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Reviewed By: Black_Rose28 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 02:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL i almost fell over laughing when Kagome muttered "oh shit.." LOL im sorry i just cant stop haha laughing hahahahaha sorry lol..oh my how will Kagome get out of this one..? Maybe they have a "memory take away-er" like in Fruits Basket? LOL IM SORRY I CANT STOP LAUGHING! sesshomaru is just to damn sexy so i shall call him lord sexymaru! i will name him sexymaru, and he shall be my sexymaru, and he shall be mine! *thats from Finding Nemo 4 u who dont kno..* ^_^; keep up da good work!!
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Title: holy cow
Reviewed By: Hikaru-Person On: July 01, 2005 23:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like i said Holy Cow. So far I really like your story. Mind you i have only read the frist chapter so far. I Gave you a 10 for your style of writing becuase your format is nice and easy to read. I gave you a 9 for spelling and grammer becuase i think you had a few typos. I gave you a 10 for originality and creativity becuase i have not read a story with this kind of plot befor and it is very creative. I gave you a 10 for enjoyment factor becuase i love reading it. i didnt want to stop to eat dinner. hehe, and for your overall rateing a 10 beacuse i like the story. I hope that you continue to up-date this story and hopefully write more. good luck.
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Title: meanny
Reviewed By: Reke [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 07:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
What the hell was that sesshomaru fluff with some one other than shadow and why was it kagome you little who dare you do that to kagome *glars death at you* that was the meanest thing some on has ever done to little old kagome i can't belive you did that *camls down* Bye Bye and please update soon
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Reviewed By: Keisha On: June 30, 2005 23:57 CDT
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wow this chapter was kind of disturbing....in good way. lol. sharing mates, wow. good chapter though, update sooner!! :)
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Reviewed By: ehu On: June 22, 2005 02:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just discovered your story today, and i gobbled up every single chapter i could find! it's really a very well developed storyline (in my opinion anyways)with just the right blend of adventure, intrigue, love and *winks* lemons. but yes, looking forward to the next chapter! happy writing!
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Reviewed By: red_tigergirl2 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 07:57 CDT
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update fast please i want to know what happens
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Title: The Chosen
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2005 02:18 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: neko youki On: June 15, 2005 14:40 CDT
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I love your story.But I have to ask in the previus chapters you used moves that sond like moves I'v herd on digymon is that were you got them??
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Reviewed By: Inu-Shinta [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 19:06 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I worded it wrong. When I said blood orgy I ment have all three girls perform their blood ceremony together with Inuyasha, and have Kagome present also. The thing about the threesome comment is that I don't like Naraku at all and I hate what Kikyo has become.
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Reviewed By: Lauri-Ann On: June 02, 2005 19:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love this story! Please hurry and post a nother chapter! email me at Lauriben38@aol.com
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Reviewed By: nazi1414 On: May 28, 2005 02:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow, I just read this whole story in one sitting! I will go ahead and say that I was skeptical when I first started reading (I am not usually one to read Inu fics that go too far out of the small already existing Inu universe), anyway, I kept reading and I am glad that I did!! I love this story...your characters Shadow, Death Strike, Mikel, and the others are wonderful. I am very impressed with your story, I can't wait for the next chappy! If you are still interested in a beta reader, I would be honored if you would consider letting me help you out in that department. ^.^ If you would like to talk to me, my e-mail is gaki_oni_1414@hotmail.com, hope to hear from you!! Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Inu-Shinta [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2005 15:44 CDT
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I hope that you will eventually free Kohaku, Kagura, and Kanna from Naraku's control.
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Reviewed By: Inu-Shinta [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2005 15:40 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Naraku, Kikyo, and Sindel!(Multiple sounds of unimaginable horror and disgust) I was wondering if you planned to have Shippou find a mate, well I mean not actual mating, but a female that he likes and one day will mate with her. I think Souten the female thunder demon is a good choice. I would like to read more about Kagome's time, and her three friends, Eri Yuka and Ayumi. This is only wishful thinking but maybe Eri Yuka and Ayumi could be hanyous as well, but not know it. Then maybe the three of them could maybe have an orgy-blood ceremony with Kagome and Inuyasha. I'm sick I know.
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 10:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love The Chapter:11 Plz Plz Update It Soon!!
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Reviewed By: KeishaBit [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2005 14:30 CDT
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very interesting so far. this is the most original story ive read on this site so far. waiting for the update! :)
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