| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] |
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: May 04, 2005 00:18 EDT
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I'm amazed you're able to keep several high quality stories progressing at the same time. I am in awe. Thanks for another great chapter. Somehow you always manage to draw me into your stories and keep me on the edge of my seat waiting for the next update. Thank you.
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Reviewed By: PrncessS (not logged in) On: May 04, 2005 00:18 EDT
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Aww, so cute! ^_^ Thanks for updating!
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Reviewed By: Terrasina Dragonwagon, who won't get yelled at by MM again because I'm adding all this junk... On: May 04, 2005 00:12 EDT
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Oh, YAY. ^____^ I think I may like Cain and Gin more than Nezumi. They're both just so adorable.
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Title: It's all about those puppy-ears...
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2005 22:56 EDT
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...topping off an enticing and entrancing female hanyou called Gin. Even Cain is not immune to her charms. She so takes after her mother, innocently winsome and openly affectionate. Her generous nature just might be the balm for Cain's lonliness. Now if we can just keep him from fretting about how 'young' she is. I've come to believe, that once you are an adult, you are one. It removes you from the 'adolescent' and 'teenager' bracket. A young adult has hopefully been guided and educated well enough to make wise descisions for themselves (I've seen too many 'adults' that will never be more than overgrown children through their own stubborness) the only thing they lack is actual experience. Even if Cain cannot or will not allow himself to have feelings for another (heaven forbid!) maybe he could at least let himself have a friend. That's safe...isn't it? *smirking wink*
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Reviewed By: hanyouwings21 On: May 03, 2005 22:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...wow...you never cease to amaze me. The finite details that create the characters, the raw emotion emitted from each of them, and the illusion of the story, if not for the presence of typed words, would be tangible and in every sense real. I have read a lot of fanfics... probably way too many to be perfectly honest... but I recognize extraordinary talent when I see it. You are one of the most gifted writers I have ever come across, and like I have said, I have come across a lot. The very fact that I am reviewing says something, because I never review unless I am thoroughly impressed. I have read all your stories (luckily I don't have a life, so I've had time to do this ^_^), and I check my email every day to see if you have updated Purity 3 or Purity 4. Your stories have a sense of realism that most authors strive but never achieve. For heaven's sake, I have bawled my eyes out on more than one occasion, and had that nervous churning of worry in the pit of my stomach for the outcome of some of the characters in every one of your fics! You are flat out amazing, end of story! I want to thankyou for posting your stories and allowing us to read and enjoy them. Furthermore, if any pompous asshole decides to flame you or give any discredit whatsoever,give me their email address ...Ja ne!!! ~laurabeth a.k.a. hanyouwings21
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Reviewed By: RadiosNmyHead [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2005 21:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*giggles girlishly*
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: May 03, 2005 20:45 EDT
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Oh how lovely this is! I find myself falling in love with these new characters. I just cannot seen to get passed the fact that I love the name, "Cain." hehehehe. Verrry interesting developments we have going on here. I was half expecting Inuyasha to be in his forest and to catch her out with this other male. Oh poor Gin, I have the feeling that something of this magnitude just might happen in the future, haha. Fabulous chapter, I love what you are doing with this story, and, as always, I cannot wait for more! Ou, and that engery thing that Cain did. Very neat-o, haha.
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Reviewed By: Kesstral (notsignedin) On: May 03, 2005 19:52 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh, and having your prof invite you for a jog in the middle of the night isn't unusual at all! Lol, it was nice though. Aww.. he's just perfect, having an energy form and living right next door! Well.. for rescuing her that is. It really does suck to lock yourself out, although for me it was having my parents turn on the alarm when i didn't have a key (old fashioned alarm) and the alarm going off and be freaking out really really badly. Oh, and how long can Cain leave America? Since he is the tai-youkai there, doesn't he have some responsibilities? I'm assuming that he'll need to return eventually... omigosh does that mean that Gin would LEAVE! Haha, imagining the freak out inuyasha would have at that concept. Not only would his precious baby girl be getting married (taking a rather un-risky chance here) but she'd be thousands of miles away! Hmm.. sensing conflict here. Muaha.
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Reviewed By: pagan_sedjou [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2005 22:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, Sue. This was a great post. I love this story. I was waiting for a Gin story. And as a comment on this chapter, poor Gin! What a way to start the day. Cracking the cute guy in the jaw with your head. Ouch! Oh, on a side note, how exactly do you pronounce "Gin"? Gin like "gin and tonic" or with the hard 'g' like in the Japanese? Just curious. My brain tries to divide English and Japanese pronunciation. Just a random thought.
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Reviewed By: Kittycat78 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2005 19:34 EDT
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Wow your story is really good. In fact all of the Purity fics are good. S keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: CJ Finnegan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2005 04:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just finished the most recent chapters. Gin's little "boo-boos" and Kich's mental conversation with his youkai were very funny. I'm definitely enjoying this one, Sue. :D
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Reviewed By: foamyfan15010 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2005 23:35 EDT
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Very interesting chapter. I loved Cain's interpretation of Gin's artwork. I completely agree. :o) Oh and Ryo's youki? HILARIOUS!!! I love his swear word! Oh Balls! LOL
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Title: I'm in love
Reviewed By: rage2velvet [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2005 13:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say? I am IN LOVE with this story. I loved the story of Toga and Sierra very , very much. Toga is one of my fav orig characters in this series, and Sierra is a doll. But Gin is magic, too. I really, really like her and there is a lot to her that I am anticipating. Cain is leaving me breathless. I think I have a crush :-). And his daughter. OMG! She is spirited and lovely and I can't wait to see her put Kich thru the paces. She is perfect for him. I think she has brains and looks (I'm smitten with the daughter/father dynamic too). Darn. I am plain smitten with this story. And of course the angst to come with the relationships! And Gin is Cain's student AND his TA?? And Belle works for Kich and is related to Gin (his baby sister that NO man is good enough for!) I'm dying for the sparks! I think I am way too worked up over the excitement I feel-but this is one of my absolute fav stories and I'm gushing of course, but thank you and thank you and thank you-for writing this. It's a story that makes me excited and filled with anticipation just reading it! Looking forward to the next update! Thanks for updating so soon!
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Reviewed By: spookeymelichan (not loged in ) On: April 29, 2005 02:13 EDT
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OH BALLS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH AHAHAHAHAHA
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2005 01:03 EDT
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great chappy, too many things that were wonderful to list 'em, it take all night so i'll just say again, great chappy. well update any story asap pretty please, and keep up the great work(as if you would disapoint:D) well 'till next time, Zirra
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