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Title: WHY IS IT DONE? Reviewed By: You shall never know On: September 05, 2005 08:46 CDT Comment/Review: why do you only have fifteen chapters! ALSO, ITS A CLIFFHANGER!!! please finish it. i was enjoying it. :(
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Title: The Chosen Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 00:49 CDT Comment/Review: I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: katie... On: September 03, 2005 19:17 CDT Comment/Review: ahhh! its been... some weeks? sense you last updated... so you should update again...soon.. please?
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Reviewed By: katie... On: September 03, 2005 19:17 CDT Comment/Review: ahhh! its been... some weeks? sense you last updated... so you should update again...soon.. please?
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Reviewed By: katie... On: September 03, 2005 19:17 CDT Comment/Review: ahhh! its been... some weeks? sense you last updated... so you should update again...soon.. please?
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Reviewed By: katie... On: September 03, 2005 19:17 CDT Comment/Review: ahhh! its been... some weeks? sense you last updated... so you should update again...soon.. please?
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Reviewed By: Hanyou Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2005 13:05 CDT Comment/Review: Great story can't wait to find out what happens next please update soon!
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Title: plz update Reviewed By: brocolli stinks On: August 24, 2005 17:54 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: plz update story is so good i luv the pairings
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Reviewed By: Reke [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2005 17:03 CDT Comment/Review: please update it has been a long time please tell me its only writers block so ya bye and update soon!
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Reviewed By: Reke [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 17:36 CDT Comment/Review: plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update its been soooooo long
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Title: The Chosen Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 17:04 CDT Comment/Review: I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: I_HAVE_NO_NAME [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 18:41 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: um... Great story i really like it plz update more though
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Reviewed By: ehu On: July 08, 2005 15:27 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: yeah!!! you updated! still an awesome story, and now it's going to get really interesting! please update soon!
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Title: ... Reviewed By: namidajoshi On: July 07, 2005 12:46 CDT Comment/Review: I LOVE your story except for ONE pairing. Kouga and Deathstrike. KOUGA IS MINE! I'm not signed in right now but had I been my name would appear as 'kougasmate' I LOVE HIM ALOT! THREE YEARS I'VE LOVED HIM!!!! anyway, great story. Inu should be a terrier. Cuz, well, it would be funnier.
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Title: WOW!!!! Reviewed By: Hikaru-RoseRed [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 18:28 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hot Dang!! i love this story so far!! if i remeber correctly you said that you would like suggestions? well if i did remeber i think you should have rin/kohaku (not sure how to spell that, but sango's lil bro) and have a character of your own with shippo. hehe nothing to deep for them tho! but please contniue to update your story!! and write others too when this one is finished. I love your style and crativity, i think that fluffymister doing that to kagome was unfair to her. omg! sessy got his butt kicked! that was nice but he ended up winning. them all going into heat was an intrestiong touch. but still WOW!!! that was awsome!! im really loveing this fic btw Hikaru_person is also me beause for some reason i cant stay loged in to post a comment.
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