| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] |
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2005 01:03 EDT
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great chappy, too many things that were wonderful to list 'em, it take all night so i'll just say again, great chappy. well update any story asap pretty please, and keep up the great work(as if you would disapoint:D) well 'till next time, Zirra
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Reviewed By: kesstral (not signed in On: April 28, 2005 23:57 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Lol, does youkai actually come and say "I choose her!" or does it need to convince the.. er.. host(?) of the choice first? Cuz I think it would be funny if Kich's youkai said, "I want her" when he was still all indifferent. And I think I've said this before, but this really makes me think of the Lucky Ones. I'm trying to imply anything bad by that. I really liked what she had done with her story, and I like your continuation and the deep developement of the characters. For example, the plastic surgery job for kich was very well thought out. An image that just came to mind was of a family tree where each name was a link and if you clicked on it you got to read their story. All of it would blend together to be the story of a happy and loving family. Haha, and back to youkai.. I'd be interested in a peek into Sess's brain... and his youkai.. I know there was something about him in metamorphosis... but there's gotta be something good in his cool exterior and potential burning hot interior. hmmm...
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Reviewed By: AkuPhoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 23:10 EDT
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I really enjoy how in all of your stories, all of the boys talk to the conscience, the youkai right? Cain is funny but I would say Kichiro is the best hehe. I almost squeled when I saw that Cain was from Maine. I am a dork when it comes to Maine, I attend university in Maine and have quite a bit of family there. I can just see Cain, the artistic side, sitting on a porch overlooking the beautiful rocky coast or in the forest. I do love Maine, sorry I am rambling. A question, Cain says that Gin is just a pup in a woman's body, sheltered, and I know that she is 24 now, is it more Inuyasha who is protective over her, or everyone?
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged in On: April 28, 2005 19:55 EDT
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hmm...very interesting developments you have going on here. i love cain's character, he's awesome. i'm really looking forward to seeing where you take his character. i think it's great how Yash's response about Gin dating was that she would need to find a guy who could kick his ass...why am i seeing scenes of that already? HMM...if this guy is like fluffykins.... the kich and belle thing is also interesting. maybe he'll get his wish of mating a hanyou then (hehe) but i guess we shall see. i'm a little thrown by belle's personality. never quite know what to expect, and it's refreshing really. a great character trait. very well done (as always). i love how kich snapped at her over it...just like another hanyou we all know and love. (why do i see Ryo with inuyasha's actions and kich with his mouth? (the baka disease i mean). LOL. great job sue, keep it up!!!!
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Reviewed By: serendith (NSI) On: April 28, 2005 19:41 EDT
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Just wow... I hope you realize how great your writing is because ... wow. Your characters have such life ... and you used the word "sashayed". *grin* Seriously.
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 19:24 EDT
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haha i like kich's youkai side lmaoooo well things seemed to have started a bit off between cain and gin and between kich and belle looool but it seems to be going well but i noticed that the age difference is kinda BIG but that doesnt really matter in the youkai world i think well newayzz i luv the story so far!!
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 19:16 EDT
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Hehe, I would have to say that all four of our main characters were extremely uncomfortable today. Inner voices abounded and stole the show. As calm and experienced Cain is, he had quite the randy thoughts running rampant through his head and Gin's clumsy shyness was adorable. Cain going to find her hard to resist. Kich's youkai was also enthusiastically candid, an interesting balance to Kichiro's more serious attitude. The "long-term relationship" comment certainly scared the liver out of him. Hehe, both of these lovely male specemins better hang onto their socks or they'll be knocked clear off. (Is it so very wrong of me to look forward to all of the turmoil promised? *thinks for a second and shakes head* Nah!) Well Sue, you've really got the 'balls' rolling! LOL
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 18:23 EDT
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Kich's youkai is funny. I love the little conflicts that you do between the actual character and their youkai...it makes the story even better. Wow, this is going to be weird; If Gin gets mated with Cain, what will Kich do? And vice-versa as well. It'd be a little weird, but in youkai relations does it matter?
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Reviewed By: Katamari Damashii [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 17:31 EDT
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"Final Thought from Kichiro's Youkai: Seriously, Kich … Did you see her rack?" I'm going to die laughing. This is my favorite "final thought", EVER.
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Title: uh ohhh
Reviewed By: adamile [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 19:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
why am I not surprised that the teaching assistant position may be the one that Gin is an assistant to Cain.lol Oh my my sue is this going to be an old demon that is equivalent to a human man in his late 30's early 40's and a 24ish young woman romance? ( I think they call that an september/may romance or something like that). Boy oh boy can't wait to see daddy Inu's reaction to that! lol and good ole respondsible "I am in control" Kiche seems to be also in the denial mode as well with his feelings toward Belle. I cant wait until Belle finds out abt Gin and Cain's attraction to her. I wonder what daddy's little seventeen yr old girl is going to say about that romance! Woo hoo you sure know how to make them thar fics juicy. lol ha ha lol. keep em coming sue cant wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: April 26, 2005 23:03 EDT
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bawhahahaha... InuYasha got Lots of good news didn't he?? Gin's moving out, and he IS going to have another 'pup' Kagome will see to that!! LOL. She has her sneaky-wench ways!! mawhahaha!! Kich - he's gonna get blindsided, and Cain is to cute for words.. Gin is already stuck in his head, and she's his assistant? I think I read that right... **more evil laughter** mawhahahaha! Looks like you have all your players where you want them. I even love the Ryo & Nez wrench tossing-Hentai-shouting... to good!! I'll try not to go all obsessive on the checking e-mail thing looking for updates... I'll just work. (yeah, that's it, I'll work)
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Title: woo hoo!
Reviewed By: chichiwvu(NSI) On: April 26, 2005 08:34 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well well well... I've not had the opportunity to read P3, but in my break yesterday i read this, very enjoyable so far sue! thanks for sharing your work, we all appreciated it:)
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Title: excitement
Reviewed By: rage2velvet [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2005 17:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm nothing but excitement. Looking forward to whatever happnes next. Truly love the father/daughter dynamic between Caine and Belle (reminds me of the one my dad and I had). Poor Caine! He's feeling a spark to go on living and yet guilt b/c his mate is gone. It would be awesome if Inuyasha and Kagome have more children- a hanyou little one with miko powers would be something! Oh and Sess will be jealous if they do! But he's gonna be a grandpa soon so maybe not? Great job to all the betas as well and of course to you Sue for your hard work and diligence!
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Reviewed By: scorpia86 On: April 25, 2005 17:02 EDT
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Lovely chapter as always. Just one question, in the context of your Purtiy series, can a demon have a mate after the another one has died? If so does that mean that the demon in question won't die because he found a new mate
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: April 25, 2005 08:54 EDT
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Another great chapter. Poor Inuyasha, his pups are all growing up and moving away.
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