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YAY! This was so good! Brilliant! I often find it annoying when people just write the dialogue and nothing else to put it in context, but it worked here. This story is a good length, each chapter well thought out and not too short. The interlacing of stories was beautifully executed. There were a few tiny errors in spelling and silly things like that, but it in no way detracted from the story. I love your use of quotes and many of your chapter summaries made me laugh (I did a lot of laughing while reading this, no actual tears but sadness too). I was so please to see Shippo again! Even for such a short time. I look forward to reading more of your work! Thank you for completing the story. So many authors start and never finish (I'm one of these). Maybe you can talk to Youkai Yume about some art to go with it. She is really good and likes the SessKag pairing. Have a super duper day!
| Reviewed By: TurtleDreamer On: February 21, 2006 12:12 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for sharing this amazing story.
| Reviewed By: essie2 On: February 21, 2006 09:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man this (bow's down)is greatest one yet.I cried when Kagome die.T_T you are a great writer damn it so freak great mad.(bow lower) okh and Sesshomaru dies at the end right on too bad it had to end.
| Reviewed By: eye1the sandbox On: February 20, 2006 17:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful. Just beautiful.
| Reviewed By: Vianne78 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 12:25 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say? I'm still so overwhelmed, I can't form an intelligent thought... (As if that's anything new. :D) Your story is unlike any fanfic I've read before, in any fandom. It's different, exciting, enticing, sometimes excruciating, sad, painful. The plot itself is awe inspiring enough, but what really, really made me come back for more again and again, are the characters. Sesshoumaru and Kagome began to feel so real, almost touchable, the more I read. Their relationship throughout this fic has been electrifying, the slow developement agonizing from time to time, but in the end oh so worth it! The humor brought warmth to the journey, and I couldn't even begin to count how many times you made me giggle and laugh, sometimes in the most unexpected places of the story. :) Your way of writing is very thorough, thoughtful, lingering...Beautiful. You truly have a unique gift -and I feel like saying that doesn't even begin to cover it. I got sucked into this world you created, and reality didn't excist. Gasping, gaping, huffing, chills, squeals, tears of mirth, wet panties...You name it, I've done/got it, reading this ;) Reading novels is a part of my job, and sadly, it's quite rare to find anything as captivating as your story, from between the covers these days... Amazing. That's what this is.(And not to mention, the most quotable fanfic ever!) Thank you so much for sharing the experience with all of us! It's been a pleasure, Resmiranda. It truly has. I look forward to reading more tales from you in the future. *blows a kiss*
| Reviewed By: Yutan On: February 20, 2006 10:56 PST
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This is such a beautiful story. Absolutely loved the ending. You could have ended with them together, you could have ened with only Kagome dead, but you made it all the way through - both being dead and reunited. Everything tied in; pretty much all the main characters' fates were revealed, including Tessaiga. I am glad you made Tenseiga missing - I think it represents an era that has passed, an era of fairy tales and revivals. Death of Sesshoumaru was also very convincing; he is quite difficult to 'kill off' by normal means. It also makes sense that he didn't die by disease or old age, but by accident/injury, since that is his nature. I loved that we get to see only the 'boundary between this world and the next,' not the world beyond itself. The dreamy quality of their reunion and final passage go wonderfully with the entire fairy tale theme. The epilogue fairy tale summed up the entire story very nicely as well. All things said, my best parts of the epilogue are the title and the verb tense change; Kagome is no longer a miko, but still is, and Sesshoumaru is no longer a king, but still is; and I loved the way when Sesshoumaru dies the past tense changes to present tense - that is such an awesome symbolism. I will have to go back and read the entire piece over again; it always gives me extra perspective when I know how the ending goes. Looking forward to your future FF and originals.
| Reviewed By: Jackialioncourt On: February 20, 2006 09:13 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WONDERFUL CHAPTER!!!!!!!! WONDERFUL ENDING!!!!!!!!! IT WAS SOOOOOOOOOO BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN, HAD ME CRYING MOST OF IT. I CANNOT WAIT TO READ THE NEXT FF YOU WRITE
| Reviewed By: nyoku111 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 09:07 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my fugin gawd resmiranda>~!JEBUSSSS i just finished reading and my eyes hurt like hell from all the crying... BLESS YOU~!!! your FUCKIN AWESOME... going thought the journey of this story was was was unbelievable~!!! I LOVE THIS STORY SO F-in MUCH~!!! OMG when kagome died i was listening to perfect cirlce and i cried soo much, i had to pause because i could't read the freekin words. ^.= the story ended in such a great way, im soo happy.~! SPECTACULAR JOB btw thanks sooo much for updating soo soon i was suprised lol. =forever a supporter of resmirandas works =^.^=
| Reviewed By: angelsauora On: February 20, 2006 08:44 PST
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wow.....you're wonderful. GOD blessed you with an amazing gift. i'm completely hooked!!!! please keep writing. i'll keep reading till i'm 40...lol you've made me want Kag and Sess to be together. i don't even know how to give you all your props!!!
| Title: WOW!!!!
Reviewed By: Myst Runner [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2006 22:22 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very very good. Theirs nothing bad you can possible say about this fic. It keept me hooked to the very end. I very glad that you decided to keep plunging ahead and finish your story. So many other good writers have just abandoned thier works right at the high point. You instead keept that high point throughout the entire fic. i kept comming back to see what would happen to Kagome and Sess. You really amazed me with you ending it jsut blew me away. I can't wait untill your next fic plans. especally if it's annother one as good as this. All 10's.
| Reviewed By: TzeLang On: February 19, 2006 19:35 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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| Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2006 18:34 PST
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You know, I have avoided this. I saw the posting on LJ and I went into denial, well that is until today when I accidentally looked at some fanart done from the final chapters and my curiosity won. It is perfect…The perfect ending. I have to tell you that I felt my heart was beating so fast it was going to explode when I first started reading the final installments and it stayed that way. In fact I stopped for a minute and took my pulse because I thought I went into SVT. But I of course did not; it was purely your amazing writing. I don't know what else to say other than THANK YOU! I loved every minute of it. I know this was tough on you and I hope you remember all the wonderful things that came from this; the beautiful artwork, the adoring words from fans, and even a little of the creepy words from your stalker fans (as a laugh of course). You know you should really publish this. But I am unsure how the whole thing works since it is based on someone else's characters, but it is that good you know. Thank you again for sharing this wonderful work of art!
| Reviewed By: Cyndi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2006 15:22 PST
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"He suppressed a snicker. Well, then... he thought, enjoying the sudden feeling of regaining the upper hand. She was still staring. Sesshoumaru flexed. Kagome emitted the tiniest of squeaks and whirled away again. Really, she was so amusing to tease, and he had probably thoroughly silenced her." That part ALWAYS makes me giggle ^_^
| Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: February 19, 2006 12:28 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm very impressed with this story. I'm so glad I was talked into reading it. Like so many others, I didn't think these two belonged together, but you explained it all and so very, very well. I loved it all and I am a bit sorry to see that you are done. But you did a wonderful job and I'm glad that you shared it.
| Reviewed By: Vig On: February 19, 2006 12:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a wonderful read. Kept me checking for updates every few days for months.
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