| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jesachi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2005 20:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! How much do I like this story?? Times 100!!! It is so awesome!! I would like to add a note though. People: the voice of the youkai is CONSCIENCE!!! Like the angel and devil on the shoulder thing. I feel like Sue has said this too many times and some people just aren't getting it... so, youkai = conscience!!! Okies, I think that is all I have to say! Totally awesome story, Sue!! And I love your new works too!!! (I cried.... o.O) I say hello to all the betas! (You guys are great...) And an extra hello to the Grammer/Literature Beta (I LOVE GRAMMER AND ENGLISH!!!! :P) Keep it up guys!!! Show no mercy to the flamers!!! (If any... I think I remember a beta who is REALLY go at scaring them away... funny insults... Grammer beta maybe?) ~Jesachi (hopefully signed in)
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Reviewed By: Descendant of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2005 19:29 EDT
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It's hard to remember that Gin is 24 but I luv her anyways!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged on On: June 08, 2005 19:28 EDT
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Gin is so nieve, its cute! lol. poor thing...not really realizing such things that come from her mouth. that's three times in the chapter i ended up with my forehead in my hand shaking it slightly. LOL. great chapter! i'm noticing the odds you placed each character with their youkai at. like ryo's sounds like kich and kich's sounds like ryo...cute and really nice touch. very well done as always. :-)
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Reviewed By: yashafan18 On: June 08, 2005 19:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter i can't believe kich saw belle ogleling and the things gin says omg and she doesn't even realize she says stuff like that any love your story update tomorrow!
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova(being lazy still) On: June 08, 2005 19:06 EDT
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great chapter...i just love the moment with gin and cain in the class, poor gin, so innocent. i also love cain's last thought....stick a fork in me; i'm done....brilliant, and so true...update asap, till then, Zirra
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Reviewed By: Andross On: June 08, 2005 18:01 EDT
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LOL LOL!! omg thats funny lol.... aww man lol you can do me later... LOL aww man sueric-sama your just as good as Rumiko Takahashi at Inuyasha.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2005 17:23 EDT
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Ah...this chapter was funny...I can't believe she said 'will you do me?' I was laughing so hard! Keep up the awesome work, I love this story!!!
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Reviewed By: pagan_sedjou [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2005 16:32 EDT
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Sue! Those last two chapters were just simply priceless! I love that Nez and Sierra were just no help to Kich. Haha! Ah, and we must not forget Gin's innocent little mouth. Oh, dear, you had me laughing so hard, my dogs were looking at me like I was insane. Sue, you rock! 10's across the board! XOXO! ~pagan_sedjou
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Title: chp.1-6
Reviewed By: anime is the best On: June 08, 2005 15:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love the Purity series. Keep up the good work. I have been laughing my head off on the funny parts.Like when Gin was dropping everything and then smacked right into Cain's chin. You have a great talent.
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Title: Yay! I'm back in the saddle!
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2005 14:59 EDT
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OMG! Gin's, "You can do me later..." I about died laughing. I used to do that chronically; double, triple, even quadruple meaning statements. And I wouldn't catch them until I said them...hearing them. *groan* And they were all very Bad! LOL - Master...oh, that's horrible. I had sudden flashbacks of "I Dream Of Jeanie" episodes with Barbera Feldon. Ginnie! LMAO!!! Ok, I'm enjoying myself way too much.
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Reviewed By: Darksquire(not logged in) On: June 08, 2005 13:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh that was fun! Hmmm... so Cain as Gin's master. Interesting. I can't wait for Cain and Inuyasha to fight! So... if Cain and Gin get married then Gin moves to America. But if Kich and Belle get married then... ? What would happen?
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Title: Chapter 18...The Moment! Yay!
Reviewed By: DawnFire881 On: June 08, 2005 13:27 EDT
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LOL Sue that moment was so perfect! It's so fun seeing that I'm not the only one who says stuff like that, even if it is in just a story, and I'm glad that at least one good thing came out of my embarrassing moment! lol, but at least my class didn't react the way that Gin's did! I'm glad that you could use my little moment, that's pretty fun! ::hugs:: Awww I just love Gin so much! LOL, I think one of my favorite comments though has got to be about the antenna...that was just priceless! I love even more that she has absolutely no clue what she's saying, though now it's rather embarrassing for her! The master thing...oh that was funny! lol, and Cain's youki is just so funny! heh, I like the interactiong between Belle and Kich- how Belle is trying to stay 'business only' but still manages to oogle a certain hanyou ;) That was cute! Anyway, I love this chapter Sue...and reading it for the first time at 6 in the morning definitely had me rolling around in fits of laughter!
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Reviewed By: futekioosha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2005 13:07 EDT
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hil-friggin-larious sue! This chapter was so funny, from the overly polite Belle to the hopelessly clueless Gin, thank you for the laughter :) I have to say you did the Gin moment perfectly, and Belle checking out Kich? That was just classic! I could never thank you enough for allowing others to get to know these characters. They truely are like good friends. ~frankie~
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Reviewed By: Wren On: June 08, 2005 12:12 EDT
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I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoy your stories. They are wonderfully written and aways give me a warm happy feeling inside. Paired with a cup of tea, they are my favorite way to start my day at the office. Thank you so much for writing them.
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Title: 17 and 18
Reviewed By: thefaeryofpurejoy(not logged in) On: June 08, 2005 11:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kich gay? roflmao. I love that! The babies sound sooo cute. I bet they have Daddy, Uncle Yasha, and Grandfather wrapped around thier sweet little claws! My fav part so far was the master comment. That was awesome!
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