| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] |
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: June 02, 2005 09:02 EDT
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Looks like Belle hasn't learned her lesson about manipulating people yet. Sigh. She shouldn't have talked Gin into buying the silk shirt. Cain and Gin would probably have been more comfortable with something they both liked instead of Belle trying to make her dad feel obligated to wear something he doesn't like. Ooh, hit a nerve with me I guess. I've been in the position of feeling obligated to wear something I was uncomfortable in and didn't like too many times. Ugh. My mom used to buy clothes for my brother that she knew he would hate. Wierd huh? Thanks for the chapter!
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Reviewed By: EAP On: June 02, 2005 02:59 EDT
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Yay, double chappie for meeeee....Dont worry about one of your betas being gone, and plaese dont stop posting! Are you trying to kill us? I'm leaving in a week for a week, I need as much P4 as I can get! *greedy* I liked both chapters, the contrast and similarities to the Gin/Cain and Kich/Belle relationships is very interesting. I quite like Bellaniece, she's really fun to read about. Please keep writing and posting, I really enjoy your stories!
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: June 02, 2005 01:53 EDT
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Gin and Belle are so cute together, shopping for Cain. Looking forward to Cain's reaction to the silk shirt from Gin. That should be nice.
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Reviewed By: Inuyoukaimama (nsi) On: June 02, 2005 01:40 EDT
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Oh my, I hope one of the Betas didn't slip their cage! (lol) Fortunately for some of us, we get so damn enthralled in your writing that we are clueless to your errors. (errors? what errors) Oh please don't tell your grammar goddess that I said that! I would hate to end up in grammar purgatory somewhere! That was pure pleasure for me! I got three chappies because we has such storms that I couldn't get on last night. Ok, just caught up on the review things that happened while I was off in Neverland. Geez, people just don't get it do they? I on the other hand am suffering from Cainitis. I love it and the character too!
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: June 02, 2005 01:06 EDT
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"...but you're missing one crucial difference between your father and Cain: your father wanted to be saved." That line really gave me the shivers. I guess it mekes me remember how desperately Inuyasha needed someone like Kagome, how incomplete he was until he found someone to love and who returned his love. Thanks for giving me something to think about. Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: btrains126 On: June 02, 2005 00:37 EDT
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Belle is being very manipulative - I can see why Kichiro says she is manipulative - even to Gin! Was that intentional? Can't Gin kick Kichiro's ass just for the hell of it? You know, like, they have a weekly fight or something and she pummels him more than usual, etc? Anyway - that's my 2 cents. Btw - Did I not check on the fic for 3 days or something - I found 3 or 4 chapters waiting for me tonight! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 00:24 EDT
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yay! 2 chapters in a day! =P thats really interesting on the research that kich is doing hah only he would think of that but i DO wonder wat cain will think of the silk white shirt...and ur grammar doesnt seem bad at all!
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Reviewed By: darksquire(not logged in) On: June 01, 2005 23:36 EDT
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oh yea... Carmi is darksquire. Forgot to log in. Ooops. Sorry.
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Title: Your story? It rocks.
Reviewed By: Carmi On: June 01, 2005 23:33 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, honestly I have read a lot of stories on Media Miner that are written by a LOT of different writers. But your's are the ones that I always like to come back to and read every time they are updated. So... keep up the good work. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Oh yea, and I think Cain is my favorite charachter out of all of the Purity charachters. I don't really know why, but he is.
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 22:22 EDT
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yay, you gave us an extra one *wipes away a small tear* i'm so happy *giggles and smile really big* great chapter update asap, and i don't think the grammer is bad, but then again i don't pay attention to that sorta thing :P. buh bye, Zirra
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Reviewed By: nerwenfaelvirin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 20:49 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Two chapters in a day, woot!!! I love it!
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Reviewed By: Crazy Fan S.S. On: June 01, 2005 20:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How I adore early chapters! O Great Sueric thank you for your kindness. I must say that out of all the Purity continuations, Purity 4 is my favorite. There is something about a double romance that I can't get enough of. Maybe it's because I rarely find good ones. I love how you spend equal amounts of time with each character. I can't help but love reading the parts where their youkai voices give their input. Sometimes I wish I had one...Although if I did have a 'voice' speaking to me, I'd probably end up wanting to smash my head in. Lol After all, who wants someone questioning their thoughts or decisions all of the time? Oh well, 'that which doesn't kill us, only makes us stronger', eh? Kudos on another excellent story AND more lovable characters. I can barely wait to read the next chapter!
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Title: Thank you! Thank you!
Reviewed By: Sensei Sunny :) On: June 01, 2005 19:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for posting that new chapter!!! I am enjoying Purity 4 so much. I look forward to seeing how the characters develop and the trouble they get into. Anyway, I am glad you submitted your new chapters. Personally, I would rather get the story sooner than wait for a beta to proof it. On another note, I am sorry that mean reviewers are hassling you again. The audacity of some of them is unbelievable. If they don't like the story, then they shouldn't read it. Whatever happened to "if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all"? I just wanted to let you know that I love all your stories and I am glad you decided to keep writing. You have a great talent for creating a whole new world for your readers. Your characters have such depth and are believable and likable. Have a great week!
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Title: Chapter 14
Reviewed By: DawnFire881 On: June 01, 2005 19:21 EDT
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oooo another chapter! heh, too bad I didn't wait to leave a review on chapter 13, now you're stuck with 2 reviews from me in one day! This chapter was so fun though! lol, I've already told you this, but I absolutely love Cain's youkai. It's so funny! Especially the part about the youkai's ass dragging even though it has no ass =p All of the characters' youkai are so amusing! I just love how you've incorporated that into the story. It's so fun! LOL and Belle was so funny, telling Cain that he wouldn't get to first base with his current wardrobe and telling Cain to think about cake fairies. She is such a great character. I love her logic for having Gin go shopping with her, even though she has something else up her sleeve! Gin and Belle are so nice together too, they seem like they click really well. And Gin is so funny when she's mad. Boy I'd love to see her lay into Kich about making Belle walk home! He would so deserve that!! heh, and saying butt instead of ass....that is just too funny and too cute. This was such a wonderful chapter filled with such fun and humor. Great job, as always, Sue! ::hugs::
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Reviewed By: Esther Tan On: June 01, 2005 18:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter!!! Oh Cain can whip Inuyasha eh? U better think again Cain!! Inuyasha still THE BEST !!! Gin is really like Kagome, no wonder Inuyasha is so protective. I guess all fathers are the same, big heroes for their daughters. I like the way Gin said that when Inuyasha can't solve the problem he at least can comfort her. Is Kagome gonna have another baby? Hope so Inuyasha is great as a father though of course big macho man or dog refuse to show it. Anyway since all their kids are big already they should have another baby (how about triplets ha ha). Seriously I hope U'll consider it. (this is just a thought as I read Purity 3 & Kagome was egging Inuyasha about it). Hey love all your chapters.
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