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| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] | | Pages (148): [ « ‹ 105 106 107 108 109 110 111 112 113 114 115 116 117 118 119 120 121 122 123 124 › » ] | Reviewed By: Inuyasafan311 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 09:47 EDT
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I think your stories are great. I've read all your Inuyasha fan fictions. I just want to say that this and the other purity continuations are great. They are a great distraction while i was studying for exams and they've improved my vocabulary; a thank you to your grammar beta from me). I read the first chapter to your new story, and I want to read more. Take care and thanks again for sharing!
| Reviewed By: kamackie21 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 09:31 EDT
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Woohooo action! Ooohho....Kich makes me want to smack him upside the head. I thought Ryo was supposed to be the troublemaker? And 2 chapters in one day? We are so spoiled. Thanks for the awesome chapter Sue! ~ teh mackie
| Reviewed By: EAP On: June 11, 2005 04:19 EDT
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A double chapter! A good thing too, I would have gone crazy with the little cliffy in 20. I would be making up Kich beats up Cain stories and Cain kicks Kichs butt scenerios...Anyway, I like both chapters, they were really well done. And the kisses on both parts...Wow. Wowowowowow. Reeeeeaally good. Excellent work on that. Keep writing, I think you have a knack for this ;).
| Reviewed By: Simply a Lady (NSI) On: June 11, 2005 02:19 EDT
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This is Monday's chapter? whimpers.... I can make it...I can make it.... I just cant wait this is turning out to be one of my favorites Sueric! More More More....Did I forget to mention More?
| Reviewed By: phantomflame [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 01:55 EDT
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It's about time somebody kissed. All the suspense was driving me crazy. Kich can be such an ass. I really wanna see how things develop between him and Belle. I can't wait till InuYasha finds about Gin and Cain. I think Yasha could take him. If he can take Sess, he can take Cain. Great chapters! This is Monday's chapter. :( Now we gotta wait 1, 2, 3… anyway we gotta wait a lot of days. Oh well.
| Reviewed By: Pioden On: June 11, 2005 01:09 EDT
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"You belittled my panties," she retorted. "You . . . mocked my panties." *snerk* Best line ever, since the Vegas scenes in Purity 3... I swear... *giggle* That's going to be playing in my mind over and over for a week, and causing me to break into random giggles. THIS MAKES ME HAPPY. ANYway... Nice job overall! By the by, long chapters make me squee in delight! Thank you for posting... 10,000 word chapters... I mean WOAH... @.@
| Reviewed By: Rawben... On: June 11, 2005 00:38 EDT
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yey!!!!!!! great updates!!! and yey for kissing!! guh! now i dont know if i like the cain/gin or the kich/belle part more! they're both great! lol... and i like that she bought new panties! gin still seems a bit young, but when she's mad... hehe.. she should fight...someone... i dont know who... anyhow, i'm rambling cause i'm tired.. but i'm sorry you're getting so much crap about your fics... there are lots of stupid people out there.. i would know, i am one... but at least i'm not a mean, stupid person... maybe a tired, stupid person... yeah... good night!
| Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged on On: June 11, 2005 00:30 EDT
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oh my gosh! excellent chapter and with the kissing and the emotions and the...oh my. GREAT chapter! wow. cain versus kich was not something i was expecting but i should have seen it comming, would make sense. but damn,kich is really harsh with belle, ain't he. i mean, i get his side and understand his reasoning but wow...that's a dymanic character for you. amazing, as always. and the cain gin scene...awwwww. poor gin, thinks cain is mocking her panties (GREAT line). can't wait to see where you take this. tisk tisk, sue, spoiling us with updates so often now. :-) makes my day, i know that much!!!
| Reviewed By: Inuyoukaimama (nsi) On: June 11, 2005 00:23 EDT
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Oh Wow! Wait.... OH WOW! That was just fabulous Sue! It was fabulous. Ok, I sound like a record. But, What can I say? They both got their kisses! Poor Belle. Damn Kich is bound and determined to lock his youkai in the closet, isn't he? I know he's protecting little sister. But, must he pull the Sessy Icicle in A. trick? That was who he reminded me of! Ouch for Belle. As for your beautiful little Gin... Maybe a little veil slipped tonight? Does she (I know her youkai sees Cain as a man/demon) is she going to see just what he is now? That he is still a red blooded demon/man under that? Yeah Gin! Go for the TaiYoukai! He might be able to stand up against Yo Daddy! That was Great! I loved it!
