| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] |
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: I Love Onigiri On: May 11, 2005 20:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG! LOL! I don't usually review, because I want to hurry and read your next chapters, but this chapter completely blew me away! I love the hanyou ears, lol, and at the end when she grabbed his, omg, I couldn't breathe! It was hilarious! Another great chapter, Sue, lol, I think I'm having another laughing spraz...
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2005 18:43 EDT
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wow what a position that cain is in its probably gonna be hard for him to decide on gin when hes still torn from him past...n belle and kich lol those two are hilarious...but i've got a question....since cain is the tai-youkai of america doesnt that mean he has duties that he must attend in america since thats an important role? or does it not matter in the story? idn i just thought of it well this story is great so far!!!!
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2005 18:07 EDT
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love the chapter, great thing with Belle comparing the ears *snickers* But why is Cain's youkai trying to get him to stay away from Gin, is it because he was mated once befor? Is it really trying to get him to stay away? i don't know i must sound like an idiot, but it's hard to tell with him. well update asap, and great chappy. Zirra
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2005 17:36 EDT
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That was just sad, at what Belle said, but it was funny too. So, Cain can't keep away from Gin; Gin is either oblivious to this or just a very good actress; Belle is fancinated with Kich; and Kich...I don't...lost my train of thought. Awesome story though!!
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Reviewed By: kamackie21(nsi) On: May 11, 2005 17:28 EDT
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Wow....poor Cain and poor Gin. I love how their angst is offset by Kich and Belle's goofiness. I love how Belle met Ryo...Sue you have me falling out of chairs laughing lately. Awesome awesome chapter.
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 23:32 EDT
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omg HOW SWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEET!!!! awww those two are meant for each other...!!! but i have a feeling that cains past mate may get in the way *sigh* all these things are what keeps all your purity couples apart but without that i guess there wouldnt be a story now would there!!?? ha at least they always end up together!! im luvin the story!!!!
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 17:54 EDT
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yeah you updated, i love the chapter, it's great how cain is always fighting with his youkai, I've loved that about all your stories, the little interactions between the characters and themselves albiet their inner selves...i don't htink i spelt albiet right...oh well. great chappy, update asap please, Zirra
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Title: Bring on teh fluff!
Reviewed By: futekioosha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 15:01 EDT
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this was a really nice chapter sue. Gin and Cain are really cute together. What I really liked is the attention to detail and you making the situation more real by making Gin's cake less than perfect, but made with perfect intentions. I love it, luff it, lub it! Always your adoring fan. ~T. Frankenballz~ *snickers*
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: May 04, 2005 12:03 EDT
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Gin is so cute!! How can Cain NOT notice her. She has lead such a sheltered life. I just love'em!
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Reviewed By: scorpia86 On: May 04, 2005 11:55 EDT
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That was a really cute, fun chapter. I was really depressed today, and i started reading this chapter i couldn't help but smile.It's really something that you find yourself in the situations that you try to avoid and end up enjoying it.I like Gin's character very much, she is innocent and kind like Kagome but she can kick your ass if you cross her, like Inuyasha. Thanks again, looking forward to the nexy chapter
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Reviewed By: pagan_sedjou [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 11:40 EDT
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Okay! Got it! My finals-addled brain was confused for a bit. Thank you for reminding that I myself have a brain. And on the fanfiction note... poor Gin! Well her day just kept getting better and better! And what makes Cain think she's dangerous? She's just so... innocent and cute! Anyway, she's my favorite 'Purity' character. Once again, a flawless post! XOXO! pagan_sedjou
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Reviewed By: rage2velvet [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 10:47 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This latest update was a teaser for what is to come. I truly enjoyed the interaction between the characters. Cain is a goner! How can anyone resist a young woman who made a cake in a sauce pan?? Despite himself (and his youkai) he STILL invited her to go running with him. And what did he do (or thinks he did to his mate?)-I can't believe he harmed her-he's not that kind of person-I believe he THINKS he did something to cause her to die. Poor Cain. And now I'm dying to know why Belle has a headache? hmmm... Thanks for the update. Looking forward to more to come!
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Reviewed By: CJ Finnegan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 02:04 EDT
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Gin ... is ... ADORABLE. Just thought you should know that.:D
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 01:25 EDT
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That would be the ultimate bad karma day. though, 11 o clock is still technically the same day, so things weren't that bad. Cakes are interesting things. Sometimes they look great, sometimes they just don't. in theory, if Gin left windows open, couldn't she have pulled a window entry? i know people who have lived in big cities, and they have done it. (using fire escapes) Great chapter. Finally on to the first names. its a good first step.
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Reviewed By: Wolf's Rain Kagome On: May 04, 2005 00:51 EDT
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I am in love with Gin already. I do have one question about her though: How exactly would you pronounce her name? Gin with a 'J' sound or Gin with a 'G' sound? Or something completely different? I hope that makes sense....anyways, I would just like to know for my own picky reasons. ;) ^.^ Great chapter, I can't wait for another update on P3 or P4... keep up the great work! Thanks!
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