| Title: Monday's? Awwww....no new chappie on Monday? *cries*
Reviewed By: Darkless On: June 10, 2005 23:44 EDT
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Wow! Kich knocked Belle's socks off with that kiss...then put both feet in his mouth. Baka baka baka! W00T! A double-header! Gin also recieves a kiss from Cain! Too bad her inexperience resulted in a clumsy ending. Well, well...interesting developments. Cain's crossing the line of his own making, Gin is dropping pebbles into the stagnant pond of her life and riding out the exciting ripples, Belle has met someone she can't wrap around her little finger and makes her think, and Kich has finally met someone who is not impressed with his wonderous self and falling at his feet like he's used to...and irritates the hell out of him to boot. *shudder* Ooohh...this is so much fun. Kich isn't an unfeeling person, I wonder when his conscience is going to remind him that he doesn't have the right to chip away at Belle's self-esteem, like he has been. He's going to feel awful low when he realizes the person he's been belittling is soft and vulnerable under the armor that he can't see past. Words are powerful things and can create invisible wounds that often never heal. Belle's friend has horrible scars the Kich is going to help disappear. Kich is a healer at heart despite his jaded outlook about women concerned with superficial looks. It's starting to look like he's dealt with those kind of people for too long and needs to get back in touch with the reasons he chose the medical field as his profession. "Physician, heal thyself"
| Reviewed By: Zirra Nova(not logged in) On: June 10, 2005 23:21 EDT
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awsome chapter...heehee.."woof"...heehee that was great. i love that both couples end up kissing in the same chapter. fantasticly wonderful sue, update soon please, till then, Zirra
| Reviewed By: a chicken w/o a paddle On: June 10, 2005 21:59 EDT
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SUUUUEEEE!!! I loved this chapter! Lots of good kissing! I screamed so loud when Cain kissed Gin! Good thing my mom's not home, and I think I gave my dog a heartattack... Anyways, about the bitchy people, I think we should hunt them down, those wet fabric-softened blankets and pastrami. They all mell. Then, we should kick them in the toe! And not just any toe, the big left toe! Muahahahahaha! Kays, im done. Thanks for a great chapter, Sue!
| Reviewed By: notzathros On: June 10, 2005 21:43 EDT
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Two chapters and two kisses. Nice. Kich needs a good kick in the crotch. He is being so irritating and overbearing. The way he's acting right now, Belle's youki must be insane to be interested in him. Besides, what exactly do these men think Gin is supposed to do with her life? Stay in her bedroom and play with dolls? She's practically immortal - that's a lot of Barbie time. I think these guys are so caught up in being the hero, that they haven't thought through the ramifications of their expectations. Grrr... Poor Belle. She really is misunderstood. She hasn't done anything horrible enough to justify all the anger. She's young and imperfect. Sigh. Thanks for the great chapters. I'm off to Japan for a few weeks so won't be able to read and review regularly. I will miss reading your wonderful stories! Thanks in advance for the adventure, your updates are a highlight of my day. Looking forward to catching up when I get back. Forever in your debt.
| Reviewed By: nerwenfaelvirin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 20:37 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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The last two chapters were kick-ass! We all don't want anything to happen to Gin and we know that the men in her family would do anything to protect them but dang, they need to be thwapped at the back of the head sometimes. Kich was obnoxious and rude to both his sister and Gin but I guess that's because he didn't expect to see his sister in the club, much less with Belle. The almost fight with Cain was great and the hallway kiss was HOT! Too bad Kich had to say all those things after and made Belle cry. *thwaps Kich*
| Reviewed By: Acheronlover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 20:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story so far. I have got to tell you, at first I was reluctant to read this story because I haven't been a huge fan of Gin. When you first intoduced her in Ryo's story she seemed kind of rude & unfriendly to Nezumi. And I adore Nez, so I got irked at the slights. Please, don't think I'm flaming you, that is just how I interpreted it. Now Gin's growimg on me, slowly but surely. Don't know if she'll ever be one of my favorite characters that you've created, but she is entertaining. I do love Belle though. She is awesome. I feel sorry that Kich treats her so badly. It seems to me that a lot of what Belle gets blamed for isn't really her fault. Everyone, especially Kich, seems to want to believe the worst about her. I hope that Kich realizes his mistakes soon though.
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